Re: [glob2-devel] Globulation Lore v1.0

[Stéphane Magnenat]

Hi,

I finally got time to read the lore entierly. In general I like it very much. 
In details I have some remarks:
- In the end, I have the feeling that we insist too much on war,
- If we want to make parts of it in the game, maybe citations (I like the 
idea); I would slightly change the name of some of the heros of the Lore to 
female names. That would be more fair, would probably help to attract female 
players to glob2, and make it a bit more original. I would also consider 
changing A.D. to C.E. (Common Era) in the dates because it is more abstract, 
and works better for a Sci-Fi setup IMHO.
- If we want to integrate it into the game, it would probably be good to be 
able to edit it, for instance to do typos corrections. Do you want to upload 
it to the hg repository? Do you prefer working on the Wiki?

Thank you very much for your great work,

Have a nice day,

Steph

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