www/philosophy words-to-avoid.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       12/09/25 09:44:00

Modified files:
        philosophy     : words-to-avoid.html 

Log message:
        Minor cleanup.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.147&r2=1.148

Patches:
Index: words-to-avoid.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html,v
retrieving revision 1.147
retrieving revision 1.148
diff -u -b -r1.147 -r1.148
--- words-to-avoid.html 20 Sep 2012 12:54:23 -0000      1.147
+++ words-to-avoid.html 25 Sep 2012 09:43:39 -0000      1.148
@@ -333,10 +333,10 @@
 locks&rdquo;.</p>
 <p>
 A number of campaigns have chosen the unwise term &ldquo;digital
-locks&rdquo;; therefore, to correct the mistake, we must work firmly
-against it.  We may support a campaign that criticizes &ldquo;digital
-locks&rdquo;, because we might agree with the substance; but when we
-do, we always state our rejection of that term and conspicuously say
+locks&rdquo;; therefore, to correct the mistake, we must firmly reject
+the term.  We sometimes support a campaign that criticizes
+&ldquo;digital locks&rdquo;, if we agree with the substance; but when
+we do, we state our rejection of that term, and conspicuously say
 &ldquo;digital handcuffs&rdquo; so as to set a better example.</p>
 
 
@@ -790,7 +790,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2012/09/20 12:54:23 $
+$Date: 2012/09/25 09:43:39 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>