www/server/staging/proprietary proprietary-addi...

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 19/11/15 11:45:05

Modified files:
        server/staging/proprietary: proprietary-addictions.html 

Log message:
        New version of the introductory paragraph (RMS www-discuss 2019-11-14).

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/proprietary/proprietary-addictions.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.6&r2=1.7

Patches:
Index: proprietary-addictions.html
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/webcvs/www/www/server/staging/proprietary/proprietary-addictions.html,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -b -r1.6 -r1.7
--- proprietary-addictions.html 15 Nov 2019 15:24:24 -0000      1.6
+++ proprietary-addictions.html 15 Nov 2019 16:45:05 -0000      1.7
@@ -41,12 +41,9 @@
 </div>
 
 <div id="about-page">
-<p>Here are instances of proprietary programs that add addictive
-functionality to lure users into using it perpetually. Some of these
-programs also <a
-href="https://www.intelligenteconomist.com/economics-of-microtransactions";>
-trick users into paying real money</a> for unlocking features of alleged
-value.</p>
+<p>This page deals with malicious functionalities that are added to
+some programs for the sole purpose of luring users into more and more
+frequent use of the program, with the risk of getting addicted.</p>
 </div>
 
 <div class="important">
@@ -322,7 +319,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2019/11/15 15:24:24 $
+$Date: 2019/11/15 16:45:05 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>