www/server/staging/proprietary proprietary-addi...

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 19/11/13 12:44:27

Modified files:
        server/staging/proprietary: proprietary-addictions.html 

Log message:
        Rewording.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/proprietary/proprietary-addictions.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.3&r2=1.4

Patches:
Index: proprietary-addictions.html
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RCS file: 
/webcvs/www/www/server/staging/proprietary/proprietary-addictions.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -b -r1.3 -r1.4
--- proprietary-addictions.html 13 Nov 2019 16:33:59 -0000      1.3
+++ proprietary-addictions.html 13 Nov 2019 17:44:27 -0000      1.4
@@ -209,10 +209,10 @@
       
href="https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/reading-between-the-headlines/201307/smartphone-addiction";>
       addictiveness of &ldquo;smart&rdquo; phones</a>.</li>
 
-      <li>The app is loaded with JavaScript that is largely used to <a
+      <li>Users are served selected material that is likely to interest
+      them, based on <a
       
href="https://theconversation.com/facebook-is-killing-democracy-with-its-personality-profiling-data-93611";>
-      profile users</a>, in order to show them selected material that is
-      likely to interest them. (This paves the way to <a
+      profiling</a>. (This paves the way to <a
       href="/proprietary/proprietary-manipulation.html">manipulation</a>,
       by the way.)</li>
 
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2019/11/13 16:33:59 $
+$Date: 2019/11/13 17:44:27 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>