www/education remote-education-children-freedom...

[Dora Scilipoti]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Dora Scilipoti <dora>   20/06/25 06:39:59

Modified files:
        education      : 
                         
remote-education-children-freedom-privacy-at-stake.html 

Log message:
        Fine-tune language (thanks, Therese.)

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/education/remote-education-children-freedom-privacy-at-stake.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.1&r2=1.2

Patches:
Index: remote-education-children-freedom-privacy-at-stake.html
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RCS file: 
/web/www/www/education/remote-education-children-freedom-privacy-at-stake.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -b -r1.1 -r1.2
--- remote-education-children-freedom-privacy-at-stake.html     25 Jun 2020 
09:51:49 -0000      1.1
+++ remote-education-children-freedom-privacy-at-stake.html     25 Jun 2020 
10:39:59 -0000      1.2
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
 
 <h3>The third step</h3>
 
-<p>In the meantime, after two weeks of staying indoors, Javi was 
+<p>In the meantime, after two weeks of staying at home, Javi was 
 taking his trumpet classes over Skype. At the next lesson, I sat next 
 to my son and spoke to the teacher. I began by thanking him for his 
 work, since Javi was making progress despite the difficult situation. 
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2020/06/25 09:51:49 $
+$Date: 2020/06/25 10:39:59 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>