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Subject: www/philosophy/po right-to-read.ar.po right-to-...
Date: Tue, 18 Oct 2016 11:00:38 +0000 (UTC)

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     GNUN <gnun>     16/10/18 11:00:37

Modified files:
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                         right-to-read.ca.po right-to-read.cs-diff.html 
                         right-to-read.cs.po right-to-read.de.po 
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                         surveillance-vs-democracy.pt-br.po 
                         surveillance-vs-democracy.ru.po 
                         surveillance-vs-democracy.sq.po 
                         surveillance-vs-democracy.uk.po 

Log message:
        Automatic update by GNUnited Nations.

CVSWeb URLs:
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http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/right-to-read.bg.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.51&r2=1.52
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http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/right-to-read.el-diff.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.10&r2=1.11
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http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/right-to-read.es.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.43&r2=1.44
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http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/right-to-read.pl-diff.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.10&r2=1.11
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/right-to-read.pl.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.46&r2=1.47
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http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/surveillance-vs-democracy.nl.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.10&r2=1.11
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/surveillance-vs-democracy.pot?cvsroot=www&r1=1.28&r2=1.29
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/surveillance-vs-democracy.pt-br.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.5&r2=1.6
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/surveillance-vs-democracy.ru.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.51&r2=1.52
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/surveillance-vs-democracy.sq.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.52&r2=1.53
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/surveillance-vs-democracy.uk.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.43&r2=1.44

Patches:
Index: right-to-read.ar.po
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/po/right-to-read.ar.po,v
retrieving revision 1.52
retrieving revision 1.53
diff -u -b -r1.52 -r1.53
--- right-to-read.ar.po 15 Sep 2016 12:00:34 -0000      1.52
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Index: right-to-read.bg.po
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/po/right-to-read.bg.po,v
retrieving revision 1.51
retrieving revision 1.52
diff -u -b -r1.51 -r1.52
--- right-to-read.bg.po 15 Sep 2016 12:00:34 -0000      1.51
+++ right-to-read.bg.po 18 Oct 2016 11:00:35 -0000      1.52
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+users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.  Of course, Windows
+10 is no better&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 One of the ideas in the story was not proposed in reality until 2002.
@@ -382,20 +389,20 @@
 &lt;h3 id="BadNews"&gt;Bad News&lt;/h3&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-The battle for the right to read is already in progress,
-The enemy is organized, while we are not, so it is going against us.
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>Here are articles about bad things that 
have happened since the
+The battle for the right to read is <span class="removed"><del><strong>already 
in progress,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>going 
against us so far.</em></ins></span>
+The enemy is organized, <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>while</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>and</em></ins></span> we are <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>not, so it is going against us.
+Here are articles about bad things that have happened since the
 original publication of this article.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>not.
+&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial
-ebooks &lt;a href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
+&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>ebooks</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>e-books</em></ins></span> &lt;a 
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 readers' traditional <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>freedoms.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nature.com/nature_education/biology.html"&gt;
-     A "biology textbook" web site&lt;/a&gt; that you</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>freedoms&lt;/a&gt;.  Amazon's e-book reader 
product,
+     A "biology textbook" web site&lt;/a&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>freedoms&lt;/a&gt;.  Amazon's e-book reader product,
 which I call the &ldquo;Amazon Swindle&rdquo; because it's designed to
 swindle readers out of the traditional freedoms of readers of books,
 is run by software with several
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 sharing copies.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 
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class="removed"><del><strong>signing</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>George Orwell.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It has a back door with which Amazon can remotely erase any 
book.
+In 2009, it erased thousands of copies of 1984, by George 
Orwell.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 
-&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;In case all that isn't Orwellian enough, there 
is</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;a 
href="http://www.nature.com/principles/viewTermsOfUse"&gt;
-     contract not to lend it to anyone else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> 
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-&lt;li&gt;&lt;a 
href="http://www.zdnet.com/news/seybold-opens-chapter-on-digital-books/103151"&gt;Electronic
-     Publishing:&lt;/a&gt; An article about distribution</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>remotely change the software, and
-introduce any other form</em></ins></span> of <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>books in
-     electronic form,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>nastiness.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;In case all that isn't Orwellian enough, there is a 
universal
+back door with which Amazon can remotely change the software, and
+introduce any other form of nastiness.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;/ul&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;Amazon's e-book distribution is oppressive, too.  It identifies the
-user</em></ins></span> and <span class="removed"><del><strong>copyright issues 
affecting</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>records what 
books</em></ins></span> the <span 
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class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies
-with others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
+user and records what books the user obtains.  It also requires users
+to agree to an antisocial contract</em></ins></span> that <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>you can access only by 
signing</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>they won't share 
copies with
+others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;a 
href="http://www.nature.com/principles/viewTermsOfUse"&gt;
+     contract not</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>contract, the lesser evil would 
be</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>lend</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>defy</em></ins></span> it <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>and share copies anyway;
+however,</em></ins></span> to <span class="removed"><del><strong>anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;, which the publisher can
+     revoke at will.&lt;/li&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;&lt;a 
href="http://www.zdnet.com/news/seybold-opens-chapter-on-digital-books/103151"&gt;Electronic
+     Publishing:&lt;/a&gt; An article about distribution of 
books</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>be entirely good, I 
should not agree to it</em></ins></span> in
+     <span class="removed"><del><strong>electronic form, and copyright issues 
affecting</strong></del></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>right</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>first
+place.  Therefore, I refuse</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>read
+     a copy.&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a 
href="http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/1999/Aug99/SeyboldPR.aspx"&gt;Books
-     inside Computers:&lt;/a&gt; Software</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>contract, the lesser evil would 
be</em></ins></span> to <span class="removed"><del><strong>control who can read
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-anyway; however, to be entirely good, we should not agree to it in the
-first place.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+     inside Computers:&lt;/a&gt; Software</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>control who can read
+     books and documents on a PC.&lt;/li&gt;
+&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>such 
contracts, whether for
+software, for e-books, for music, or for anything 
else.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;If we want to stop the bad news and create some good news, we need
-to organize and fight.  The
+to organize and fight.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>The</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Subscribe to the</em></ins></span>
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mailing
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-the FSF&lt;/a&gt; to help fund our work.
+campaign <span class="removed"><del><strong>has made a start &mdash; subscribe 
to the campaign's mailing
+list</strong></del></span> to lend a hand.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>And</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>You
+can</em></ins></span> &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join the 
FSF&lt;/a&gt; to <span class="removed"><del><strong>help 
fund</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>support
+our work more generally.  There is also a &lt;a href="/help"&gt;list of ways
+to participate in</em></ins></span> our <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>work.</strong></del></span> <span 
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 &lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;h3 id="References"&gt;References&lt;/h3&gt;
@@ -567,7 +578,7 @@
 
 &lt;p class="unprintable"&gt;Updated:</em></ins></span>
 &lt;!-- timestamp start --&gt;
-$Date: 2016/09/15 12:00:34 $
+$Date: 2016/10/18 11:00:35 $
 &lt;!-- timestamp end --&gt;
 &lt;/p&gt;
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id="AuthorsNote"&gt;Author's</strong></del></span>
 
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;blockquote 
class="announcement"&gt;&lt;p&gt;
-&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our mailing list
-about the dangers of eBooks&lt;/a&gt;.
-&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;div class="announcement"&gt;
+&lt;blockquote&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our 
mailing list about the dangers of e-books&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;/blockquote&gt;
+&lt;/div&gt;
 
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 &lt;h3&gt;Author's</em></ins></span> Notes&lt;/h3&gt;
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 Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.  We ask for your support.&lt;/p&gt;
 &lt;/li&gt;
 
+&lt;li&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;The Electronic Frontier Foundation, a separate organization not
+related to the Free Software Foundation, also campaigns against
+DRM.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;/li&gt;
+
 &lt;li&gt;</em></ins></span>
 &lt;p&gt;The following note has been updated several times since the first
 publication of the story.&lt;/p&gt;
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 &lt;p&gt;
 In 2001 the</strong></del></span> US <span class="removed"><del><strong>began 
attempting to use the proposed Free Trade Area of
-the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
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<span class="removed"><del><strong>Western Hemisphere.  The FTAA is 
one</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>rest</em></ins></span> of the <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>world through</em></ins></span>
+the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>campaigns</em></ins></span> to impose <span 
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class="inserted"><ins><em>such</em></ins></span> rules on <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>all</strong></del></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>countries in
+the Western Hemisphere.  The FTAA is one</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>rest</em></ins></span> of the <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>world through</em></ins></span>
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class="inserted"><ins><em>&ldquo;free trade&rdquo; treaties.
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 countries on the Pacific Ocean.  The TTIP would impose similar
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<span class="removed"><del><strong>2003.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
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-downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
-run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
-users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.&lt;/p&gt;
+strictures on Europe.  All these treaties must be defeated, or
+abolished.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 Even the World Wide Web Consortium has fallen under the shadow of the
@@ -284,10 +283,19 @@
 
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 Nonfree software tends to have &lt;a href="/proprietary/"&gt;abusive
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+features of many kinds&lt;/a&gt;, which lead to the conclusion that
 &lt;a href="/philosophy/free-software-even-more-important.html"&gt;you can
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+software only, and reject nonfree programs.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;
+With Windows Vista, Microsoft admitted it had built</em></ins></span> in <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>2003.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>a back door:
+Microsoft can use it to forcibly install software
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+downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
+run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
+users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.  Of course, Windows
+10 is no better&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 One of the ideas in the story was not proposed in reality until 2002.
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when asked: it
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class="inserted"><ins><em>href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
-the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to 
exploit.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+have established</strong></del></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;a href="http://DefectiveByDesign.org"&gt;
+Defective by Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>FBI when asked: it
+already &lt;a href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
+the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to exploit.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>Secure boot can be implemented in a way that 
permits the user to
+Secure boot can be implemented in a way that permits the user to
 specify the signature key and decide what software to sign.  In
 practice, PCs designed for Windows 10 carry only Microsoft's key, and
 whether the machine's owner can install any other system (such as
 GNU/Linux) is under Microsoft's control.  We call this &lt;em&gt;restricted
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+boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
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class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was 
first <span class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
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class="inserted"><ins><em>could not</em></ins></span> afford to fight back in 
court.  One
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 &lt;h3 id="BadNews"&gt;Bad News&lt;/h3&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-The battle for the right to read is already in progress,
-The enemy is organized, while we are not, so it is going against us.
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>Here are articles about bad things that 
have happened since the
+The battle for the right to read is <span class="removed"><del><strong>already 
in progress,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>going 
against us so far.</em></ins></span>
+The enemy is organized, <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>while</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>and</em></ins></span> we are <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>not, so it is going against us.
+Here are articles about bad things that have happened since the
 original publication of this article.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>not.
+&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial
-ebooks &lt;a href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
+&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>ebooks</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>e-books</em></ins></span> &lt;a 
href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
 readers' traditional <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>freedoms.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
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only</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>freedoms&lt;/a&gt;.  
Amazon's e-book reader product,
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reports when the user highlights
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<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>reports 
which book the
+user is reading, and</em></ins></span> which <span 
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class="removed"><del><strong>publisher</strong></del></span> <span 
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-$Date: 2016/09/15 12:00:34 $
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-&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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+&lt;blockquote&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our 
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+&lt;/blockquote&gt;
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+&lt;p&gt;The Electronic Frontier Foundation, a separate organization not
+related to the Free Software Foundation, also campaigns against
+DRM.&lt;/p&gt;
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+
+&lt;li&gt;
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since the first
 publication of the <span 
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European
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class="removed"><del><strong>2006, mere possession of a copy of DeCSS, the free 
program
-to decrypt video on</strong></del></span> a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>DVD, is a crime.&lt;/p&gt;
+to decrypt video on a DVD, is a crime.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 In 2001, Disney-funded Senator Hollings proposed a bill called the
 SSSCA that would require every new computer to have mandatory
 copy-restriction facilities that the user cannot bypass.  Following
 the Clipper chip and similar US government key-escrow proposals, this
-shows a long-term trend: computer systems are increasingly set up to
+shows</strong></del></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>long-term 
trend: computer systems are increasingly set up to
 give absentees with clout control over the people actually using the
 computer system.  The SSSCA was later renamed to the unpronounceable
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class="inserted"><ins><em>rest</em></ins></span> of the <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>world through</em></ins></span>
+the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
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+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>states.</em></ins></span>  The <span 
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policy</em></ins></span> of <span class="removed"><del><strong>Brazil, who 
rejected the DMCA requirement and
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+strictures on Europe.  All these treaties must be defeated, or
+abolished.&lt;/p&gt;
 
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-Even the World Wide Web Consortium has fallen under the shadow of the
+Even</em></ins></span> the <span 
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+features of many kinds&lt;/a&gt;, which lead to the conclusion that
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+software only, and reject nonfree programs.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;
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+downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
+run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
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 &lt;p&gt;
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+already &lt;a href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
+the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to exploit.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>Secure boot can be implemented in a way that 
permits the user to
+Secure boot can be implemented in a way that permits the user to
 specify the signature key and decide what software to sign.  In
 practice, PCs designed for Windows 10 carry only Microsoft's key, and
 whether the machine's owner can install any other system (such as
 GNU/Linux) is under Microsoft's control.  We call this &lt;em&gt;restricted
-boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was first <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was 
first <span class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
 threatening small Internet service providers, demanding they permit
 the SPA to monitor all users.  Most ISPs surrendered when
 threatened, because they <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>cannot</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>could not</em></ins></span> afford to fight back in 
court.  One
@@ -385,17 +391,17 @@
 &lt;h3 id="BadNews"&gt;Bad News&lt;/h3&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-The battle for the right to read is already in progress,
-The enemy is organized, while we are not, so it is going against us.
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>Here are articles about bad things that 
have happened since the
+The battle for the right to read is <span class="removed"><del><strong>already 
in progress,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>going 
against us so far.</em></ins></span>
+The enemy is organized, <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>while</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>and</em></ins></span> we are <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>not, so it is going against us.
+Here are articles about bad things that have happened since the
 original publication of this article.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>not.
+&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial
-ebooks &lt;a href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
+&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>ebooks</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>e-books</em></ins></span> &lt;a 
href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
 readers' traditional <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>freedoms.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
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      A "biology textbook" web site&lt;/a&gt; that you can access 
only</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>freedoms&lt;/a&gt;.  
Amazon's e-book reader product,
@@ -409,8 +415,8 @@
 completely:&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It spies on everything the user does:</em></ins></span> it 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
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class="inserted"><ins><em>reports</em></ins></span> which <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>book the
-user is reading, and which page, and it reports when the user highlights
+&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It spies on everything the user does:</em></ins></span> it 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>reports 
which book the
+user is reading, and</em></ins></span> which <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>page, and it reports when the user highlights
 text, and any notes</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>publisher</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>user enters.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It has DRM, which is intended to block users from
@@ -429,23 +435,26 @@
 &lt;/ul&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;Amazon's e-book distribution is oppressive, too.  It 
identifies</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>right</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user and records what books the user obtains.  
It also requires
-users</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>read</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies
-with others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user and records what books the user obtains.  
It also requires users</em></ins></span>
+to <span class="removed"><del><strong>read</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies with
+others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a 
href="http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/1999/Aug99/SeyboldPR.aspx"&gt;Books
      inside Computers:&lt;/a&gt; Software</strong></del></span>
 <span class="inserted"><ins><em>contract, the lesser evil would 
be</em></ins></span> to <span class="removed"><del><strong>control who can read
      books</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>defy 
it</em></ins></span> and <span class="removed"><del><strong>documents on a 
PC.&lt;/li&gt;
-&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>share copies
-anyway; however, to be entirely good, we should not agree to it in the
-first place.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>share copies 
anyway;
+however, to be entirely good, I should not agree to it in the first
+place.  Therefore, I refuse to agree to such contracts, whether for
+software, for e-books, for music, or for anything 
else.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;If we want to stop the bad news and create some good news, we need
-to organize and fight.  The
+to organize and fight.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>The</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Subscribe to the</em></ins></span>
 FSF's &lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org"&gt; Defective by 
Design&lt;/a&gt;
-campaign has made a <span class="removed"><del><strong>start 
&mdash;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>start;</em></ins></span> subscribe to the campaign's 
mailing
-list to lend a hand.  And &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join
-the FSF&lt;/a&gt; to help fund our work.
+campaign <span class="removed"><del><strong>has made a start &mdash; subscribe 
to the campaign's mailing
+list</strong></del></span> to lend a hand.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>And</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>You
+can</em></ins></span> &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join the 
FSF&lt;/a&gt; to <span class="removed"><del><strong>help 
fund</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>support
+our work more generally.  There is also a &lt;a href="/help"&gt;list of ways
+to participate in</em></ins></span> our <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>work.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>work&lt;/a&gt;.</em></ins></span>
 &lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;h3 id="References"&gt;References&lt;/h3&gt;
@@ -548,7 +557,7 @@
 
 &lt;p class="unprintable"&gt;Updated:
 &lt;!-- timestamp start --&gt;
-$Date: 2016/09/15 12:00:34 $
+$Date: 2016/10/18 11:00:35 $
 &lt;!-- timestamp end --&gt;
 &lt;/p&gt;
 &lt;/div&gt;

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 <span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;h3 
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-&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our mailing list
-about the dangers of eBooks&lt;/a&gt;.
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+&lt;blockquote&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our 
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+&lt;/blockquote&gt;
+&lt;/div&gt;
 
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 &lt;h3&gt;Author's</em></ins></span> Notes&lt;/h3&gt;
@@ -200,6 +201,12 @@
 Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.  We ask for your support.&lt;/p&gt;
 &lt;/li&gt;
 
+&lt;li&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;The Electronic Frontier Foundation, a separate organization not
+related to the Free Software Foundation, also campaigns against
+DRM.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;/li&gt;
+
 &lt;li&gt;</em></ins></span>
 &lt;p&gt;The following note has been updated several times since the first
 publication of the story.&lt;/p&gt;
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 &lt;p&gt;
 In 2001 the</strong></del></span> US <span class="removed"><del><strong>began 
attempting to use the proposed &ldquo;Free Trade&rdquo; Area of
-the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
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class="inserted"><ins><em>such</em></ins></span> rules on <span 
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class="removed"><del><strong>countries in
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class="inserted"><ins><em>rest</em></ins></span> of the <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>world through</em></ins></span>
+the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>campaigns</em></ins></span> to impose <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>the same</strong></del></span> <span 
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 so-called <span class="removed"><del><strong>free
 trade treaties, which</strong></del></span> <span 
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 TPP would impose the DMCA, along with many other wrongs, on 12
 countries on the Pacific Ocean.  The TTIP would impose similar
-strictures on Europe.  Americans should demand their congressional
-representatives reject the attempt to approve the TPP</em></ins></span> in 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>2003.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
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-
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-downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
-run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
-users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.&lt;/p&gt;
+strictures on Europe.  All these treaties must be defeated, or
+abolished.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 Even the World Wide Web Consortium has fallen under the shadow of the
@@ -285,10 +282,19 @@
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 Nonfree software tends to have &lt;a href="/proprietary/"&gt;abusive
-features of many kinds&lt;/a&gt;, which support the conclusion that
+features of many kinds&lt;/a&gt;, which lead to the conclusion that
 &lt;a href="/philosophy/free-software-even-more-important.html"&gt;you can
 never trust a nonfree program&lt;/a&gt;.  We must insist on free (libre)
-software only, and reject nonfree programs.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+software only, and reject nonfree programs.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;
+With Windows Vista, Microsoft admitted it had built</em></ins></span> in <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>2003.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>a back door:
+Microsoft can use it to forcibly install software
+&ldquo;upgrades,&rdquo; even if users consider them rather to be
+downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
+run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
+users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.  Of course, Windows
+10 is no better&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 One of the ideas in the story was not proposed in reality until 2002.
@@ -322,22 +328,22 @@
 Vista's many restrictions</strong></del></span> is <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>likely</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>impose DRM (Digital Restrictions
 Management)</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>use</em></ins></span> that <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>users can't overcome.  The 
threat</strong></del></span>
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class="removed"><del><strong>DRM is why we
-have established</strong></del></span> the <span class="inserted"><ins><em>FBI 
when asked: it
-already</em></ins></span> &lt;a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>href="http://DefectiveByDesign.org"&gt;
-Defective by Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
-the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to 
exploit.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+have established</strong></del></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;a href="http://DefectiveByDesign.org"&gt;
+Defective by Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>FBI when asked: it
+already &lt;a href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
+the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to exploit.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>Secure boot can be implemented in a way that 
permits the user to
+Secure boot can be implemented in a way that permits the user to
 specify the signature key and decide what software to sign.  In
 practice, PCs designed for Windows 10 carry only Microsoft's key, and
 whether the machine's owner can install any other system (such as
 GNU/Linux) is under Microsoft's control.  We call this &lt;em&gt;restricted
-boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was first <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was 
first <span class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
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 threatened, because they <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>cannot</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>could not</em></ins></span> afford to fight back in 
court.  One
@@ -383,17 +389,17 @@
 &lt;h3 id="BadNews"&gt;Bad News&lt;/h3&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-The battle for the right to read is already in progress,
-The enemy is organized, while we are not, so it is going against us.
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>Here are articles about bad things that 
have happened since the
+The battle for the right to read is <span class="removed"><del><strong>already 
in progress,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>going 
against us so far.</em></ins></span>
+The enemy is organized, <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>while</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>and</em></ins></span> we are <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>not, so it is going against us.
+Here are articles about bad things that have happened since the
 original publication of this article.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>not.
+&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial
-ebooks &lt;a href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
+&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>ebooks</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>e-books</em></ins></span> &lt;a 
href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
 readers' traditional <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>freedoms.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nature.com/nature_education/biology.html"&gt;
      A "biology textbook" web site&lt;/a&gt; that you can access 
only</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>freedoms&lt;/a&gt;.  
Amazon's e-book reader product,
@@ -407,9 +413,9 @@
 completely:&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It spies on everything the user does:</em></ins></span> it 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>reports</em></ins></span> which <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>book</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>publisher</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user is reading, and which page, and it 
reports when the user highlights
-text, and any notes the user enters.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It spies on everything the user does:</em></ins></span> it 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>reports 
which book the
+user is reading, and</em></ins></span> which <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>page, and it reports when the user highlights
+text, and any notes</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>publisher</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>user enters.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It has DRM, which is intended to block users from
 sharing copies.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
@@ -427,23 +433,26 @@
 &lt;/ul&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;Amazon's e-book distribution is oppressive, too.  It 
identifies</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>right</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user and records what books the user obtains.  
It also requires
-users</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>read</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies
-with others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user and records what books the user obtains.  
It also requires users</em></ins></span>
+to <span class="removed"><del><strong>read</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies with
+others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a 
href="http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/1999/Aug99/SeyboldPR.aspx"&gt;Books
      inside Computers:&lt;/a&gt; Software</strong></del></span>
 <span class="inserted"><ins><em>contract, the lesser evil would 
be</em></ins></span> to <span class="removed"><del><strong>control who can read
      books</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>defy 
it</em></ins></span> and <span class="removed"><del><strong>documents on a 
PC.&lt;/li&gt;
-&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>share copies
-anyway; however, to be entirely good, we should not agree to it in the
-first place.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>share copies 
anyway;
+however, to be entirely good, I should not agree to it in the first
+place.  Therefore, I refuse to agree to such contracts, whether for
+software, for e-books, for music, or for anything 
else.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;If we want to stop the bad news and create some good news, we need
-to organize and fight.  The
+to organize and fight.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>The</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Subscribe to the</em></ins></span>
 FSF's &lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org"&gt; Defective by 
Design&lt;/a&gt;
-campaign has made a start; subscribe to the campaign's mailing
-list to lend a hand.  And &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join
-the FSF&lt;/a&gt; to help fund our work.
+campaign <span class="removed"><del><strong>has made a start; subscribe to the 
campaign's mailing
+list</strong></del></span> to lend a hand.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>And</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>You
+can</em></ins></span> &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join the 
FSF&lt;/a&gt; to <span class="removed"><del><strong>help 
fund</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>support
+our work more generally.  There is also a &lt;a href="/help"&gt;list of ways
+to participate in</em></ins></span> our <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>work.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>work&lt;/a&gt;.</em></ins></span>
 &lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;h3 id="References"&gt;References&lt;/h3&gt;
@@ -545,7 +554,7 @@
 
 &lt;p class="unprintable"&gt;Updated:
 &lt;!-- timestamp start --&gt;
-$Date: 2016/09/15 12:00:34 $
+$Date: 2016/10/18 11:00:35 $
 &lt;!-- timestamp end --&gt;
 &lt;/p&gt;
 &lt;/div&gt;

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 <span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;h3 
id="AuthorsNote"&gt;Author's</strong></del></span>
 
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;blockquote 
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-&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our mailing list
-about the dangers of eBooks&lt;/a&gt;.
-&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;div class="announcement"&gt;
+&lt;blockquote&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our 
mailing list about the dangers of e-books&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;/blockquote&gt;
+&lt;/div&gt;
 
 &lt;div id="AuthorsNote"&gt;
 &lt;h3&gt;Author's</em></ins></span> Notes&lt;/h3&gt;
@@ -200,6 +201,12 @@
 Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.  We ask for your support.&lt;/p&gt;
 &lt;/li&gt;
 
+&lt;li&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;The Electronic Frontier Foundation, a separate organization not
+related to the Free Software Foundation, also campaigns against
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+&lt;/li&gt;
+
 &lt;li&gt;</em></ins></span>
 &lt;p&gt;The following note has been updated several times since the first
 publication of the story.&lt;/p&gt;
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 In 2001 the</strong></del></span> US <span class="removed"><del><strong>began 
attempting to use the proposed &ldquo;Free Trade&rdquo; Area of
-the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
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class="removed"><del><strong>all</strong></del></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>countries in
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class="inserted"><ins><em>rest</em></ins></span> of the <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>world through</em></ins></span>
+the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
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class="removed"><del><strong>the same</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>such</em></ins></span> rules on <span 
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<span class="removed"><del><strong>2003.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
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-
-&lt;p&gt;
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-downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
-run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
-users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.&lt;/p&gt;
+strictures on Europe.  All these treaties must be defeated, or
+abolished.&lt;/p&gt;
 
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+software only, and reject nonfree programs.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;
+With Windows Vista, Microsoft admitted it had built</em></ins></span> in <span 
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class="removed"><del><strong>DRM is why we
-have established</strong></del></span> the <span class="inserted"><ins><em>FBI 
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class="inserted"><ins><em>href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
-the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to 
exploit.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
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class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;a href="http://DefectiveByDesign.org"&gt;
+Defective by Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
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+already &lt;a href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
+the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to exploit.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>Secure boot can be implemented in a way that 
permits the user to
+Secure boot can be implemented in a way that permits the user to
 specify the signature key and decide what software to sign.  In
 practice, PCs designed for Windows 10 carry only Microsoft's key, and
 whether the machine's owner can install any other system (such as
 GNU/Linux) is under Microsoft's control.  We call this &lt;em&gt;restricted
-boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was first <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was 
first <span class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
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class="removed"><del><strong>cannot</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>could not</em></ins></span> afford to fight back in 
court.  One
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 &lt;h3 id="BadNews"&gt;Bad News&lt;/h3&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-The battle for the right to read is already in progress,
-The enemy is organized, while we are not, so it is going against us.
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>Here are articles about bad things that 
have happened since the
+The battle for the right to read is <span class="removed"><del><strong>already 
in progress,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>going 
against us so far.</em></ins></span>
+The enemy is organized, <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>while</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>and</em></ins></span> we are <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>not, so it is going against us.
+Here are articles about bad things that have happened since the
 original publication of this article.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>not.
+&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial
-ebooks &lt;a href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
+&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>ebooks</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>e-books</em></ins></span> &lt;a 
href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
 readers' traditional <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>freedoms.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nature.com/nature_education/biology.html"&gt;
      A "biology textbook" web site&lt;/a&gt; that you can access 
only</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>freedoms&lt;/a&gt;.  
Amazon's e-book reader product,
@@ -407,8 +413,8 @@
 completely:&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It spies on everything the user does:</em></ins></span> it 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>reports</em></ins></span> which <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>book the
-user is reading, and which page, and it reports when the user highlights
+&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It spies on everything the user does:</em></ins></span> it 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>reports 
which book the
+user is reading, and</em></ins></span> which <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>page, and it reports when the user highlights
 text, and any notes</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>publisher</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>user enters.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It has DRM, which is intended to block users from
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 &lt;/ul&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;Amazon's e-book distribution is oppressive, too.  It 
identifies</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>right</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user and records what books the user obtains.  
It also requires
-users</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>read</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies
-with others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user and records what books the user obtains.  
It also requires users</em></ins></span>
+to <span class="removed"><del><strong>read</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies with
+others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a 
href="http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/1999/Aug99/SeyboldPR.aspx"&gt;Books
      inside Computers:&lt;/a&gt; Software</strong></del></span>
 <span class="inserted"><ins><em>contract, the lesser evil would 
be</em></ins></span> to <span class="removed"><del><strong>control who can read
      books</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>defy 
it</em></ins></span> and <span class="removed"><del><strong>documents on a 
PC.&lt;/li&gt;
-&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>share copies
-anyway; however, to be entirely good, we should not agree to it in the
-first place.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>share copies 
anyway;
+however, to be entirely good, I should not agree to it in the first
+place.  Therefore, I refuse to agree to such contracts, whether for
+software, for e-books, for music, or for anything 
else.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;If we want to stop the bad news and create some good news, we need
-to organize and fight.  The
+to organize and fight.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>The</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Subscribe to the</em></ins></span>
 FSF's &lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org"&gt; Defective by 
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-campaign has made a start; subscribe to the campaign's mailing
-list to lend a hand.  And &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join
-the FSF&lt;/a&gt; to help fund our work.
+campaign <span class="removed"><del><strong>has made a start; subscribe to the 
campaign's mailing
+list</strong></del></span> to lend a hand.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>And</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>You
+can</em></ins></span> &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join the 
FSF&lt;/a&gt; to <span class="removed"><del><strong>help 
fund</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>support
+our work more generally.  There is also a &lt;a href="/help"&gt;list of ways
+to participate in</em></ins></span> our <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>work.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>work&lt;/a&gt;.</em></ins></span>
 &lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;h3 id="References"&gt;References&lt;/h3&gt;
@@ -543,7 +552,7 @@
 
 &lt;p class="unprintable"&gt;Updated:
 &lt;!-- timestamp start --&gt;
-$Date: 2016/09/15 12:00:34 $
+$Date: 2016/10/18 11:00:35 $
 &lt;!-- timestamp end --&gt;
 &lt;/p&gt;
 &lt;/div&gt;

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 <span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;h3 
id="AuthorsNote"&gt;Author's</strong></del></span>
 
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;blockquote 
class="announcement"&gt;&lt;p&gt;
-&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our mailing list
-about the dangers of eBooks&lt;/a&gt;.
-&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;div class="announcement"&gt;
+&lt;blockquote&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html"&gt;Join our 
mailing list about the dangers of e-books&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;/blockquote&gt;
+&lt;/div&gt;
 
 &lt;div id="AuthorsNote"&gt;
 &lt;h3&gt;Author's</em></ins></span> Notes&lt;/h3&gt;
@@ -200,6 +201,12 @@
 Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.  We ask for your support.&lt;/p&gt;
 &lt;/li&gt;
 
+&lt;li&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;The Electronic Frontier Foundation, a separate organization not
+related to the Free Software Foundation, also campaigns against
+DRM.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;/li&gt;
+
 &lt;li&gt;</em></ins></span>
 &lt;p&gt;The following note has been updated several times since the first
 publication of the story.&lt;/p&gt;
@@ -240,8 +247,7 @@
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 In 2001 the</strong></del></span> US <span class="removed"><del><strong>began 
attempting to use the proposed &ldquo;Free Trade&rdquo; Area of
-the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>campaigns</em></ins></span> to impose <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>the same</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>such</em></ins></span> rules on <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>all</strong></del></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>countries in
-the Western Hemisphere.  The FTAA is one</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>rest</em></ins></span> of the <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>world through</em></ins></span>
+the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>campaigns</em></ins></span> to impose <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>the same</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>such</em></ins></span> rules on <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>all the countries in</strong></del></span> the 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>Western Hemisphere.  The FTAA is 
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class="inserted"><ins><em>rest</em></ins></span> of the <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>world through</em></ins></span>
 so-called <span class="removed"><del><strong>free
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class="inserted"><ins><em>&ldquo;free trade&rdquo; treaties.
 &lt;a href="https://stallman.org/business-supremacy-treaties.html"&gt;
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 had adopted something like</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>TPP and</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>DMCA</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>TTIP.  The
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 countries on the Pacific Ocean.  The TTIP would impose similar
-strictures on Europe.  Americans should demand their congressional
-representatives reject the attempt to approve the TPP</em></ins></span> in 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>2003.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>the lame-duck
-session after the 2016 election.&lt;/p&gt;
-
-&lt;p&gt;
-With Windows Vista, Microsoft admitted it had built in a back door:
-Microsoft can use it to forcibly install software
-&ldquo;upgrades,&rdquo; even if users consider them rather to be
-downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
-run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
-users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.&lt;/p&gt;
+strictures on Europe.  All these treaties must be defeated, or
+abolished.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 Even the World Wide Web Consortium has fallen under the shadow of the
@@ -285,10 +282,19 @@
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 Nonfree software tends to have &lt;a href="/proprietary/"&gt;abusive
-features of many kinds&lt;/a&gt;, which support the conclusion that
+features of many kinds&lt;/a&gt;, which lead to the conclusion that
 &lt;a href="/philosophy/free-software-even-more-important.html"&gt;you can
 never trust a nonfree program&lt;/a&gt;.  We must insist on free (libre)
-software only, and reject nonfree programs.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+software only, and reject nonfree programs.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;
+With Windows Vista, Microsoft admitted it had built</em></ins></span> in <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>2003.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>a back door:
+Microsoft can use it to forcibly install software
+&ldquo;upgrades,&rdquo; even if users consider them rather to be
+downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
+run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
+users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.  Of course, Windows
+10 is no better&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
 One of the ideas in the story was not proposed in reality until 2002.
@@ -322,22 +328,22 @@
 Vista's many restrictions</strong></del></span> is <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>likely</em></ins></span> to <span 
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threat</strong></del></span>
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class="removed"><del><strong>DRM is why we
-have established</strong></del></span> the <span class="inserted"><ins><em>FBI 
when asked: it
-already</em></ins></span> &lt;a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>href="http://DefectiveByDesign.org"&gt;
-Defective by Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
-the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to 
exploit.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+have established</strong></del></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;a href="http://DefectiveByDesign.org"&gt;
+Defective by Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>FBI when asked: it
+already &lt;a href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
+the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to exploit.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>Secure boot can be implemented in a way that 
permits the user to
+Secure boot can be implemented in a way that permits the user to
 specify the signature key and decide what software to sign.  In
 practice, PCs designed for Windows 10 carry only Microsoft's key, and
 whether the machine's owner can install any other system (such as
 GNU/Linux) is under Microsoft's control.  We call this &lt;em&gt;restricted
-boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was first <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was 
first <span class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
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 threatened, because they <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>cannot</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>could not</em></ins></span> afford to fight back in 
court.  One
@@ -383,17 +389,17 @@
 &lt;h3 id="BadNews"&gt;Bad News&lt;/h3&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-The battle for the right to read is already in progress,
-The enemy is organized, while we are not, so it is going against us.
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>Here are articles about bad things that 
have happened since the
+The battle for the right to read is <span class="removed"><del><strong>already 
in progress,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>going 
against us so far.</em></ins></span>
+The enemy is organized, <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>while</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>and</em></ins></span> we are <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>not, so it is going against us.
+Here are articles about bad things that have happened since the
 original publication of this article.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;Today's</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>not.
+&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial
-ebooks &lt;a href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
+&lt;p&gt;Today's</em></ins></span> commercial <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>ebooks</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>e-books</em></ins></span> &lt;a 
href="/philosophy/the-danger-of-ebooks.html"&gt; abolish
 readers' traditional <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>freedoms.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nature.com/nature_education/biology.html"&gt;
      A "biology textbook" web site&lt;/a&gt; that you can access 
only</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>freedoms&lt;/a&gt;.  
Amazon's e-book reader product,
@@ -407,9 +413,9 @@
 completely:&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;ul&gt;
-&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It spies on everything the user does:</em></ins></span> it 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> <span 
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class="removed"><del><strong>publisher</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user is reading, and which page, and it 
reports when the user highlights
-text, and any notes the user enters.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
+&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It spies on everything the user does:</em></ins></span> it 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to anyone 
else&lt;/a&gt;,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>reports 
which book the
+user is reading, and</em></ins></span> which <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>page, and it reports when the user highlights
+text, and any notes</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>publisher</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>user enters.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
 
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;It has DRM, which is intended to block users from
 sharing copies.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
@@ -427,23 +433,26 @@
 &lt;/ul&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;Amazon's e-book distribution is oppressive, too.  It 
identifies</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>right</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user and records what books the user obtains.  
It also requires
-users</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>read</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies
-with others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>user and records what books the user obtains.  
It also requires users</em></ins></span>
+to <span class="removed"><del><strong>read</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share 
copies with
+others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to 
such</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>copy.&lt;/li&gt;
 &lt;li&gt;&lt;a 
href="http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/1999/Aug99/SeyboldPR.aspx"&gt;Books
      inside Computers:&lt;/a&gt; Software</strong></del></span>
 <span class="inserted"><ins><em>contract, the lesser evil would 
be</em></ins></span> to <span class="removed"><del><strong>control who can read
      books</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>defy 
it</em></ins></span> and <span class="removed"><del><strong>documents on a 
PC.&lt;/li&gt;
-&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>share copies
-anyway; however, to be entirely good, we should not agree to it in the
-first place.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+&lt;/ul&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>share copies 
anyway;
+however, to be entirely good, I should not agree to it in the first
+place.  Therefore, I refuse to agree to such contracts, whether for
+software, for e-books, for music, or for anything 
else.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;If we want to stop the bad news and create some good news, we need
-to organize and fight.  The
+to organize and fight.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>The</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Subscribe to the</em></ins></span>
 FSF's &lt;a href="http://defectivebydesign.org"&gt; Defective by 
Design&lt;/a&gt;
-campaign has made a start; subscribe to the campaign's mailing
-list to lend a hand.  And &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join
-the FSF&lt;/a&gt; to help fund our work.
+campaign <span class="removed"><del><strong>has made a start; subscribe to the 
campaign's mailing
+list</strong></del></span> to lend a hand.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>And</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>You
+can</em></ins></span> &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join the 
FSF&lt;/a&gt; to <span class="removed"><del><strong>help 
fund</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>support
+our work more generally.  There is also a &lt;a href="/help"&gt;list of ways
+to participate in</em></ins></span> our <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>work.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>work&lt;/a&gt;.</em></ins></span>
 &lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;h3 id="References"&gt;References&lt;/h3&gt;
@@ -545,7 +554,7 @@
 
 &lt;p class="unprintable"&gt;Updated:
 &lt;!-- timestamp start --&gt;
-$Date: 2016/09/15 12:00:35 $
+$Date: 2016/10/18 11:00:35 $
 &lt;!-- timestamp end --&gt;
 &lt;/p&gt;
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+&lt;p&gt;The Electronic Frontier Foundation, a separate organization not
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class="removed"><del><strong>2006, mere possession of a copy of DeCSS, the free 
program
-to decrypt video on</strong></del></span> a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>DVD, is a crime.&lt;/p&gt;
+to decrypt video on a DVD, is a crime.&lt;/p&gt;
 
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 In 2001, Disney-funded Senator Hollings proposed a bill called the
 SSSCA that would require every new computer to have mandatory
 copy-restriction facilities that the user cannot bypass.  Following
 the Clipper chip and similar US government key-escrow proposals, this
-shows a long-term trend: computer systems are increasingly set up to
+shows</strong></del></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>long-term 
trend: computer systems are increasingly set up to
 give absentees with clout control over the people actually using the
 computer system.  The SSSCA was later renamed to the unpronounceable
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class="inserted"><ins><em>rest</em></ins></span> of the <span 
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+the Americas (FTAA) treaty</strong></del></span> <span 
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+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>states.</em></ins></span>  The <span 
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+Lula, President</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>DMCA's 
policy</em></ins></span> of <span class="removed"><del><strong>Brazil, who 
rejected the DMCA requirement and
+others.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
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+break DRM is one of many unjust policies that these treaties impose
+across a wide range of fields.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
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-run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
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+countries on</em></ins></span> the <span class="removed"><del><strong>US, but 
I've heard Ecuador
+had adopted something like</strong></del></span> <span 
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+strictures on Europe.  All these treaties must be defeated, or
+abolished.&lt;/p&gt;
 
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-Even the World Wide Web Consortium has fallen under the shadow of the
+Even</em></ins></span> the <span 
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+features of many kinds&lt;/a&gt;, which lead to the conclusion that
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+software only, and reject nonfree programs.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;
+With Windows Vista, Microsoft admitted it had built</em></ins></span> in <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>2003.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>a back door:
+Microsoft can use it to forcibly install software
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+downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
+run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
+users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.  Of course, Windows
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 &lt;p&gt;
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class="inserted"><ins><em>href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
-the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to 
exploit.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+have established</strong></del></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;a href="http://DefectiveByDesign.org"&gt;
+Defective by Design&lt;/a&gt; campaign.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
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+already &lt;a href="/proprietary/malware-microsoft.html"&gt;shows
+the NSA security bugs in Windows&lt;/a&gt; to exploit.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>Secure boot can be implemented in a way that 
permits the user to
+Secure boot can be implemented in a way that permits the user to
 specify the signature key and decide what software to sign.  In
 practice, PCs designed for Windows 10 carry only Microsoft's key, and
 whether the machine's owner can install any other system (such as
 GNU/Linux) is under Microsoft's control.  We call this &lt;em&gt;restricted
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+boot&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;
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class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>When</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>In 1997, when</em></ins></span> this story was 
first <span class="removed"><del><strong>written,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>published,</em></ins></span> the SPA was
 threatening small Internet service providers, demanding they permit
 the SPA to monitor all users.  Most ISPs surrendered when
 threatened, because they <span 
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class="inserted"><ins><em>could not</em></ins></span> afford to fight back in 
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-The battle for the right to read is already in progress,
-The enemy is organized, while we are not, so it is going against us.
-<span class="removed"><del><strong>Here are articles about bad things that 
have happened since the
+The battle for the right to read is <span class="removed"><del><strong>already 
in progress,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>going 
against us so far.</em></ins></span>
+The enemy is organized, <span 
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+campaign <span class="removed"><del><strong>has made a start &mdash; subscribe 
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class="inserted"><ins><em>You
+can</em></ins></span> &lt;a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate"&gt;join the 
FSF&lt;/a&gt; to <span class="removed"><del><strong>help 
fund</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>support
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 &lt;h3 id="References"&gt;References&lt;/h3&gt;
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 &lt;p class="unprintable"&gt;Updated:
 &lt;!-- timestamp start --&gt;
-$Date: 2016/09/15 12:00:35 $
+$Date: 2016/10/18 11:00:35 $
 &lt;!-- timestamp end --&gt;
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