www/proprietary proprietary-jails.html

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 15/10/06 20:54:15

Modified files:
        proprietary    : proprietary-jails.html 

Log message:
        Fix typos.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary-jails.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.5&r2=1.6

Patches:
Index: proprietary-jails.html
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RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/proprietary/proprietary-jails.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -b -r1.5 -r1.6
--- proprietary-jails.html      6 Oct 2015 18:58:41 -0000       1.5
+++ proprietary-jails.html      6 Oct 2015 20:53:54 -0000       1.6
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <a href="/philosophy/proprietary.html">Other examples of proprietary 
malware</a>
 
 <p>Here are examples of proprietary systems that are
-<em>jails</em>:they do not allow the user to freely install
+<em>jails</em>: they do not allow the user to freely install
 applications.  The <a href="http://i.imgur.com/ZRViDum.jpg";>image of
 the iPrison</a> illustrates this issue.</p>
 <!-- embed http://i.imgur.com/ZRViDum.jpg here -->
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 to <a 
href="http://boingboing.net/2014/02/07/apple-yanks-last-remaining-bit.html";>
 ban all bitcoin apps</a> for the iThings for a time.  It
 also <a 
href="http://www.gamespot.com/articles/apple-removes-game-about-growing-marijuana-from-app-store/1100-6419864/";>banned
-a game about growing marijuana</a>, while permitting Games about other
+a game about growing marijuana</a>, while permitting games about other
 crimes such as killing people.  Perhaps Apple considers killing more
 acceptable than marijuana.</p>
 
@@ -63,9 +63,9 @@
 signing</a> that the iThings use to lock up the user.</p>
 
 <p>Curiously, Apple is beginning to allow limited passage through the
-walls of the the iThing jail: Users can now install apps built from
+walls of the the iThing jail: users can now install apps built from
 source code, provided the source code is written in Swift.  Users
-cannot do this freely because they required to identify themselves.
+cannot do this freely because they are required to identify themselves.
 <a href="https://developer.apple.com/xcode/";>Here are details.</a></p>
 
 <p>While this is a crack in the prison walls, it is not big enough to
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2015/10/06 18:58:41 $
+$Date: 2015/10/06 20:53:54 $
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 </p>
 </div>