www/philosophy proprietary.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       14/04/25 20:33:31

Modified files:
        philosophy     : proprietary.html 

Log message:
        Some minor rewrites.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/proprietary.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.16&r2=1.17

Patches:
Index: proprietary.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/proprietary.html,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -b -r1.16 -r1.17
--- proprietary.html    13 Apr 2014 14:20:00 -0000      1.16
+++ proprietary.html    25 Apr 2014 20:33:30 -0000      1.17
@@ -47,24 +47,24 @@
     manufacturer.</li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>Proprietary software is often malware. Some of the information above is
-organized by systems or companies whose software is malware:</p>
+<p>These pages present some of the same examples, organized by
+specific companies or systems:</p>
 
 <ul>
   <li><a href="/philosophy/malware-apple.html">Apple's software is 
malware</a></li>
   <li><a href="/philosophy/malware-microsoft.html">Microsoft's software is
   malware</a></li>
   <li><a href="/philosophy/malware-mobiles.html">Malware in mobile 
devices</a></li>
-  <li><a href="/philosophy/malware-kindle-swindle.html">Malware in the Kindle 
+  <li><a href="/philosophy/malware-kindle-swindle.html">Malware in the Amazon
   Swindle</a></li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>The way to avoid these forms of abuse is by insisting on
+<p>Users of proprietary software are defenseless against these forms
+of mistreatment.  The way to avoid them is by insisting on
 <a href="/philosophy/free-software-even-more-important.html">free
 (freedom-respecting) software.</a>  Since free software is controlled
 by its users, they have a pretty good defense against malicious
-software functionality.  Users of proprietary software are
-defenseless.</p>
+software functionality.</p>
 
 </div><!-- for id="content", starts in the include above -->
 <!--#include virtual="/server/footer.html" -->
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2014/04/13 14:20:00 $
+$Date: 2014/04/25 20:33:30 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>