www/philosophy proprietary-jails.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       14/02/15 15:15:15

Modified files:
        philosophy     : proprietary-jails.html 

Log message:
        Further rewrite of the introduction.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/proprietary-jails.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.7&r2=1.8

Patches:
Index: proprietary-jails.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/proprietary-jails.html,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -b -r1.7 -r1.8
--- proprietary-jails.html      15 Feb 2014 15:14:03 -0000      1.7
+++ proprietary-jails.html      15 Feb 2014 15:15:15 -0000      1.8
@@ -8,15 +8,15 @@
 
 <p>Here are examples of proprietary systems that are
 <em>jails</em>&mdash;they do not allow the user to freely install
-applications.  These systems are platforms for censorship by the
-company that owns the system.  Selling products designed in this way
-as platforms for censorship ought to be forbidden by law.</p>
-
-<p>The <a href="http://i.imgur.com/ZRViDum.jpg";>image of the iPrison</a>
-illustrates what this implies.</p>
+applications.  The <a href="http://i.imgur.com/ZRViDum.jpg";>image of
+the iPrison</a> illustrates this issue.</p>
 <!-- embed http://i.imgur.com/ZRViDum.jpg here -->
 <!-- Linking to it. Not possible to embed due to licensing. See RT #887471 -->
 
+<p>These systems are platforms for censorship by the company that owns
+the system.  Selling products designed in this way as platforms for
+censorship ought to be forbidden by law.</p>
+
 <ul>
 <li>
 <p><a 
href="http://boingboing.net/2010/04/02/why-i-wont-buy-an-ipad-and-think-yo.html";>
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2014/02/15 15:14:03 $
+$Date: 2014/02/15 15:15:15 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>