www/software README.accounts.html

[Karl Berry]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Karl Berry <karl>       11/11/15 01:19:14

Modified files:
        software       : README.accounts.html 

Log message:
        be even more explicit that we are talking about an RSA public key for 
ssh

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/software/README.accounts.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.12&r2=1.13

Patches:
Index: README.accounts.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/software/README.accounts.html,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -b -r1.12 -r1.13
--- README.accounts.html        6 Aug 2011 14:27:01 -0000       1.12
+++ README.accounts.html        15 Nov 2011 01:19:03 -0000      1.13
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 
 <p>The GNU Project has a general login server named
 <tt>fencepost.gnu.org</tt> which project members can use.  Some <a
-href="/prep/maintain/">files for GNU maintainers</a> are also kept
+href="/prep/maintain/">information for GNU maintainers</a> are also kept
 there.</p>
 
 <p>The GNU Project also runs a hosting site, <a
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@
 
 <h3>If you have a Savannah account, with ssh key uploaded</h3>
 
-<p>If you already have an account on savannah.gnu.org and <b>have also
-registered an RSA public key there</b>, you can request an account on
+<p>If you have an account on savannah.gnu.org and <b>have registered an
+RSA public key for ssh there</b>, you can request an account on
 fencepost by sending email to <a
 href="mailto:address@hidden";>&lt;address@hidden&gt;</a> with the
 following information:
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 <li>Phone numbers and time of day where we can contact you to
     confirm fingerprints.
 <li>Your postal mailing address.
-<li>The RSA public key you registered on savannah.
+<li>The RSA public key you registered for ssh on savannah.
 </ul>
 </p>
 
@@ -87,23 +87,24 @@
 href="http://meyering.net/nuke-your-DSA-keys/";>Do not use DSA
 keys</a>.)</li>
 
-<li>Login to <a href="http://savannah.gnu.org/";>savannah</a> in your
+<li>Login to <a href="http://savannah.gnu.org/";>savannah</a> in a web
 browser.</li>
 
 <li>Click the &ldquo;My Account Conf&rdquo; item in the left-hand
 navigation bar.</li>
 
 <li>On the resulting page, click &ldquo;Register an SSH Public
-Key&rdquo; (under Authentication Setup).</li>
+Key&rdquo; (under &ldquo;Authentication Setup&rdquo;).</li>
 
-<li>Paste your OpenSSH public key(s) in the &ldquo;Authorized
+<li>Paste your ssh RSA public key(s) in the &ldquo;Authorized
 keys&rdquo; text field.  Make sure there are no line breaks within a
 key.  Then click the &ldquo;Update&rdquo; button.</li>
 
-<li>This will bring you back to the Account Configuration page.  Verify
-that the number of &ldquo;SSH Public Keys registered&rdquo; is the same
-number that you actually uploaded.  If it is higher, then some extra
-line breaks snuck in, so you should try again.</li>
+<li>This will bring you back to the &ldquo;Account Configuration&rdquo;
+page.  Verify that the number of &ldquo;SSH Public Keys
+registered&rdquo; is the same number that you actually uploaded.  If it
+is higher, then some extra line breaks snuck in, so you need to try
+again.</li>
 
 <li>Once you've registered on and uploaded your ssh key(s) to savannah,
 email <a href="mailto:address@hidden";>&lt;address@hidden&gt;</a>
@@ -127,9 +128,9 @@
 
 <li>Follow the &ldquo;New User&rdquo; link, and follow the directions.</li>
 
-<li>Aside: to manage your web pages, source code, and/or ftp area,
-you can register a project using the &ldquo;Register New
-Project&rdquo; link.</li>
+<li>Aside: to manage your web pages, source code, and/or ftp area (these
+are all independent), you can register a project using the
+&ldquo;Register New Project&rdquo; link.</li>
 
 </ul>
 
@@ -179,7 +180,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2011/08/06 14:27:01 $
+$Date: 2011/11/15 01:19:03 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>