[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/10 15:02:08

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        pointers       : article.rst 

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        Reviewing with Tuomas

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@@ -530,13 +530,13 @@
 such as showing a list of the newest articles on a news site
 could be handled through client-side scripting.)
 
-The data model used in this P2P Web is independent
+The data model in this P2P Web is independent
 from the underlying mechanism used to find data;
 for example, a client could utilize different overlay networks
 with different properties (such as speed and anonymity),
 the caches of other machines on the LAN,
 and the complete set of files ever downloaded to the local harddisk.
-The Storm API makes such clients simple to implement.
+Pointer records and the Storm API make such clients simple to implement.
 The model is analogous to HTTP: a common language
 spoken by all clients and servers.