[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/10 14:44:02

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        Reviewing with Tuomas

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.237&tr2=1.238&r1=text&r2=text

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diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.237 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.238
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.237      Mon Nov 10 14:41:57 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Mon Nov 10 14:44:01 2003
@@ -33,10 +33,10 @@
 
 .. THE NETWORK CONNECTION TO JYVÄSKYLÄ IS DOWN; I CAN'T GET TO EMAIL
    OR IRC, BUT CVS STILL WORKS. I'M GOING FOR LUNCH, WILL BE BACK IN 
-   A WHILE. -- Tjl
+   A WHILE. ---Tjl
 
 .. So much for independence of Savannah being a good thing! --
-   I'll go to uni soon, I think. -- Benja
+   I'll go to uni soon, I think. ---Benja
 
 The Web could benefit greatly from the bandwith savings,
 increased availability, and reduced server costs offered
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
 if the shoulders keep rotting away?
 The Internet Archive's Wayback Machine [waybackmachine]_
 alleviates these concerns somewhat, but it introduces
-a single point of failure-- and censorship-- for the *entire* Web!
+a single point of failure---and censorship---for the *entire* Web!
 
 .. (cut) radioisotope thermoelectric generators (RTGs), using 
 
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@
 for the Web (not including server-side scripting). Such a Web
 would have the benefits of semantic-free referencing--
 URIs don't have to change because of trademark conflicts
-as in DNS, for example-- but go beyond the proposal
+as in DNS, for example---but go beyond the proposal
 to replace DNS but keep the centralized architecture of
 Web servers [balakrishnan03semanticfree]_.
 
@@ -371,8 +371,8 @@
 (identified by hash) over time.
 
 As the pointer id, we use the hash of the pointer's *charter*,
-a file including identification information for the pointer's owner,
-the entity that has change control over the document.
+a file including identification information for the pointer's 
+owner---the entity that has change control over the document.
 This can be the owner's public key, or information about the CA
 (Certificate Authority)
 from which the owner's current public key can be obtained.
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@
 
 ..  XXX something that requires keeping info in one place
     in one network will never be agreeable upon between
-    all networks? -- probably not due to space constraints
+    all networks? ---probably not due to space constraints
 
 
 
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@
 .. and distribute our implementation as the Storm
    Free Software package.
 
-   -- XXX we don't distribute anything yet
+   ---XXX we don't distribute anything yet
 
 Our prototype provides implementations of the block abstraction
 and of reverse indexing for both local storage
@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@
 simply burning blocks on a CD and using SneakerNet
 for file transfers.
 
-.. Shared 1:1 with other P2P systems-- not that important
+.. Shared 1:1 with other P2P systems---not that important
    to discuss:
 
    An adversary may try to attack our system by trying