www/server/standards README.editors.html

[Dora Scilipoti]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Dora Scilipoti <dora>   14/02/17 22:30:45

Modified files:
        server/standards: README.editors.html 

Log message:
        Improve a little as discussed in www-discuss.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/standards/README.editors.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.17&r2=1.18

Patches:
Index: README.editors.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/server/standards/README.editors.html,v
retrieving revision 1.17
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -b -r1.17 -r1.18
--- README.editors.html 9 Jul 2013 10:41:31 -0000       1.17
+++ README.editors.html 17 Feb 2014 22:30:45 -0000      1.18
@@ -1,37 +1,32 @@
 <!--#include virtual="/server/header.html" -->
 <!-- Parent-Version: 1.75 -->
-<title>Guidelines for Web Page Creation at www.gnu.org
+<title>Guidelines for Writing Web Pages at www.gnu.org
 - GNU Project - Free Software Foundation</title>
 <!--#include virtual="/server/standards/po/README.editors.translist" -->
 <!--#include virtual="/server/banner.html" -->
 
-<h2>Guidelines for Web Page Creation at www.gnu.org</h2>
+<h2>Guidelines for Writing Web Pages at www.gnu.org</h2>
 
-<p>This is a general guide for everyone who wishes to write a web page
-for the GNU project web server, <code>www.gnu.org</code>.
-There are several other guides that
-are important, one of the most important ones is the
-<a href="/server/fsf-html-style-sheet.html">FSF HTML Style Sheet</a> in
-http://www.gnu.org/server/fsf-html-style-sheet.html.
-A list of the others are in
+<p>This is a general guide for everyone who wishes to write a web page for 
+the GNU project web server, <code>www.gnu.org</code>. There are several 
+other guides that are important, one of the most important ones is the
+<a href="/server/fsf-html-style-sheet.html">FSF HTML Style Sheet</a>. A
 <a href="/server/standards/README.webmastering.html#readme">
-http://www.gnu.org/server/standards/README.webmastering.html#readme</a>.</p>
+list of other guides</a> is also available.</p>
 
 <p>
 No pages on the GNU project web server should ever make any references
-to non-free software or non-free documentation. This is VERY important.
+to nonfree software or nonfree documentation. This is VERY important.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-The boilerplate that is used for all our pages in is
+The boilerplate that is used for all our pages is in
 <a href="/boilerplate.html">http://www.gnu.org/boilerplate.html</a>.
-A good start when writing a web page
-is to use that boilerplate and follow the instructions in it.
-Please delete the unneeded comments as you go.
-It makes the HTML source file easier for later maintainers to work with.
-You should also check for specialized versions of
-boilerplate.html in the current directory,
-and those above it.
+A good start when writing a web page is to use that boilerplate and follow 
+the instructions in it. Please delete the unneeded comments as you go.
+It makes the HTML source file easier for future maintainers to work with.
+You should also check for specialized versions of boilerplate.html in the 
+current directory, and those above it.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -49,14 +44,14 @@
 <p>
 The description should be long enough so that people can grasp the whole
 program, but not so long that they get bored by reading it. If a package
-consists of several smaller programs, it is best to write a general description
-of what type of programs that belong in the package and then write shorter
-descriptions for each program.
+consists of several smaller programs, it is best to write a general 
+description of what types of programs belong in the package and then write 
+shorter descriptions for each program.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 The GNU Project would like to host all web pages about a program, so if
-the main pages is currently on some other server, please consider moving
+the main pages are currently on some other server, please consider moving
 them to the GNU project web server instead.
 </p>
 
@@ -115,7 +110,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2013/07/09 10:41:31 $
+$Date: 2014/02/17 22:30:45 $
 <!-- timestamp end --></p>
 </div>
 </div>