(Fwd) Re: new manual for GRUB users

[Treutwein; Bernhard]

Below are some change-suggestions for the new 
user-manual. The first change contains some stylistic 
enhancements (despite I'm not a native speaker,
I think that the it is easier to understand).

The second change is the only solution I found to 
convince my teTeX in texi2pdf'ing the manual 
(I had the same problem with the "old" manual). 
I'm using teTeX 1.0.6-4 (dated Feb, 2000)
on a Caldera eDesktop 2.4 with the texinfo.tex
upgraded to the version 2000-12-11.07. It may be
my ignorance of texinfo, but I got the error included
at the bottom without that change. It seems to me
that texi2pdf cannot handle the nested 
@value{VERSION} inside an @uref.

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< If GRUB @dfn{hide}s a DOS (or Windows) partition (@pxref{hide}), it
< ignores the partition. If GRUB @dfn{unhide}s a DOS (or Windows)
< partition (@pxref{unhide}), it detects the partition. Thus, if you have
< installed DOS (or Windows) on the first partition and the second of the
< first hard disk, and boot the first copy, do the following:
---
> If GRUB @dfn{hide}s a DOS (or Windows) partition (@pxref{hide}), DOS/Windows
> will ignore the partition. If GRUB @dfn{unhide}s a DOS (or Windows) partition
> (@pxref{unhide}), DOS/Windows will detect the partition. Thus, if you have
> installed DOS (or Windows) on the first and the second partition of the first
> hard disk, and you want to boot the first copy, do the following:
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< @uref{ftp://alpha.gnu.org/gnu/grub/address@hidden
---
> @url{ftp://alpha.gnu.org/gnu/grub/address@hidden        





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    Bernhard Treutwein
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