www/proprietary all.html malware-cars.html prop...

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 23/04/25 10:14:20

Modified files:
        proprietary    : all.html malware-cars.html 
                         proprietary-insecurity.html proprietary.html 
        proprietary/workshop: mal.rec 

Log message:
        Rewording in latest Tesla item.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/all.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.151&r2=1.152
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/malware-cars.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.52&r2=1.53
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary-insecurity.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.209&r2=1.210
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.470&r2=1.471
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/workshop/mal.rec?cvsroot=www&r1=1.494&r2=1.495

Patches:
Index: all.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/proprietary/all.html,v
retrieving revision 1.151
retrieving revision 1.152
diff -u -b -r1.151 -r1.152
--- all.html    25 Apr 2023 13:21:23 -0000      1.151
+++ all.html    25 Apr 2023 14:14:20 -0000      1.152
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@
     lets crackers install new car keys</a>, unlock cars, start engines,
     and even prevent real owners from accessing their cars.</p>
 
-    <p>Another report also states that crackers are/were able to <a
+    <p>A cracker even reported that he was able to <a
     
href="https://fortune.com/2022/01/12/teen-hacker-david-colombo-took-control-25-tesla-ev/";>
-    disable security systems and take control of the cars</a>.</p>
+    disable security systems and take control of 25 cars</a>.</p>
 
     <small>Please note that these articles wrongly use the word &ldquo;<a
     
href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Hacker";>hacker</a>&rdquo;
@@ -3101,7 +3101,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2023/04/25 13:21:23 $
+$Date: 2023/04/25 14:14:20 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: malware-cars.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/proprietary/malware-cars.html,v
retrieving revision 1.52
retrieving revision 1.53
diff -u -b -r1.52 -r1.53
--- malware-cars.html   25 Apr 2023 13:21:23 -0000      1.52
+++ malware-cars.html   25 Apr 2023 14:14:20 -0000      1.53
@@ -167,9 +167,9 @@
     lets crackers install new car keys</a>, unlock cars, start engines,
     and even prevent real owners from accessing their cars.</p>
 
-    <p>Another report also states that crackers are/were able to <a
+    <p>A cracker even reported that he was able to <a
     
href="https://fortune.com/2022/01/12/teen-hacker-david-colombo-took-control-25-tesla-ev/";>
-    disable security systems and take control of the cars</a>.</p>
+    disable security systems and take control of 25 cars</a>.</p>
 
     <small>Please note that these articles wrongly use the word &ldquo;<a
     
href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Hacker";>hacker</a>&rdquo;
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2023/04/25 13:21:23 $
+$Date: 2023/04/25 14:14:20 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: proprietary-insecurity.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/proprietary/proprietary-insecurity.html,v
retrieving revision 1.209
retrieving revision 1.210
diff -u -b -r1.209 -r1.210
--- proprietary-insecurity.html 25 Apr 2023 13:21:23 -0000      1.209
+++ proprietary-insecurity.html 25 Apr 2023 14:14:20 -0000      1.210
@@ -182,9 +182,9 @@
     lets crackers install new car keys</a>, unlock cars, start engines,
     and even prevent real owners from accessing their cars.</p>
 
-    <p>Another report also states that crackers are/were able to <a
+    <p>A cracker even reported that he was able to <a
     
href="https://fortune.com/2022/01/12/teen-hacker-david-colombo-took-control-25-tesla-ev/";>
-    disable security systems and take control of the cars</a>.</p>
+    disable security systems and take control of 25 cars</a>.</p>
 
     <small>Please note that these articles wrongly use the word &ldquo;<a
     
href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Hacker";>hacker</a>&rdquo;
@@ -1364,7 +1364,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2023/04/25 13:21:23 $
+$Date: 2023/04/25 14:14:20 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: proprietary.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/proprietary/proprietary.html,v
retrieving revision 1.470
retrieving revision 1.471
diff -u -b -r1.470 -r1.471
--- proprietary.html    25 Apr 2023 13:26:44 -0000      1.470
+++ proprietary.html    25 Apr 2023 14:14:20 -0000      1.471
@@ -260,9 +260,9 @@
     lets crackers install new car keys</a>, unlock cars, start engines,
     and even prevent real owners from accessing their cars.</p>
 
-    <p>Another report also states that crackers are/were able to <a
+    <p>A cracker even reported that he was able to <a
     
href="https://fortune.com/2022/01/12/teen-hacker-david-colombo-took-control-25-tesla-ev/";>
-    disable security systems and take control of the cars</a>.</p>
+    disable security systems and take control of 25 cars</a>.</p>
 
     <small>Please note that these articles wrongly use the word &ldquo;<a
     
href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Hacker";>hacker</a>&rdquo;
@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2023/04/25 13:26:44 $
+$Date: 2023/04/25 14:14:20 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: workshop/mal.rec
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/proprietary/workshop/mal.rec,v
retrieving revision 1.494
retrieving revision 1.495
diff -u -b -r1.494 -r1.495
--- workshop/mal.rec    25 Apr 2023 13:21:24 -0000      1.494
+++ workshop/mal.rec    25 Apr 2023 14:14:20 -0000      1.495
@@ -56,9 +56,9 @@
 +   lets crackers install new car keys</a>, unlock cars, start engines,
 +   and even prevent real owners from accessing their cars.</p>
 +
-+   <p>Another report also states that crackers are/were able to <a
++   <p>A cracker even reported that he was able to <a
 +   
href="https://fortune.com/2022/01/12/teen-hacker-david-colombo-took-control-25-tesla-ev/";>
-+   disable security systems and take control of the cars</a>.</p>
++   disable security systems and take control of 25 cars</a>.</p>
 +
 +   <small>Please note that these articles wrongly use the word &ldquo;<a
 +   
href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Hacker";>hacker</a>&rdquo;