www/proprietary all.html proprietary-surveillan...

[Ineiev]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Ineiev <ineiev> 21/10/12 05:14:29

Modified files:
        proprietary    : all.html proprietary-surveillance.html 
                         proprietary.html 
        proprietary/workshop: mal.rec 

Log message:
        Fix typos.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/all.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.53&r2=1.54
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary-surveillance.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.405&r2=1.406
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.375&r2=1.376
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/workshop/mal.rec?cvsroot=www&r1=1.378&r2=1.379

Patches:
Index: all.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/all.html,v
retrieving revision 1.53
retrieving revision 1.54
diff -u -b -r1.53 -r1.54
--- all.html    12 Oct 2021 08:48:17 -0000      1.53
+++ all.html    12 Oct 2021 09:14:29 -0000      1.54
@@ -74,11 +74,12 @@
     Salvador Dictatorship's Chivo wallet is spyware</a>, it's a
     proprietary program that breaks users' freedom and spies on people;
     demands personal data such as the national ID number and does face
-    recognition, and it as bad security for its data. It also asks for
-    almost every malware permission in people's smart phones.</p>
+    recognition, and it is bad security for its data. It also asks for
+    almost every malware permission in people's smartphones.</p>
 
     <p>The article criticizes it for faults in &ldquo;data
-    protection&rdquo;, though <a href="">&ldquo;data protection&rdquo;
+    protection&rdquo;, though <a
+    href="/philosophy/surveillance-vs-democracy.html">&ldquo;data 
protection&rdquo;
     is the wrong approach to privacy anyway</a>.</p>
   </li>
 
@@ -2419,7 +2420,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2021/10/12 08:48:17 $
+$Date: 2021/10/12 09:14:29 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: proprietary-surveillance.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/proprietary-surveillance.html,v
retrieving revision 1.405
retrieving revision 1.406
diff -u -b -r1.405 -r1.406
--- proprietary-surveillance.html       12 Oct 2021 07:58:05 -0000      1.405
+++ proprietary-surveillance.html       12 Oct 2021 09:14:29 -0000      1.406
@@ -529,11 +529,12 @@
     Salvador Dictatorship's Chivo wallet is spyware</a>, it's a
     proprietary program that breaks users' freedom and spies on people;
     demands personal data such as the national ID number and does face
-    recognition, and it as bad security for its data. It also asks for
-    almost every malware permission in people's smart phones.</p>
+    recognition, and it is bad security for its data. It also asks for
+    almost every malware permission in people's smartphones.</p>
 
     <p>The article criticizes it for faults in &ldquo;data
-    protection&rdquo;, though <a href="">&ldquo;data protection&rdquo;
+    protection&rdquo;, though <a
+    href="/philosophy/surveillance-vs-democracy.html">&ldquo;data 
protection&rdquo;
     is the wrong approach to privacy anyway</a>.</p>
   </li>
 
@@ -3522,7 +3523,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2021/10/12 07:58:05 $
+$Date: 2021/10/12 09:14:29 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: proprietary.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/proprietary.html,v
retrieving revision 1.375
retrieving revision 1.376
diff -u -b -r1.375 -r1.376
--- proprietary.html    12 Oct 2021 08:48:17 -0000      1.375
+++ proprietary.html    12 Oct 2021 09:14:29 -0000      1.376
@@ -224,11 +224,12 @@
     Salvador Dictatorship's Chivo wallet is spyware</a>, it's a
     proprietary program that breaks users' freedom and spies on people;
     demands personal data such as the national ID number and does face
-    recognition, and it as bad security for its data. It also asks for
-    almost every malware permission in people's smart phones.</p>
+    recognition, and it is bad security for its data. It also asks for
+    almost every malware permission in people's smartphones.</p>
 
     <p>The article criticizes it for faults in &ldquo;data
-    protection&rdquo;, though <a href="">&ldquo;data protection&rdquo;
+    protection&rdquo;, though <a
+    href="/philosophy/surveillance-vs-democracy.html">&ldquo;data 
protection&rdquo;
     is the wrong approach to privacy anyway</a>.</p>
   </li>
 
@@ -317,7 +318,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2021/10/12 08:48:17 $
+$Date: 2021/10/12 09:14:29 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: workshop/mal.rec
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/workshop/mal.rec,v
retrieving revision 1.378
retrieving revision 1.379
diff -u -b -r1.378 -r1.379
--- workshop/mal.rec    12 Oct 2021 08:52:08 -0000      1.378
+++ workshop/mal.rec    12 Oct 2021 09:14:29 -0000      1.379
@@ -53,11 +53,12 @@
 +   Salvador Dictatorship's Chivo wallet is spyware</a>, it's a
 +   proprietary program that breaks users' freedom and spies on people;
 +   demands personal data such as the national ID number and does face
-+   recognition, and it as bad security for its data. It also asks for
-+   almost every malware permission in people's smart phones.</p>
++   recognition, and it is bad security for its data. It also asks for
++   almost every malware permission in people's smartphones.</p>
 +
 +   <p>The article criticizes it for faults in &ldquo;data
-+   protection&rdquo;, though <a href="">&ldquo;data protection&rdquo;
++   protection&rdquo;, though <a
++   href="/philosophy/surveillance-vs-democracy.html">&ldquo;data 
protection&rdquo;
 +   is the wrong approach to privacy anyway</a>.</p>
 
 Added: 2021-10-12