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Re: [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] doc: update .gitignore and fix t


From: Eric Blake
Subject: Re: [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] doc: update .gitignore and fix typos for docs in tree
Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2019 21:09:19 -0600
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On 2/20/19 2:55 AM, Like Xu wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Like Xu <address@hidden>

This feels like two independent patches - the .gitignore change is
different from typo fixes.

Actually, for .gitignore, you could just as easily do:

echo '*.patch' >> .git/info/exclude

and fix it so you never commit patch files locally, while still leaving
them visible through 'git status' to other users.  I actually like
knowing when I have stale patch files lying around, so that I can 'rm'
them before creating my next patch batch and using 'git send-email
*.patch' - but of course, I could just as easily add '!*.patch' to my
.git/info/exclude to override the project default if we decide to go
with your patch.


> +++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
> @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Below is a COLO proxy ascii figure:
>  |         |  +------------------------------------------------------+  |     
>                    |        |                              |
>  |netfilter|  |                       |                         |    |  |   
> netfilter            |        |                              |
>  | +----------+ +----------------------------+                  |    |  |  
> +-----------------------------------------------------------+ |
> -| |       |  |                       |      |        out       |    |  |  |  
>                    |        |  filter excute order       | |
> +| |       |  |                       |      |        out       |    |  |  |  
>                    |        |  filter execute order       | |

You fixed the typo, but broke the whitespacing on this lineart. (twice)


> +++ b/docs/qemu-block-drivers.texi
> @@ -632,7 +632,7 @@ qemu-system-i386 -drive 
> file=iscsi://127.0.0.1/iqn.qemu.test/1 \
>  @end example
>  
>  
> -Howto set up a simple iSCSI target on loopback and accessing it via QEMU:
> +How to set up a simple iSCSI target on loopback and accessing it via QEMU:

While here, I would also: s/accessing/access/

> +++ b/docs/usb-storage.txt
> @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ too):
>  
>  
>  Number two is the newer usb attached scsi transport.  This one doesn't
> -automagically create a scsi disk, so you have to explicitly attach one
> +automatically create a scsi disk, so you have to explicitly attach one

This one may be intentional, as a play on English words. But changing it
may sound a bit more professional.

All your other typo fixes are good.  Looking forward to v2.

-- 
Eric Blake, Principal Software Engineer
Red Hat, Inc.           +1-919-301-3226
Virtualization:  qemu.org | libvirt.org



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