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Re: [Qemu-trivial] [PATCH for-2.8] docs: Fix description of the sentence


From: Eric Blake
Subject: Re: [Qemu-trivial] [PATCH for-2.8] docs: Fix description of the sentence
Date: Thu, 1 Dec 2016 08:57:26 -0600
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On 12/01/2016 12:55 AM, Zhang Chen wrote:
> Say it in another way to make it easier to understand.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Zhang Chen <address@hidden>
> Signed-off-by: Eric Blake <address@hidden>

I guess that's because I suggested the replacement text to use, even
though I didn't write the patch.

At any rate, since this is doc-only, it's safe for inclusion in 2.8, if
the maintainer wants to send a last-minute pull request (but if it
misses the release, that's okay too)

> Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil <address@hidden>
> ---
>  docs/colo-proxy.txt | 4 +++-
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/docs/colo-proxy.txt b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
> index 76767cb..c4941de 100644
> --- a/docs/colo-proxy.txt
> +++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
> @@ -158,7 +158,9 @@ secondary.
>  
>  == Usage ==
>  
> -Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly.
> +Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more
> +clearly describe the usage.
> +
>  Primary(ip:3.3.3.3):
>  -netdev 
> tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown
>  -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66
> 

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Eric Blake   eblake redhat com    +1-919-301-3266
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org

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