[lsd0001] branch master updated: clarifications and typos - gbr

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     new d436f98  clarifications and typos - gbr
d436f98 is described below

commit d436f9806810475ff3507e9679f45dd68ee17a3a
Author: Martin Schanzenbach <schanzen@gnunet.org>
AuthorDate: Tue May 30 11:04:13 2023 +0200

    clarifications and typos - gbr
---
 draft-schanzen-gns.xml | 9 ++++-----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index a846525..dfea80c 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -217,10 +217,9 @@
 
        <dt>Name</dt>
        <dd>
-         A name in GNS is a domain name as defined in  <xref target="RFC8499"/>
-         as an ordered list of labels.
-         Names are UTF-8 <xref target="RFC3629" /> strings consisting of the
-         list of labels concatenated with a label separator.
+         A name in GNS is a domain name as defined in  <xref 
target="RFC8499"/>:
+         Names are UTF-8 <xref target="RFC3629" /> strings consisting of an
+         ordered list of labels concatenated with a label separator.
          Names are resolved starting from the rightmost label.
          GNS does not impose length restrictions on names or labels.
          However, applications <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> ensure that name and label 
lengths are
@@ -1041,7 +1040,7 @@ zTLD[126..129].zTLD[63..125].zTLD[0..62]
        the GANA "GNS Record Types" registry (see <xref target="GANA"/>).
        Not supporting some zone types will result in resolution failures in 
case
        the respective zone type is encountered.
-       This is be a valid choice if some zone delegation record types have been
+       This can be a valid choice if some zone delegation record types have 
been
        determined to be cryptographically insecure.
        Zone delegation records <bcp14>MUST NOT</bcp14> be stored and published
        under the apex label.

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