www/server/staging/gnu40 gnu40.html

[Dora Scilipoti]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Dora Scilipoti <dora>   23/03/28 13:12:04

Modified files:
        server/staging/gnu40: gnu40.html 

Log message:
        Improvements.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/gnu40/gnu40.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.12&r2=1.13

Patches:
Index: gnu40.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/server/staging/gnu40/gnu40.html,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -b -r1.12 -r1.13
--- gnu40.html  19 Mar 2023 23:41:00 -0000      1.12
+++ gnu40.html  28 Mar 2023 17:12:03 -0000      1.13
@@ -33,14 +33,14 @@
                   plan</a> to develop <a href="/gnu/the-gnu-project.html">the 
GNU operation system</a>,
                    which would be entirely composed of <a 
href="https://fsf.org/tedx";>free software</a>.
                    The existence of a free operating system would enable 
people to operate their computers
-                   in freedom, rejecting the power of the business that 
distributed nonfree software.
+                   in freedom, throwing off the power of the developers of 
nonfree software.
                   <br>
-                  The GNU Project has developed into the global free software 
movement.
+                  The GNU Project has also built the global free software 
movement.
                   <br>
                   On September 27th 2023 we invite you to join the GNU 
community in
                   <a href="https://www.biel-bienne.ch/";>Biel/Bienne</a>
-                  to celebrate this important occassion, and creating a future 
where
-                  GNU is stronger than ever.</p>
+                  to celebrate this occasion, and help build a future where 
+                  users'computing freedom extends further than ever.</p>
 
          </div>
          <!-- end of tile 1 -->
@@ -51,10 +51,10 @@
 
                <p><strong>September 27 at the Volkshaus in Biel/Bienne, 
Switzerland</strong></p>
 
-               <p>Join us to celebrate the GNU Project's world-altering 
accomplishments with presentations
-                   about GNU packages, hacking on Free Software and making new 
releases!
+               <p>Join us to celebrate the GNU Project's freedom-spreading 
accomplishments with presentations
+                   about various GNU packages, hacking on free software and 
making new releases!
                   The 40th anniversary hacker meeting is open to all who want 
to celebrate, work on,
-                   or learn about Free Software.  We are putting together an 
appropriate schedule,
+                   or learn about free software.  We are putting together an 
appropriate schedule,
                    if you have something to contribute, please contact
                    <a href="mailto:gnu40@gnu.org";>gnu40@gnu.org</a> with an 
informal proposal.
                    We hope to put together a diverse selection of 
presentations, discussions and
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
                    <a href="https://www.biel-bienne.ch/";>Biel/Bienne</a>
                    is located a short walking distance from the central train 
station towards the
                    city center.  Biel/Bienne is centrally located in 
Switzerland and reachable
-                   in less than 2h by train from the Basel, Geneva and 
Z&uuml;rich airports.
+                   in less than 2h by train from the Basel, Geneva, and 
Z&uuml;rich airports.
                    Trains run every 30 minutes from about 5am to midnight.</p>
          </div>
          <!-- end of tile 2 -->
@@ -109,15 +109,10 @@
                    Attendees are welcome to contribute in cash, and
                    Europeans can also send a
                    <a href="https://gnunet.org/en/ev.html";>SEPA 
transfer</a>.</p>
-          <p>      You can also donate to the
-                   <a href="https://www.fsf.org";>Free Software Foundation</a>, 
which
-                  sponsors the GNU project (alas, not this event).</p>
-         <p class="c">
-               <a href="https://my.fsf.org/associate/support_freedom";>
-                 <img src="https://static.fsf.org/nosvn/donate.en.png";
-                          alt="[ Donate to the FSF ]" />
-               </a>
-         </p>
+          <p>      You can also 
+                   <a href="https://my.fsf.org/donate/";>donate</a> to the 
+                   Free Software Foundation, which sponsors the GNU project 
+                   (alas, not this event).</p>
        </div>
        <!-- end of tile 5 -->
 
@@ -141,10 +136,10 @@
                         alt="[ GNU 40 badge ]" style="width:40%;"/>
          </div>
          <p>
-               Embed this image on your Web page or blog.
+               Embed this image on your web page or blog.
          </p>
          <div class="c">
-           <textarea rows="5" cols="60" readonly>&lt;a 
href="https://gnu.org/gnu40"&gt;&lt;img src="GNU_40th_badge.svg" alt="[ 
Celebrate 40 years of GNU! ]" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;</textarea>
+           <textarea rows="5" cols="60" readonly>&lt;a 
href="https://gnu.org/gnu40"&gt;&lt;img src="GNU_40th_badge.png" alt="[ 
Celebrate 40 years of GNU! ]" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;</textarea>
          </div>
        </div>
        <!-- end of tile 7 -->
@@ -152,8 +147,8 @@
   </div>
 </div>
 
-<p>The banner (<a href="banner1-prueba.svg">source</a>) is
-available for use under <a 
href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0/";>CC BY-SA 2.0</a>.</p>
+<p>The banner (<a href="Banner4-acoplado.svg">source</a>) and the badge (<a 
href="GNU_40th_badge.svg">source</a>) are
+available for use under <a 
href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/";>CC BY-SA 4.0</a>.</p>
 
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 <!--#include virtual="/server/footer.html" -->
@@ -210,7 +205,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2023/03/19 23:41:00 $
+$Date: 2023/03/28 17:12:03 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>