www/audio-video audio-video.html

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 22/10/18 10:25:47

Modified files:
        audio-video    : audio-video.html 

Log message:
        More edits (RMS www-discuss 2022-10-18).

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/audio-video/audio-video.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.2&r2=1.3

Patches:
Index: audio-video.html
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RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/audio-video/audio-video.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -b -r1.2 -r1.3
--- audio-video.html    18 Oct 2022 11:53:02 -0000      1.2
+++ audio-video.html    18 Oct 2022 14:25:45 -0000      1.3
@@ -28,14 +28,14 @@
   <p>Speeches and interviews that are intended for the general public are
   listed in the category <a
   href="/audio-video/philosophy-recordings.html#content">
-  GNU Philosophy and History</a>. Some of them were given in Spanish or
-  French, and a few have been transcribed and/or subtitled. The <a
+  GNU Philosophy and History</a>. Some of them are in Spanish or French, and
+  a few of the recordings have been transcribed and/or subtitled. The <a
   href="/philosophy/speeches-and-interviews.html">transcriptions</a> are
   published in the Philosophy section.
 
-  <p>A quick search through the GNU Philosophy and History listing will
-  also let you discover other types of audio and video material which you
-  may be interested in.</p>
+  <p>Beside speeches and interviews, GNU Philosophy and History lists other
+  interesting audio and video material that a selection by type (at the top
+  of the list) will help you discover.</p>
 
   <p>Resources dealing with more technical subjects are listed separately.
   For example,</p>
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2022/10/18 11:53:02 $
+$Date: 2022/10/18 14:25:45 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>