www/server/staging/standards gnu-website-guidel...

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 21/02/18 11:32:30

Modified files:
        server/staging/standards: gnu-website-guidelines.html 

Log message:
        Minor rewording.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/standards/gnu-website-guidelines.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.14&r2=1.15

Patches:
Index: gnu-website-guidelines.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/server/staging/standards/gnu-website-guidelines.html,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -b -r1.14 -r1.15
--- gnu-website-guidelines.html 18 Feb 2021 13:17:15 -0000      1.14
+++ gnu-website-guidelines.html 18 Feb 2021 16:32:29 -0000      1.15
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
 </div>
 
 <p>Please be considerate of all who access our web pages, and accommodate
-them, including those who use text-based browsers or devices with limited 
computing power, as well as
-those with slow Internet connections. We wish to prevent web designs that look
+them, including those who use text-only browsers or devices with limited 
computing power, as well
+as those with slow Internet connections. We wish to prevent web designs that 
look
 great under one version of one browser, and ugly under many others.  Of
 course, please don't install any of the proprietary web browsers
 available if you don't already use them anyway.</p>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 href="mailto:gnu@gnu.org";>&lt;gnu@gnu.org&gt;</a>.</li>
 
 <li>The GNU website gives priority to software covered by either
-the <a href="/licenses/gpl-3.0.html">GNU General Public License</a> or
+the <a href="/licenses/gpl-3.0.html">GNU General Public License</a> or the
 <a href="/licenses/lgpl-3.0.html">GNU Lesser General Public License</a>.</li>
 
 <li>The use of heavy graphics should be minimized so pages load fast over
@@ -194,15 +194,15 @@
 href="#symlinks"><code>.symlinks</code></a>
 file to handle this.</li>
 
-<li id="NamingTranslations">If you translate your web page in different
-languages, please name the English file <code><var>article</var>.html</code>, 
and
-its translations <code><var>article.lang</var>.html</code>&mdash;
-<code><var>lang</var></code> should contain a two-letter code from <a
-href="https://www.loc.gov/standards/iso639-2/php/code_list.php";
+<li id="NamingTranslations">If you translate your web page (say,
+<code><var>article</var>.html</code>) in different languages, please
+name the translations <code><var>article.lang</var>.html</code>&mdash;
+<code><var>lang</var></code> should contain the relevant two-letter code
+from <a href="https://www.loc.gov/standards/iso639-2/php/code_list.php";
 rel="noopener">ISO 639-1</a>,
-and optionally an hyphen followed by the two-letter <i>Alpha-2</i> country code
-given in
-<a href="https://www.iso.org/obp/ui/#search/code/"; rel="noopener">ISO 
3166-1</a>.
+and optionally a hyphen followed by the two-letter <i>Alpha-2</i> country
+code from <a href="https://www.iso.org/obp/ui/#search/code/";
+rel="noopener">ISO 3166-1</a> (in lowercase).
 For example, the German translation of <code>not-ipr.html</code>
 should be named <code>not-ipr.de.html</code>; the Brazilian Portuguese
 translation should be named <code>not-ipr.pt-br.html</code>.</li>
@@ -748,7 +748,7 @@
 
 <li>
 Before the initial checkout, set the environment variable
-<code>CVS_RSH=ssh</code>.<br />In alternative, you can replace
+<code>CVS_RSH=ssh</code>.<br />Alternatively, you can replace
 <code>:ext:</code> with
 <a href="/software/trans-coord/manual/cvs/cvs.html#Connecting-with-rsh-or-ssh">
 <code>:extssh:</code></a> to use an external ssh program.</li>
@@ -1073,7 +1073,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2021/02/18 13:17:15 $
+$Date: 2021/02/18 16:32:29 $
 <!-- timestamp end --></p>
 </div>
 </div><!-- for class="inner", starts in the banner include -->