www/proprietary proprietary.html proprietary-su...

[Ali Reza Hayati]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Ali Reza Hayati <arh>   20/10/16 14:00:42

Modified files:
        proprietary    : proprietary.html proprietary-surveillance.html 
        proprietary/workshop: mal.rec 

Log message:
        Fixed reported problems

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.245&r2=1.246
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary-surveillance.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.339&r2=1.340
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/workshop/mal.rec?cvsroot=www&r1=1.237&r2=1.238

Patches:
Index: proprietary.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/proprietary.html,v
retrieving revision 1.245
retrieving revision 1.246
diff -u -b -r1.245 -r1.246
--- proprietary.html    16 Oct 2020 14:30:29 -0000      1.245
+++ proprietary.html    16 Oct 2020 18:00:37 -0000      1.246
@@ -176,11 +176,11 @@
   <li id="M202009100">
     <p>Internet-enabled watches with proprietary software
     are malware, violating people (specially children's)
-    privacy. In addition, they have a lot of security flaws. <a
-    
href="https://www.wired.com/story/kid-smartwatch-security-vulnerabilities/";>They
-    permit security brekaers (and unauthorized people) to access</a> the 
watch.</p>
+    privacy. In addition, they have a lot of security flaws. They <a
+    
href="https://www.wired.com/story/kid-smartwatch-security-vulnerabilities/";>
+    permit security breakers (and unauthorized people) to access</a> the 
watch.</p>
 
-    <p>Because of the security flaws, the watch can be accessed from 
unauthorized people/devices and those people/devices can use the watch to send 
messages which can be dangerous for people's privacy.</p>
+    <p>Thus, ill-intentioned unauthorized people can intercept communications 
between parent and child and spoof messages to and from the watch, possibly 
endangering the child.</p>
 
     <p><small>(Note that this article misuses the word &ldquo;<a
     href="/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Hacker">hackers</a>&rdquo;
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2020/10/16 14:30:29 $
+$Date: 2020/10/16 18:00:37 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: proprietary-surveillance.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/proprietary-surveillance.html,v
retrieving revision 1.339
retrieving revision 1.340
diff -u -b -r1.339 -r1.340
--- proprietary-surveillance.html       16 Oct 2020 14:30:29 -0000      1.339
+++ proprietary-surveillance.html       16 Oct 2020 18:00:37 -0000      1.340
@@ -2235,11 +2235,11 @@
   <li id="M202009100">
     <p>Internet-enabled watches with proprietary software
     are malware, violating people (specially children's)
-    privacy. In addition, they have a lot of security flaws. <a
-    
href="https://www.wired.com/story/kid-smartwatch-security-vulnerabilities/";>They
-    permit security brekaers (and unauthorized people) to access</a> the 
watch.</p>
+    privacy. In addition, they have a lot of security flaws. They <a
+    
href="https://www.wired.com/story/kid-smartwatch-security-vulnerabilities/";>
+    permit security breakers (and unauthorized people) to access</a> the 
watch.</p>
 
-    <p>Because of the security flaws, the watch can be accessed from 
unauthorized people/devices and those people/devices can use the watch to send 
messages which can be dangerous for people's privacy.</p>
+    <p>Thus, ill-intentioned unauthorized people can intercept communications 
between parent and child and spoof messages to and from the watch, possibly 
endangering the child.</p>
 
     <p><small>(Note that this article misuses the word &ldquo;<a
     href="/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Hacker">hackers</a>&rdquo;
@@ -2747,7 +2747,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2020/10/16 14:30:29 $
+$Date: 2020/10/16 18:00:37 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: workshop/mal.rec
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/workshop/mal.rec,v
retrieving revision 1.237
retrieving revision 1.238
diff -u -b -r1.237 -r1.238
--- workshop/mal.rec    16 Oct 2020 14:30:30 -0000      1.237
+++ workshop/mal.rec    16 Oct 2020 18:00:41 -0000      1.238
@@ -32,11 +32,11 @@
 Keywords: JBC Polywell Starlian Pingonaut ANIO Xplora
 Blurb: <p>Internet-enabled watches with proprietary software
 +   are malware, violating people (specially children's)
-+   privacy. In addition, they have a lot of security flaws. <a
-+   
href="https://www.wired.com/story/kid-smartwatch-security-vulnerabilities/";>They
-+   permit security brekaers (and unauthorized people) to access</a> the 
watch.</p>
++   privacy. In addition, they have a lot of security flaws. They <a
++   
href="https://www.wired.com/story/kid-smartwatch-security-vulnerabilities/";>
++   permit security breakers (and unauthorized people) to access</a> the 
watch.</p>
 +
-+   <p>Because of the security flaws, the watch can be accessed from 
unauthorized people/devices and those people/devices can use the watch to send 
messages which can be dangerous for people's privacy.</p>
++   <p>Thus, ill-intentioned unauthorized people can intercept communications 
between parent and child and spoof messages to and from the watch, possibly 
endangering the child.</p>
 +
 +   <p><small>(Note that this article misuses the word &ldquo;<a
 +   href="/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Hacker">hackers</a>&rdquo;