www/philosophy saying-no-even-once.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       20/05/29 21:10:10

Modified files:
        philosophy     : saying-no-even-once.html 

Log message:
        Rewrite the paragraph about suggesting free replacement XYZ.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/saying-no-even-once.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.5&r2=1.6

Patches:
Index: saying-no-even-once.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/saying-no-even-once.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -b -r1.5 -r1.6
--- saying-no-even-once.html    22 May 2020 06:52:46 -0000      1.5
+++ saying-no-even-once.html    30 May 2020 01:10:10 -0000      1.6
@@ -74,10 +74,12 @@
 
 <p>The FSF recommends <a
 
href="https://www.fsf.org/blogs/community/better-than-zoom-try-these-free-software-tools-for-staying-in-touch";>
-freedom-respecting methods</a> for jobs that unjust systems do. When
-one of them would be usable, you could add, &ldquo;If we have this
-conversation with XYZ, or some other libre software, I could
-join in.&rdquo;</p>
+freedom-respecting methods</a> for the sorts of communication that
+unjust systems do.  If
+one of them would be usable, you could add, &ldquo;If we use XYZ
+for this
+conversation, or some other libre software, I could
+participate.&rdquo;</p>
 
 <p>You can take one step. And once you've done it, sooner or later you
 can do it again. Eventually you may find you have changed your
@@ -143,7 +145,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2020/05/22 06:52:46 $
+$Date: 2020/05/30 01:10:10 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>