www/help evaluation.html

[John Darrington]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     John Darrington <jmd>   20/05/02 06:52:39

Modified files:
        help           : evaluation.html 

Log message:
        Evaluation.html: Eschew the word 'submit'

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/help/evaluation.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.56&r2=1.57

Patches:
Index: evaluation.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/help/evaluation.html,v
retrieving revision 1.56
retrieving revision 1.57
diff -u -b -r1.56 -r1.57
--- evaluation.html     15 Dec 2018 14:02:35 -0000      1.56
+++ evaluation.html     2 May 2020 10:52:38 -0000       1.57
@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@
 <h3 id="submit">Offering software to GNU</h3>
 
 <p>If you have written software which you would like to offer to the GNU
-Project, thank you very much!  This page includes a questionnaire for
-submitting your package, so that we can get the information needed and
-evaluate it as quickly as possible.</p>
+Project, thank you very much!  This page includes a questionnaire to be
+completed when sending us your package, so that we can get the information
+needed and evaluate it as quickly as possible.</p>
 
 <p>Please take your time filling out the questionnaire.  We've written
 it as preformatted text so you can copy it to your system and fill it out
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 
 <p>If you have released a free software package but don't wish to fill
 out the questionnaire and/or meet the requirements for official GNU
-packages, we still encourage you to submit it to the <a
+packages, we still encourage you to list it at the <a
 href="http://directory.fsf.org";>Free Software Directory</a>.  We want
 the Directory to cover all released free software packages.</p>
 
@@ -329,13 +329,13 @@
         to <a href="mailto:address@hidden";>
         &lt;address@hidden&gt;</a>.</p>
 
-        <p>For information on coordinating and submitting translations of
+        <p>For information on coordinating and contributing translations of
         our web pages, see <a
         href="/server/standards/README.translations.html">Translations
         README</a>. -->
 Please see the <a
 href="/server/standards/README.translations.html">Translations
-README</a> for information on coordinating and submitting translations
+README</a> for information on coordinating and contributing translations
 of this article.</p>
 </div>
 
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2018/12/15 14:02:35 $
+$Date: 2020/05/02 10:52:38 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>