www/philosophy network-services-arent-free-or-n...

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 20/01/07 11:54:09

Modified files:
        philosophy     : network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html 

Log message:
        Add missing 'we call it', fix parentheses, replace <acronym> with <abbr>
        (cf GNU Website Guidelines).

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.28&r2=1.29

Patches:
Index: network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html
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RCS file: 
/webcvs/www/www/philosophy/network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html,v
retrieving revision 1.28
retrieving revision 1.29
diff -u -b -r1.28 -r1.29
--- network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html 7 Jan 2020 13:55:48 -0000       
1.28
+++ network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html 7 Jan 2020 16:54:09 -0000       
1.29
@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@
 
 <p>There is one case where a service is directly comparable to a
 program: when using the service is equivalent to having a copy of a
-hypothetical program and running it yourself. In this case, Service as
-a Software Substitute (<acronym title="Service as a Software
-Substitute">SaaSS</acronym> (we coined that to be less vague and
+hypothetical program and running it yourself. In this case, we call it Service 
as
+a Software Substitute, or <abbr title="Service as a Software
+Substitute">SaaSS</abbr> (we coined that to be less vague and
 general than &ldquo;Software as a Service&rdquo;), and such a service
 is always a bad thing.  The job it does is the users' own computing,
 and the users ought to have full control over that.  The way for users
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2020/01/07 13:55:48 $
+$Date: 2020/01/07 16:54:09 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>