www/graphics freedo_on_the_beach.html

[Félicien PILLOT]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Félicien PILLOT <felandral>    19/09/24 09:07:39

Modified files:
        graphics       : freedo_on_the_beach.html 

Log message:
        Rewrite text and add mailto: link

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/graphics/freedo_on_the_beach.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.1&r2=1.2

Patches:
Index: freedo_on_the_beach.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/graphics/freedo_on_the_beach.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -b -r1.1 -r1.2
--- freedo_on_the_beach.html    24 Sep 2019 13:01:13 -0000      1.1
+++ freedo_on_the_beach.html    24 Sep 2019 13:07:39 -0000      1.2
@@ -15,13 +15,13 @@
    alt="&nbsp;[Freedo takes vacations on the beach]&nbsp;" /></a>
 </div>
 
-<p><a href="/graphics/freedo.html">Freedo</a>, the GNU Linux-libre
-mascott, takes vacations on the beach. He lies on a deckchair and
-drinks a straw drink.</p>
+<p><a href="/graphics/freedo.html">Freedo</a>, the mascot of GNU
+Linux-libre, is taking a vacation on the beach. He lies on a deckchair
+and drinks a straw drink.</p>
 
 <div id="license" class="infobox">
 <hr />
-<p>Copyright &copy; 2018 Jason Self &lt;address@hidden&gt;.</p>
+<p>Copyright &copy; 2018 Jason Self <a 
href="mailto:j@jxself";>&lt;address@hidden&gt;</a>.</p>
 
 <p>These images are available under the <a rel="license"
 href="/licenses/fdl-1.3.html">GNU Free Documentation License</a> v1.3
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2019/09/24 13:01:13 $
+$Date: 2019/09/24 13:07:39 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>