www/philosophy free-sw.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       19/07/29 17:25:27

Modified files:
        philosophy     : free-sw.html 

Log message:
        Clean-up of structuere.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/free-sw.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.164&r2=1.165

Patches:
Index: free-sw.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/free-sw.html,v
retrieving revision 1.164
retrieving revision 1.165
diff -u -b -r1.164 -r1.165
--- free-sw.html        20 Mar 2019 10:56:16 -0000      1.164
+++ free-sw.html        29 Jul 2019 21:25:25 -0000      1.165
@@ -128,8 +128,11 @@
 freedoms in question, and thus renders the program nonfree.
 </p>
 
-<p>The rest of this page clarifies certain points about what makes
-specific freedoms adequate or not.</p>
+<h3>Clarifying the line at various points</h3>
+
+<p>In the rest of this article we expain more precisely how far the
+various freedoms need to extend, on various issues, in order for a
+program to be free.</p>
 
 <h4>The freedom to run the program as you wish</h4>
 
@@ -155,7 +158,7 @@
 
 <p>
 In order for freedoms 1 and 3 (the freedom to make changes and the
-freedom to publish the changed versions) to be meaningful, you must have
+freedom to publish the changed versions) to be meaningful, you need to have
 access to the source code of the program.  Therefore, accessibility of
 source code is a necessary condition for free software.  Obfuscated
 &ldquo;source code&rdquo; is not real source code and does not count
@@ -642,7 +645,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2019/03/20 10:56:16 $
+$Date: 2019/07/29 21:25:25 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>