www/philosophy surveillance-vs-democracy.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       17/11/09 14:12:35

Modified files:
        philosophy     : surveillance-vs-democracy.html 

Log message:
        Minor fixes.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/surveillance-vs-democracy.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.51&r2=1.52

Patches:
Index: surveillance-vs-democracy.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/surveillance-vs-democracy.html,v
retrieving revision 1.51
retrieving revision 1.52
diff -u -b -r1.51 -r1.52
--- surveillance-vs-democracy.html      4 Apr 2017 12:56:12 -0000       1.51
+++ surveillance-vs-democracy.html      9 Nov 2017 19:12:35 -0000       1.52
@@ -218,11 +218,11 @@
 
 <p>For privacy's sake, you must avoid nonfree software since, as a
 consequence of giving others control of your computing, it
-is <a href="/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html">likely to spy
+is <a href="/malware/proprietary-surveillance.html">likely to spy
 on you</a>.
 Avoid <a href="/philosophy/who-does-that-server-really-serve.html">service
-as a software substitute</a>; as well as giving others control of your
-computing, it requires you to hand over all the pertinent data to the
+as a software substitute</a>; in addition to giving others control of how your
+computing is done, it requires you to hand over all the pertinent data to the
 server.</p>
 
 <p>Protect your friends' and acquaintances' privacy,
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2017/04/04 12:56:12 $
+$Date: 2017/11/09 19:12:35 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>