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From: Therese Godefroy
Subject: www/server/staging/readability free-sw.html ini...
Date: Fri, 21 Oct 2016 12:02:54 +0000 (UTC)

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 16/10/21 12:02:54

Modified files:
        server/staging/readability: free-sw.html 
                                    initial-announcement.html layout.css 
                                    manifesto.html right-to-read.he.html 
                                    right-to-read.html style.rtl.css 

Log message:
        2-column layout for all test pages; free-sw: edit subheads, use same 
format for #beyond-software and #open-source, emphasize 4 freedoms; 
right-to-read.html: update; layout.css: increase font-size in .article, add 
defs for .columns and div.column-liit, remove obsolete defs (also 
style.rtl.css), etc.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/readability/free-sw.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.3&r2=1.4
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/readability/initial-announcement.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.2&r2=1.3
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/readability/layout.css?cvsroot=www&r1=1.2&r2=1.3
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/readability/manifesto.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.2&r2=1.3
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/readability/right-to-read.he.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.2&r2=1.3
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/readability/right-to-read.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.1&r2=1.2
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/readability/style.rtl.css?cvsroot=www&r1=1.1&r2=1.2

Patches:
Index: free-sw.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/server/staging/readability/free-sw.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -b -r1.3 -r1.4
--- free-sw.html        19 Oct 2016 09:02:27 -0000      1.3
+++ free-sw.html        21 Oct 2016 12:02:53 -0000      1.4
@@ -16,38 +16,51 @@
 <title>What is free software?
 - GNU Project - Free Software Foundation</title>
 <style type="text/css" media="print,screen"><!--
-blockquote.subhead, .columns, .inline-block {
-   margin: 0;
+h3 {
+   margin-top: 2em;
+}
+.columns {
+   margin: 0 0 2em;
 }
-.columns p, .columns ul {
+.columns p, .columns li {
+   line-height: 1.5em;
    margin-bottom: 0;
 }
+.note {
+   margin: 1.5em 3% 0;
+}
 blockquote.intro {
    margin: 0 3%;
 }
+blockquote.subhead, .columns, .inline-block {
+   margin: 0;
+}
 blockquote.subhead p {
    font-size: 1.1em;
    text-align: center;
    padding: .3em .5em;
-   margin-top: 1.5em;
+   margin: 2em 0 1.5em;
    background: #f5f5f5;
 }
-.note {
-   margin: 1.5em 3% 0;
+.columns .emph-box {
+   margin-bottom: 1.5em;
+   background: #f7f7f7;
+   border-color: #e74c3c;
 }
address@hidden (min-width: 38em) {
-   .intro, .columns {
address@hidden (min-width: 48em) {
+   .intro {
       text-align: justify;
    }
    .intro p {
       margin: -.3em 0 0 0;
    }
-}
address@hidden (min-width: 48em) {
    .note {
       float: none;
       width: auto; max-width: 100%;
    }
+   .columns .emph-box {
+      margin: .3em 0 0;
+   }
 }
 --></style>
 <meta http-equiv="Keywords" content="GNU, FSF, Free Software Foundation, 
Linux, Emacs, GCC, Unix, Free Software, Operating System, GNU Kernel, HURD, GNU 
HURD, Hurd" />
@@ -59,6 +72,7 @@
 <h2 class="c">What is free software?</h2>
 <h3>The Free Software Definition</h3>
 
+<div class="article">
 <div class="columns">
 <blockquote  class="intro">
 <p class="inline-block">
@@ -72,7 +86,7 @@
 </blockquote>
 <!--#include virtual="/licenses/fsf-licensing.html" -->
 </div>
-<hr class="thin" />
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
 
 <div class="columns">
 <p class="inline-block">
@@ -103,6 +117,7 @@
 <blockquote class="subhead"><p>The four essential freedoms</p></blockquote>
 
 <div class="columns">
+<div class="emph-box inline-block">
 <p>
 A program is free software if the program's users have the
 four essential freedoms:
@@ -124,6 +139,7 @@
       Access to the source code is a precondition for this.
   </li>
 </ul>
+</div>
 
 <p class="inline-block">
 A program is free software if it gives users adequately all of these
@@ -143,8 +159,8 @@
 specific freedoms adequate or not.</p>
 </div>
 
-<blockquote class="subhead"><p>Freedoms for anyone, anywhere&hellip;
-but free doesn't mean useful</p></blockquote>
+<blockquote class="subhead"><p>Freedoms for anyone, anywhere,
+but free doesn't mean useful for what you want to do</p></blockquote>
 
 <div class="columns">
 <p>Freedom to distribute (freedoms 2 and 3) means you are free to
@@ -467,7 +483,7 @@
 </p>
 </div>
 
-<h3 id="beyond-software">Beyond Software</h3>
+<blockquote class="subhead"><p>Beyond Software</p></blockquote>
 
 <div class="columns">
 <p>
@@ -491,7 +507,7 @@
 </p>
 </div>
 
-<h3 id="open-source">Open Source?</h3>
+<blockquote class="subhead"><p>Open Source?</p></blockquote>
 
 <div class="columns">
 <p>
@@ -503,7 +519,7 @@
 never refers to freedom</a>.
 </p>
 </div>
-<hr class="thin" />
+</div>
 
 <h3 id="History">History</h3>
 
@@ -690,7 +706,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2016/10/19 09:02:27 $
+$Date: 2016/10/21 12:02:53 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: initial-announcement.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/server/staging/readability/initial-announcement.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -b -r1.2 -r1.3
--- initial-announcement.html   13 Oct 2016 11:25:36 -0000      1.2
+++ initial-announcement.html   21 Oct 2016 12:02:53 -0000      1.3
@@ -15,13 +15,15 @@
 <!-- Parent-Version: 1.77 -->
 <title>Initial Announcement - GNU Project - Free Software Foundation</title>
 <style type="text/css" media="print,screen"><!--
+blockquote { margin: 2.4em 6%; }
 .original { margin-left: 3%; }
 --></style>
-
 <!--#include virtual="/gnu/po/initial-announcement.translist" -->
 <!--#include virtual="/server/banner.html" -->
 <h2 class="c">Initial Announcement</h2>
 
+<div class="article">
+<blockquote>
 <p> This is the original announcement of the GNU Project, posted by
 <a href="http://www.stallman.org/";>Richard Stallman</a> on September
 27, 1983.</p>
@@ -31,10 +33,11 @@
 January 1984. Several of the philosophical concepts
 of <a href="/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a> were not
 clarified until a few years later.</p>
+</blockquote>
 
-<div class="article">
-<h3>Free Unix!</h3>
+<h3 class="sub">Free Unix!</h3>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>Starting this Thanksgiving I am going to write a complete
 Unix-compatible software system called GNU (for Gnu's Not Unix), and
 give it away free<a href="#f1">(1)</a> to everyone who can use it.
@@ -59,10 +62,11 @@
 Lisp will be available as system programming languages.  We will have
 network software based on MIT's chaosnet protocol, far superior to
 UUCP.  We may also have something compatible with UUCP.</p>
+</div>
 
+<h3 class="sub">Who Am I?</h3>
 
-<h3>Who Am I?</h3>
-
+<div class="columns">
 <p>I am Richard Stallman, inventor of the original much-imitated EMACS
 editor, now at the Artificial Intelligence Lab at MIT.  I have worked
 extensively on compilers, editors, debuggers, command interpreters,
@@ -70,9 +74,11 @@
 system.  I pioneered terminal-independent display support in ITS.  In
 addition I have implemented one crashproof file system and two window
 systems for Lisp machines.</p>
+</div>
 
-<h3>Why I Must Write GNU</h3>
+<h3 class="sub">Why I Must Write GNU</h3>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>I consider that the golden rule requires that if I like a program I
 must share it with other people who like it.  I cannot in good
 conscience sign a nondisclosure agreement or a software license
@@ -82,10 +88,11 @@
 principles, I have decided to put together a sufficient body of free
 software so that I will be able to get along without any software that
 is not free.</p>
+</div>
 
+<h3 class="sub">How You Can Contribute</h3>
 
-<h3>How You Can Contribute</h3>
-
+<div class="columns">
 <p>I am asking computer manufacturers for donations of machines and
 money.  I'm asking individuals for donations of programs and work.</p>
 
@@ -124,10 +131,11 @@
   Richard Stallman<br />
   166 Prospect St<br />
   Cambridge, MA 02139</p>
+</div>
 
+<h4 id="f1" class="sub">Poor choice of wording around &ldquo;free&rdquo;</h4>
 
-<h4 id="f1">Poor choice of wording around &ldquo;free&rdquo;</h4>
-
+<div class="columns">
 <p>The wording here was careless.  The intention was that nobody would
 have to pay for <b>permission</b> to use the GNU system.  But the
 words don't make this clear, and people often interpret them as saying
@@ -247,6 +255,7 @@
   Cambridge, MA 02139
 </pre>
 </div>
+</div>
 
 </div><!-- for id="content", starts in the include above -->
 <!--#include virtual="/server/footer.html" -->
@@ -306,7 +315,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2016/10/13 11:25:36 $
+$Date: 2016/10/21 12:02:53 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: layout.css
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/server/staging/readability/layout.css,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -b -r1.2 -r1.3
--- layout.css  16 Oct 2016 21:27:51 -0000      1.2
+++ layout.css  21 Oct 2016 12:02:53 -0000      1.3
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@
 .no-display { display: none; }
 .inline-block {
    display: inline-block;
-   margin: 0;
+   margin: 1em 0 0;
 }
 
 
@@ -299,10 +299,8 @@
 hr.thin {
    clear: both;
    height: 1px;
-   margin: 1.5em 0;
+   margin: 1.7em 0;
    border: none;
-   background: #d4d4d4;
-   background-image: linear-gradient(to right, #d4d4d4, #333, #d4d4d4);
 }
 
 
@@ -530,7 +528,7 @@
    padding: .4em 0;
    margin: .8em 0;
    color: #a42e2b;
-   border-bottom: 1px solid #d4d4d4;
+   border-bottom: 1px solid #bbb;
 }
 #outdated p { margin: .2em 0; }
 
@@ -952,18 +950,33 @@
 
 #content { margin-bottom: 2.5em; }
 
-.article { padding-top: .1em; }
-.article p, .article pre, .article li, .article dt, .article dd {
+.article { font-size: 1.1em; }
+
+.article p, .article li, .article dt,
+ .article dd, .article h3, .article h4 {
    line-height: 1.5em;
 }
+.article h3 { font-size: 1.4em; margin-top: 1.3em; }
 
address@hidden (min-width: 38em) {
-   .article {
-      clear: both;
-      text-align: justify;
-      max-width: 35.7em;
-      margin: auto;
-   }
+h3.sub { border-bottom: 1px solid #bbb; }
+
+.columns { margin: 0 0 1.7em; }
+
+.columns p { margin-bottom: 0; }
+
+dd.columns { margin-left: 3%; margin-right: 3%; }
+
+.column-limit {
+   height: .4em;
+   width: 10%;
+   margin: 2em auto;
+   background: #bbb;
+   background-image: linear-gradient(to right, white, #bbb, white);
+}
+
address@hidden (min-width: 48em) {
+   .article { text-align: justify; }
+   .article .center { text-align: center; }
    .columns {
       -webkit-column-count: 2;
       -webkit-column-gap: 1.5em;
@@ -975,14 +988,6 @@
    .columns > *:first-child { margin-top: 0; }
 }
 
address@hidden (min-width: 48em) {
-   .article { clear: both; padding: .1em 12% 0; }
-   .article ul, .article ol { margin-left: 0; margin-right: 0; }
-   .article h3, .article h4, .article h5 { margin-left: -8%; }
-   .article dt { margin-left: -4%; }
-   .article dl dd { margin: 1em 0 1.5em; }
-}
-
 
 /*** MISSION STATEMENT ***/
 

Index: manifesto.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/server/staging/readability/manifesto.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -b -r1.2 -r1.3
--- manifesto.html      13 Oct 2016 11:25:36 -0000      1.2
+++ manifesto.html      21 Oct 2016 12:02:53 -0000      1.3
@@ -16,21 +16,21 @@
 <title>The GNU Manifesto
 - GNU Project - Free Software Foundation</title>
 <style type="text/css" media="print,screen"><!--
-.article { padding-top: .1em; }
address@hidden (min-width: 38em) {
-   .left-column, .right-column { text-align: justify; }
+.article { margin-top: 2.5em; }
+.columns blockquote, .right {
+   margin: 0 3%;
 }
 @media (min-width: 48em) {
-   .left-column, .right-column { width: 48%; margin: 0; }
-   .left-column { float: left; }
-   .right-column { float: right; }
+   blockquote > p:first-child { margin-top: 0; }
 }
 --></style>
 <!--#include virtual="/gnu/po/manifesto.translist" -->
 <!--#include virtual="/server/banner.html" -->
 <h2 class="c">The GNU Manifesto</h2>
 
-<blockquote class="left-column">
+<div class="article">
+<div  class="columns">
+<blockquote>
 <p> The GNU Manifesto (which appears below) was written
 by <a href="http://www.stallman.org/";>Richard Stallman</a> in 1985 to
 ask for support in developing the GNU operating system.  Part of the
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 added since 1993 help clarify these points.</p>
 </blockquote>
 
-<div class="right-column">
+<div class="right">
 <p>If you want to install the GNU/Linux system, we recommend you use
 one of the <a href="/distros">100% free software GNU/Linux
 distributions</a>.  For how to contribute,
@@ -57,10 +57,10 @@
 use it to promote an
 <a href="/philosophy/open-source-misses-the-point.html">amoral approach</a> to 
the same field.</p>
 </div>
+</div>
+<h3 id="whats-gnu" class="sub">What's GNU?  Gnu's Not Unix!</h3>
 
-<div class="article" style="clear: both">
-<h3 id="whats-gnu">What's GNU?  Gnu's Not Unix!</h3>
-
+<div  class="columns">
 <p>
    GNU, which stands for Gnu's Not Unix, is the name for the complete
 Unix-compatible software system which I am writing so that I can give
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
 other volunteers are helping me.  Contributions of time, money,
 programs and equipment are greatly needed.</p>
 
-<p>
+<p class="inline-block">
    So far we have an Emacs text editor with Lisp for writing editor
 commands, a source level debugger, a yacc-compatible parser generator,
 a linker, and around 35 utilities.  A shell (command interpreter) is
@@ -104,9 +104,11 @@
 <p>
    To avoid horrible confusion, please pronounce the <em>g</em> in the
 word &ldquo;GNU&rdquo; when it is the name of this project.</p>
+</div>
 
-<h3 id="why-write">Why I Must Write GNU</h3>
+<h3 id="why-write" class="sub">Why I Must Write GNU</h3>
 
+<div  class="columns">
 <p>
    I consider that the Golden Rule requires that if I like a program I
 must share it with other people who like it.  Software sellers want to
@@ -124,17 +126,21 @@
 will be able to get along without any software that is not free.  I
 have resigned from the AI Lab to deny MIT any legal excuse to prevent
 me from giving GNU away.<a href="#f2a">(2)</a></p>
+</div>
 
-<h3 id="compatible">Why GNU Will Be Compatible with Unix</h3>
+<h3 id="compatible" class="sub">Why GNU Will Be Compatible with Unix</h3>
 
+<div  class="columns">
 <p>
    Unix is not my ideal system, but it is not too bad.  The essential
 features of Unix seem to be good ones, and I think I can fill in what
 Unix lacks without spoiling them.  And a system compatible with Unix
 would be convenient for many other people to adopt.</p>
+</div>
 
-<h3 id="available">How GNU Will Be Available</h3>
+<h3 id="available" class="sub">How GNU Will Be Available</h3>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
    GNU is not in the public domain.  Everyone will be permitted to
 modify and redistribute GNU, but no distributor will be allowed to
@@ -142,9 +148,11 @@
 <a href="/philosophy/categories.html#ProprietarySoftware">proprietary</a>
 modifications will not be allowed.  I want to make sure that all
 versions of GNU remain free.</p>
+</div>
 
-<h3 id="why-help">Why Many Other Programmers Want to Help</h3>
+<h3 id="why-help" class="sub">Why Many Other Programmers Want to Help</h3>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
    I have found many other programmers who are excited about GNU and
 want to help.</p>
@@ -169,9 +177,11 @@
 sharing.  This can give us a feeling of harmony which is impossible if
 we use software that is not free.  For about half the programmers I
 talk to, this is an important happiness that money cannot replace.</p>
+</div>
 
-<h3 id="contribute">How You Can Contribute</h3>
+<h3 id="contribute" class="sub">How You Can Contribute</h3>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <blockquote>
 <p>
 (Nowadays, for software tasks to work on, see the <a
@@ -215,9 +225,11 @@
 important as making money.  I view this as a way of enabling dedicated
 people to devote their full energies to working on GNU by sparing them
 the need to make a living in another way.</p>
+</div>
 
-<h3 id="benefit">Why All Computer Users Will Benefit</h3>
+<h3 id="benefit" class="sub">Why All Computer Users Will Benefit</h3>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
    Once GNU is written, everyone will be able to obtain good system
 software free, just like air.<a href="#f2">(3)</a></p>
@@ -263,19 +275,19 @@
 <p>
    Copying all or parts of a program is as natural to a programmer as
 breathing, and as productive.  It ought to be as free.</p>
+</div>
 
-<h3 id="rebutted-objections">Some Easily Rebutted Objections to GNU's 
Goals</h3>
+<h3 id="rebutted-objections" class="sub">Some Easily Rebutted Objections to 
GNU's Goals</h3>
 
 <dl>
 <dt id="support">
 <strong>&ldquo;Nobody will use it if it is free, because that means
-they can't rely on any support.&rdquo;</strong></dt>
-
-<dt>
+they can't rely on any support.&rdquo;</strong>
+<br />
 <strong>&ldquo;You have to charge for the program to pay for providing
 the support.&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
    If people would rather pay for GNU plus service than get GNU free
 without service, a company to provide just service to people who have
@@ -314,13 +326,12 @@
 
 <dt id="advertising">
 <strong>&ldquo;You cannot reach many people without advertising, and
-you must charge for the program to support that.&rdquo;</strong></dt>
-
-<dt>
+you must charge for the program to support that.&rdquo;</strong>
+<br />
 <strong>&ldquo;It's no use advertising a program people can get
 free.&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
    There are various forms of free or very cheap publicity that can be
 used to inform numbers of computer users about something like GNU.  But
@@ -341,7 +352,7 @@
 <strong>&ldquo;My company needs a proprietary operating system to get
 a competitive edge.&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
    GNU will remove operating system software from the realm of
 competition.  You will not be able to get an edge in this area, but
@@ -361,7 +372,7 @@
 <strong>&ldquo;Don't programmers deserve a reward for their
 creativity?&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
    If anything deserves a reward, it is social contribution.
 Creativity can be a social contribution, but only in so far as society
@@ -374,14 +385,14 @@
 <strong>&ldquo;Shouldn't a programmer be able to ask for a reward for
 his creativity?&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
    There is nothing wrong with wanting pay for work, or seeking to
 maximize one's income, as long as one does not use means that are
 destructive.  But the means customary in the field of software today
 are based on destruction.</p>
 
-<p>
+<p class="inline-block">
    Extracting money from users of a program by restricting their use of
 it is destructive because the restrictions reduce the amount and the
 ways that the program can be used.  This reduces the amount of wealth
@@ -402,7 +413,7 @@
 <dt id="starve">
 <strong>&ldquo;Won't programmers starve?&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
    I could answer that nobody is forced to be a programmer.  Most of us
 cannot manage to get any money for standing on the street and making
@@ -441,7 +452,7 @@
 <strong>&ldquo;Don't people have a right to control how their
 creativity is used?&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
 &ldquo;Control over the use of one's ideas&rdquo; really constitutes
 control over other people's lives; and it is usually used to make
@@ -497,8 +508,8 @@
 <strong>&ldquo;Competition makes things get done
 better.&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
-<p>
+<dd class="columns">
+<p class="inline-block">
    The paradigm of competition is a race: by rewarding the winner, we
 encourage everyone to run faster.  When capitalism really works this
 way, it does a good job; but its defenders are wrong in assuming it
@@ -519,7 +530,7 @@
 <strong>&ldquo;Won't everyone stop programming without a monetary
 incentive?&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
    Actually, many people will program with absolutely no monetary
 incentive.  Programming has an irresistible fascination for some
@@ -556,8 +567,8 @@
 <strong>&ldquo;We need the programmers desperately.  If they demand
 that we stop helping our neighbors, we have to obey.&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
-<p>
+<dd class="columns">
+<p class="inline-block">
    You're never so desperate that you have to obey this sort of demand.
 Remember: millions for defense, but not a cent for tribute!</p>
 </dd>
@@ -565,7 +576,7 @@
 <dt id="living">
 <strong>&ldquo;Programmers need to make a living somehow.&rdquo;</strong></dt>
 
-<dd>
+<dd class="columns">
 <p>
    In the short run, this is true.  However, there are plenty of ways
 that programmers could make a living without selling the right to use a
@@ -600,7 +611,6 @@
      Suppose everyone who buys a computer has to pay x percent of the
      price as a software tax.  The government gives this to an agency
      like the NSF to spend on software development.</p>
-
 <p>
      But if the computer buyer makes a donation to software development
      himself, he can take a credit against the tax.  He can donate to
@@ -614,13 +624,17 @@
 
 <p>
      The consequences:</p>
-
 <ul>
 <li>The computer-using community supports software development.</li>
 <li>This community decides what level of support is needed.</li>
 <li>Users who care which projects their share is spent on can
           choose this for themselves.</li>
 </ul>
+</dd>
+</dl>
+
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
    In the long run, making programs free is a step toward the
 postscarcity world, where nobody will have to work very hard just to
@@ -639,9 +653,9 @@
 competition.  Free software will greatly reduce these drains in the
 area of software production.  We must do this, in order for technical
 gains in productivity to translate into less work for us.</p>
-</dd>
-</dl>
+</div>
 
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-<div class="c">
-<h2>הזכות לקרוא</h2>
+<h2 class="center">הזכות לקרוא</h2>
 
-<p>
+<div class="article">
+<p class="center">
 מאת <a href="http://www.stallman.org/";><strong>ריצ'ארד 
סטולמן</strong></a></p>
-<p>
+<p class="center">
 <em>מאמר זה התפרסם בכתב העת <cite>Communication of the 
ACM</cite> (כרך 40
-מס' 2) שיצא בפברואר 1997.</em></p>
-</div>
+מס' 2) שיצא בפברואר&nbsp;1997.</em></p>
 <hr class="thin" />
 
-<div class="article">
-<blockquote id="tycho"><p>
+<blockquote id="tycho" class="center"><p>
             מתוך <cite>הדרך לטייקו</cite>, קובץ מאמרים 
על מייסדי המהפיכה של לונה, שפורסם
-בלונה-סיטי בשנת 2096.
+בלונה-סיטי בשנת&nbsp;2096.
 </p></blockquote>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 עבור דן הלברט, הדרך לטייקו החלה בתקופת 
לימודיו בקולג' - כאשר ליסה לנץ שאלה
 אותו אם הוא יסכים להשאיל לה את המחשב שלו. 
שלה התקלקל, והסיכוי היחיד שלה
@@ -86,7 +106,10 @@
 מחקר. (10% מדמי הקריאה הועברו כתמלוגים 
לחוקרים שכתבו את המאמרים, ודן שהיה
 תלמיד מוכשר וששאף לקריירה אקדמית, קיווה 
שבעתיד, המחקרים שלו, באם יהיו אליהם
 מספיק הפניות, יכניסו לו מספיק כסף כדי שיוכל 
להחזיר את דמי ההלוואה.)</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit nodisplay"></div>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 בשלב מאוחר יותר, דן ילמד שהיו זמנים שבהם כל 
אחד יכל לגשת לספריה ולקרוא את
 המאמרים האקדמיים, ואפילו ספרים, מבלי שיהיה 
צריך לשלם עבור קריאתם. היו זמנים
@@ -129,7 +152,10 @@
 debugger הפכו כעת לבלתי חוקיות, אלא שגם אם היתה 
לך מערכת הפעלה כזאת, לא יכלת
 להתקין אותה מבלי לדעת את הקוד הסודי של 
חומרת המחשב שלך, ולא היה שום סיכוי
 שבעולם שמייקרוסופט או ה- FBI ימסרו לך את הקוד 
הסודי הזה.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit nodisplay"></div>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 לדן היה ברור שהוא לא יוכל סתם כך להשאיל 
לליסה את המחשב שלו. מצד שני, לא היה
 לו הלב לסרב לה. היא היתה האישה שהוא אהב, 
ועצם העובדה שהיא הרגישה מספיק
@@ -160,7 +186,10 @@
 וגדל של סטודנטים באוניברסיטאות החלו 
להשתמש במחשבים. עד אז אוניברסיטאות נקטו
 בגישה שונה - הם הענישו רק במקרים שהתגלו 
פעילויות מזיקות. העובדה שהפעילות
 עלולה להיות בלתי חוקית לא היוותה באותה 
תקופה סיבה מספקת לענישה.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit nodisplay"></div>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 למרות הפרסים, ליסה לא דיווחה ל- SPA וגם לא 
לבית הספר. להיפך, העובדה שהוא
 הסכים לעשות עבורה את מה שעשה רק חיזקה את 
הקשר ביניהם, והובילה לחתונתם. היא
@@ -169,12 +198,13 @@
 ההגבלות שהיו שם על העתקות, וגם על החוקה 
המקורית של ארה"ב. הם עברו ללונה, שם
 הם מצאו אנשים אחרים שכמוהם ברחו מזרועה 
הארוכה של ה- SPA. כשמרד Tycho החל
 בשנת 2062, הזכות האוניברסלית לקרוא, היתה אחת 
ממטרותיו. </p>
+</div>
 
 <div id="AuthorsNote">
 <h3>הערת המחבר</h3>
 
-<p>הערה זו עודכנה ב- 2002</p>
-
+<blockquote id="updated"><p>הערה זו עודכנה ב- 
2002</p></blockquote>
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 המלחמה על הזכות לקרוא, היא מלחמה שמתרחשת 
ממש כעת. אמנם יקח אולי 50 שנה עד
 שדרך החיים הנוכחית תעלם לחלוטין, אבל מרבית 
החוקים והפרקטיקות שהוזכרו בסיפור
@@ -209,7 +239,10 @@
 המחשבים שלנו, ופחות ופחות שליטה למשתמשי 
המחשב על המחשבים שלהם. מאז, השם של
 ה- SSSCA שונה ל- CBDTPA. ניתן לראות בזה ראשי תיבות 
של Consume But Don't Try
 Programming Act (כלומר ”צרוך, אבל אל תנסה לתכנת 
בעצמך“).</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 בזמן שהסיפור נכתב, ה- SPA איים על ספקיות 
שרותי אינטרנט קטנות, שיאפשרו ל- SPA
 לעקוב אחרי כל הלקוחות שלהן. מרבית הספקיות נ
כנעו מכיוון שהן לא יכלו לעמוד בכל
@@ -217,7 +250,6 @@
 D3). לפחות ספקית אחת, Community ConneXion באוקלנד, 
קליפורניה, סרבה לדרישת ה-
 SPA, והוגשה נגדה תביעה משפטית. אח"כ, ה- SPA 
החליטו לחזור בהם מהתביעה, אולם
 קיבלו את ה- DMCA שנתן להם את את הכוח שהם 
חיפשו.</p>
-
 <p>
 ה- SPA, ארגון שקיים גם במציאות, ושראשי התיבות 
שלו הן Software Publishers
 Association, (כלומר איגוד מפיצי התוכנה), [בגירסה 
האנגלית של הסיפור, ה-SPA
@@ -229,13 +261,15 @@
 על עמיתיהם לעבודה ועל חבריהם. מסע היחצ"נות 
הטרוריסטי של ה- BSA בארגנטינה ב-
 2001 פיזר איומים מרומזים שאנשים ששיתפו תוכנ
ות עלולים למצוא את עצמם כקורבנות
 אונס בכלא.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
 
 <p>
 מדיניות האבטחה האוניברסיטאית שתוארה 
בסיפור איננה דמיונית - לדוגמא, באחת
 מהאוניברסיטאות באזור שיקגו, כאשר אתה נכנס 
למחשב אתה מקבל את ההודעה הבאה
 (הגרשיים במקור):</p>
 
-<blockquote><p>
+<blockquote id="login"><p>
 מערכת זו הינה לשימוש משתמשים מורשים בלבד. 
משתמשים ללא הרשאה, או שחורגים
 מההרשאה שניתנה להם, חשופים לכך שכל 
פעולותיהן יהיו מנוטרות ומתועדות ע"י אחד
 מאנשי הסיסטם. במהלך המעקב אחרי אנשים 
שמשתמשים במערכת באופן לא תקין או במהלך
@@ -249,12 +283,10 @@
 <p>
 זו גישה מעניינת לתיקון הרביעי לחוקה: לחץ על 
כל האנשים, להסכים מראש לויתור על
 הזכויות שהתיקון מקנה להם.</p>
-</div>
 
 <h3 id="BadNews"></h3>
-
 <p>
-<br /><a href="#AuthorsNote">הערת המחבר</a> עוסקת על הקרב 
על הזכות לקרוא,
+<a href="#AuthorsNote">הערת המחבר</a> עוסקת על הקרב על 
הזכות לקרוא,
 ועל נושא הפיקוח האלקטרוני. המלחמה על 
הזכויות הללו כבר מתחילה.
 </p>
 
@@ -296,9 +328,10 @@
 reverse the overextension of copyright and patent powers.</li>
 </ul>
 </div>
-<hr class="thin" />
+</div>
 
-<blockquote id="fsfs" class="c"><p class="big">מאמר זה פורסם ב-<br 
/><a
+<hr class="thin" />
+<blockquote id="fsfs"><p class="big">מאמר זה פורסם ב-<br /><a
 href="http://shop.fsf.org/product/free-software-free-society/";><cite>Free
 Software, Free Society: The Selected Essays of
 Richard&nbsp;M.&nbsp;Stallman</cite></a></p></blockquote>
@@ -381,7 +414,7 @@
 <p class="unprintable"><!-- timestamp start -->
 Updated:
 
-$Date: 2016/10/13 11:04:49 $
+$Date: 2016/10/21 12:02:53 $
 
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-<div class="c">
-<h2>The Right to Read</h2>
+<h2 class="center">The Right to Read</h2>
 
-<p>
+<div class="article">
+<p class="center">
 by <a href="http://www.stallman.org/";><strong>Richard Stallman</strong></a></p>
-
-<p>
+<p class="center">
 <em>This article appeared in the February 1997 issue
 of <cite>Communications of the ACM</cite> (Volume&nbsp;40, 
Number&nbsp;2).</em></p>
-</div>
 <hr class="thin" />
 
-<div class="article">
-<blockquote id="tycho"><p>
+<blockquote id="tycho"><p class="center">
             From <cite>The Road To Tycho</cite>, a collection of
             articles about the antecedents of the Lunarian
-            Revolution, published in Luna City in 2096.
+            Revolution, published in Luna City in&nbsp;2096.
 </p></blockquote>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 For Dan Halbert, the road to Tycho began in college&mdash;when Lissa
 Lenz asked to borrow his computer.  Hers had broken down, and unless
@@ -80,7 +106,10 @@
 fees went to the researchers who wrote the papers; since Dan aimed for
 an academic career, he could hope that his own research papers, if
 frequently referenced, would bring in enough to repay this loan.)</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit no-display"></div>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 Later on, Dan would learn there was a time when anyone could go to the
 library and read journal articles, and even books, without having to
@@ -124,7 +153,10 @@
 knowing your computer's root password.  And neither
 the FBI nor
 Microsoft Support would tell you that.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit no-display"></div>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 Dan concluded that he couldn't simply lend Lissa his computer.  But he
 couldn't refuse to help her, because he loved her.  Every chance to
@@ -161,7 +193,10 @@
 using computers.  Previously, universities maintained a different
 approach to student discipline; they punished activities that were
 harmful, not those that merely raised suspicion.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit no-display"></div>
 
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 Lissa did not report Dan to the SPA.  His decision to help her led to
 their marriage, and also led them to question what they had been
@@ -171,38 +206,53 @@
 to Luna, where they found others who had likewise gravitated away from
 the long arm of the SPA.  When the Tycho Uprising began in 2062, the
 universal right to read soon became one of its central aims.</p>
+</div>
 
-<blockquote class="announcement"><p>
-<a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html";>Join our mailing list
-about the dangers of eBooks</a>.
-</p></blockquote>
+<div class="announcement">
+<blockquote>
+<p><a href="http://defectivebydesign.org/ebooks.html";>Join our mailing list 
about the dangers of e-books</a>.</p>
+</blockquote>
+</div>
 
 <div id="AuthorsNote">
 <h3>Author's Notes</h3>
 
-<ul>
-<li>This story is supposedly a historical article that will be written in
+<ul class="no-bullet">
+<li>
+<div class="columns">
+<p>This story is supposedly a historical article that will be written in
 the future by someone else, describing Dan Halbert's youth under a
 repressive society shaped by the unjust forces that use &ldquo;pirate&rdquo; as
 propaganda. So it uses the terminology of that society.
 I have tried to project it forwards into something more visibly
 oppressive. See <a
 href="/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Piracy">&ldquo;Piracy&rdquo;</a>.
+</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
+
+<blockquote id="updated"><p>The following notes have been updated several 
times since the first
+publication of the story.</p></blockquote>
 </li>
 
 <li>
+<div class="columns">
 <p>Computer-enforced restrictions on lending or reading books (and other
 kinds of published works) are known as DRM, short for
 &ldquo;Digital Restrictions Management&rdquo;.  To
 eliminate DRM, the Free Software Foundation has
 established the <a href="http://DefectiveByDesign.org";>Defective by
 Design</a> campaign.  We ask for your support.</p>
+
+<p>The Electronic Frontier Foundation, a separate organization not
+related to the Free Software Foundation, also campaigns against
+DRM.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
 </li>
 
 <li>
-<p>The following note has been updated several times since the first
-publication of the story.</p>
-
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 The battle for the right to read is already being fought.  Although it
 may take 50 years for our past freedoms to fade into obscurity, most
@@ -232,31 +282,41 @@
 campaign with two new proposed treaties, the TPP and the TTIP.  The
 TPP would impose the DMCA, along with many other wrongs, on 12
 countries on the Pacific Ocean.  The TTIP would impose similar
-strictures on Europe.  Americans should demand their congressional
-representatives reject the attempt to approve the TPP in the lame-duck
-session after the 2016 election.</p>
-
-<p>
-With Windows Vista, Microsoft admitted it had built in a back door:
-Microsoft can use it to forcibly install software
-&ldquo;upgrades,&rdquo; even if users consider them rather to be
-downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
-run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
-users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.</p>
+strictures on Europe.  All these treaties must be defeated, or
+abolished.</p>
 
 <p>
 Even the World Wide Web Consortium has fallen under the shadow of the
 copyright industry; it is on the verge of approving a DRM system as an
 official part of the web specifications.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
+</li>
 
-<p>
+<li>
+<div class="columns">
+<p class="emph-box">
 Nonfree software tends to have <a href="/proprietary/">abusive
-features of many kinds</a>, which support the conclusion that
+features of many kinds</a>, which lead to the conclusion that
 <a href="/philosophy/free-software-even-more-important.html">you can
 never trust a nonfree program</a>.  We must insist on free (libre)
 software only, and reject nonfree programs.</p>
 
 <p>
+With Windows Vista, Microsoft admitted it had built in a back door:
+Microsoft can use it to forcibly install software
+&ldquo;upgrades,&rdquo; even if users consider them rather to be
+downgrades.  It can also order all machines running Vista to refuse to
+run a certain device driver.  The main purpose of Vista's clampdown on
+users was to impose DRM that users can't overcome.  Of course, Windows
+10 is no better.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
+</li>
+
+<li>
+<div class="columns">
+<p>
 One of the ideas in the story was not proposed in reality until 2002.
 This is the idea that the FBI and Microsoft will keep the
 root passwords for your personal computers, and not let you have
@@ -285,7 +345,12 @@
 whether the machine's owner can install any other system (such as
 GNU/Linux) is under Microsoft's control.  We call this <em>restricted
 boot</em>.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
+</li>
 
+<li>
+<div class="columns">
 <p>
 In 1997, when this story was first published, the SPA was
 threatening small Internet service providers, demanding they permit
@@ -304,13 +369,17 @@
 on their coworkers and friends.  A BSA terror campaign in
 Argentina in 2001 made slightly veiled threats that people sharing
 software would be raped in prison.</p>
+</div>
+<div class="column-limit"></div>
+</li>
 
+<li>
 <p>
 The university security policies described above are not imaginary.
 For example, a computer at one Chicago-area university displayed this
 message upon login:</p>
 
-<blockquote><p>
+<blockquote id="login"><p>
 This system is for the use of authorized users only.  Individuals using
 this computer system without authority or in the excess of their authority
 are subject to having all their activities on this system monitored and
@@ -333,8 +402,8 @@
 <h3 id="BadNews">Bad News</h3>
 
 <p>
-The battle for the right to read is already in progress,
-The enemy is organized, while we are not, so it is going against us.
+The battle for the right to read is going against us so far.
+The enemy is organized, and we are not.
 </p>
 
 <p>Today's commercial
@@ -364,19 +433,21 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>Amazon's e-book distribution is oppressive, too.  It identifies the
-user and records what books the user obtains.  It also requires
-users to agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share copies
-with others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to such a
-contract, the lesser evil would be to defy it and share copies
-anyway; however, to be entirely good, we should not agree to it in the
-first place.</p>
+user and records what books the user obtains.  It also requires users
+to agree to an antisocial contract that they won't share copies with
+others.  My conscience tells me that, if I had agreed to such a
+contract, the lesser evil would be to defy it and share copies anyway;
+however, to be entirely good, I should not agree to it in the first
+place.  Therefore, I refuse to agree to such contracts, whether for
+software, for e-books, for music, or for anything else.</p>
 
 <p>If we want to stop the bad news and create some good news, we need
-to organize and fight.  The
+to organize and fight.  Subscribe to the
 FSF's <a href="http://defectivebydesign.org";> Defective by Design</a>
-campaign has made a start; subscribe to the campaign's mailing
-list to lend a hand.  And <a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate";>join
-the FSF</a> to help fund our work.
+campaign to lend a hand.  You
+can <a href="http://www.fsf.org/associate";>join the FSF</a> to support
+our work more generally.  There is also a <a href="/help/help.html">list of 
ways
+to participate in our work</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h3 id="References">References</h3>
@@ -402,9 +473,8 @@
        Domain</a>&mdash;an organization which aims to resist and
        reverse the overextension of copyright and patent powers.</li>
 </ul>
-</div>
-<hr class="thin" />
 
+<hr class="thin" />
 <blockquote id="fsfs"><p class="big">This essay is published
 in <a href="http://shop.fsf.org/product/free-software-free-society/";><cite>Free
 Software, Free Society: The Selected Essays of Richard
@@ -418,6 +488,7 @@
                id="copy-protection">Copy Protection: Just Say No</a>,
                published in Computer World.</li>
 </ul>
+</div>
 
 </div><!-- for id="content", starts in the include above -->
 <!--#include virtual="/server/footer.html" -->
@@ -476,7 +547,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2016/10/15 07:54:45 $
+$Date: 2016/10/21 12:02:53 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

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diff -u -b -r1.1 -r1.2
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@@ -66,10 +66,6 @@
       float: left;
       margin: .2em 2em 1em 0;
    }
-   .article h3, .article h4, .article h5 {
-      margin-left: 0; margin-right: -8%;
-   }
-   .article dt { margin-left: 0; margin-right: -4%; }
 }
 @media (min-width: 55em) {
    .pict.wide {



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