www/philosophy words-to-avoid.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       15/11/26 11:31:13

Modified files:
        philosophy     : words-to-avoid.html 

Log message:
        Improve item on open source.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.213&r2=1.214

Patches:
Index: words-to-avoid.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html,v
retrieving revision 1.213
retrieving revision 1.214
diff -u -b -r1.213 -r1.214
--- words-to-avoid.html 26 Nov 2015 11:30:36 -0000      1.213
+++ words-to-avoid.html 26 Nov 2015 11:31:12 -0000      1.214
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@
 source&rdquo; as a substitute for &ldquo;free software.&rdquo;  Those terms
 refer to a <a href="/philosophy/open-source-misses-the-point.html">
 different set of views</a> based on different values.</p>  The free software
-movement campaigns for freedom for all that do computing, as a matter
+movement campaigns for your freedom in your computing, as a matter
 of justice.  The open source non-movement does not campaign for anything
 in this way.
 
@@ -1109,7 +1109,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2015/11/26 11:30:36 $
+$Date: 2015/11/26 11:31:12 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>