www/server/staging for-ios.html

[Fabio Pesari]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Fabio Pesari <fabiop>   15/11/01 12:21:29

Modified files:
        server/staging : for-ios.html 

Log message:
        Applied rms' revisions

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/for-ios.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.12&r2=1.13

Patches:
Index: for-ios.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/server/staging/for-ios.html,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -b -r1.12 -r1.13
--- for-ios.html        29 Oct 2015 08:21:34 -0000      1.12
+++ for-ios.html        1 Nov 2015 12:21:28 -0000       1.13
@@ -52,30 +52,25 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-We have <a href="/software/for-windows.html">
-a page which lists free replacements for popular Windows programs</a>
-as a first step towards replacing Windows with
-<a href="/distros">GNU/Linux</a>.
-Someone suggested making a similar page for iOS, but the two cases
-are quite different.
-</p>
-
-<p>
-While Windows can be easily replaced with a free operating system
-in most cases, the same cannot be said about
-iOS - there are ways to install
+We have long had
+<a href="/software/for-windows.html">a page which lists free replacements
+for popular Windows programs</a>
+as a first step towards replacing Windows with GNU/Linux.
+Someone suggested making a similar page for iOS, but the two cases are
+quite different. Windows can be easily replaced with a free operating system on
+most PCs, but not iOS: there are ways to
+install
 <a href="/philosophy/android-and-users-freedom.html">Android</a>
-on some iThings but its free counterpart, Replicant,
-cannot be installed on any of them.
+on some iThings, but its free counterpart,
+Replicant, cannot be installed on any of them.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-These reasons (along with <a
-href="/proprietary/malware-apple.html">these</a>)
-could be sufficient for us to avoid recommending
-any iOS apps altogether, however we feel that it is important
-to list those few free programs which
-can also run on Replicant or can interoperate with it.
+These reasons (along with <a href="/proprietary/malware-apple.html">these</a>)
+could be sufficient for us to avoid recommending any iOS apps altogether;
+however, we feel that it is
+valid and useful to list those few free programs which can also run on
+Replicant or can interoperate with programs on Replicant.
 </p>
 
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@@ -287,7 +282,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2015/10/29 08:21:34 $
+$Date: 2015/11/01 12:21:28 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>