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From: GNUN
Subject: www/philosophy/po free-sw.af.po free-sw.ar.po f...
Date: Tue, 18 Jun 2013 05:30:01 +0000

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     GNUN <gnun>     13/06/18 05:30:00

Modified files:
        philosophy/po  : free-sw.af.po free-sw.ar.po free-sw.bg.po 
                         free-sw.de.po free-sw.es.po free-sw.fr.po 
                         free-sw.hr.po free-sw.it.po free-sw.ja.po 
                         free-sw.nl.po free-sw.pl.po free-sw.pot 
                         free-sw.pt-br.po free-sw.ru.po free-sw.sk.po 
                         free-sw.sr.po free-sw.tr.po free-sw.zh-tw.po 
                         is-ever-good-use-nonfree-program.fr.po 
                         philosophy.ar.po philosophy.bg.po 
                         philosophy.ca.po philosophy.cs.po 
                         philosophy.de.po philosophy.el-diff.html 
                         philosophy.el.po philosophy.es.po 
                         philosophy.fr.po philosophy.hr.po 
                         philosophy.ja.po philosophy.pl.po 
                         philosophy.pot philosophy.pt-br.po 
                         philosophy.ro.po philosophy.ru.po 
                         philosophy.sq.po philosophy.sr.po 
                         philosophy.zh-cn-diff.html philosophy.zh-cn.po 
                         proprietary-surveillance.de.po 
                         proprietary-surveillance.fr.po 
                         proprietary-surveillance.pot rms-kol.fr.po 
                         rms-kol.pot rms-kol.translist 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.ar.po 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.es.po 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.fr.po 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.hr.po 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.ja.po 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.ko-diff.html 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.ko.po 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.pl.po 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.pot 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.ro.po 
                         who-does-that-server-really-serve.ru.po 

Log message:
        Automatic update by GNUnited Nations.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.af.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.36&r2=1.37
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.ar.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.57&r2=1.58
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.bg.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.36&r2=1.37
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.de.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.33&r2=1.34
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.es.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.72&r2=1.73
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.fr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.70&r2=1.71
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.hr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.15&r2=1.16
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.it.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.92&r2=1.93
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.ja.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.32&r2=1.33
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.nl.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.8&r2=1.9
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.pl.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.55&r2=1.56
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.pot?cvsroot=www&r1=1.40&r2=1.41
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.pt-br.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.8&r2=1.9
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.ru.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.34&r2=1.35
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.sk.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.36&r2=1.37
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.sr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.37&r2=1.38
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.tr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.47&r2=1.48
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.zh-tw.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.16&r2=1.17
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/is-ever-good-use-nonfree-program.fr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.1&r2=1.2
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.ar.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.45&r2=1.46
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.bg.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.71&r2=1.72
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.ca.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.68&r2=1.69
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.cs.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.8&r2=1.9
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.de.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.55&r2=1.56
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.el-diff.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.7&r2=1.8
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.el.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.34&r2=1.35
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.es.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.91&r2=1.92
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.fr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.89&r2=1.90
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.hr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.2&r2=1.3
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.ja.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.17&r2=1.18
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.pl.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.54&r2=1.55
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.pot?cvsroot=www&r1=1.58&r2=1.59
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.pt-br.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.52&r2=1.53
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.ro.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.24&r2=1.25
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.ru.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.15&r2=1.16
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.sq.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.17&r2=1.18
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.sr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.62&r2=1.63
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.zh-cn-diff.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.15&r2=1.16
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.zh-cn.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.29&r2=1.30
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/proprietary-surveillance.de.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.5&r2=1.6
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/proprietary-surveillance.fr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.3&r2=1.4
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/proprietary-surveillance.pot?cvsroot=www&r1=1.4&r2=1.5
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/rms-kol.fr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.27&r2=1.28
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/rms-kol.pot?cvsroot=www&r1=1.10&r2=1.11
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/rms-kol.translist?cvsroot=www&r1=1.7&r2=1.8
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.ar.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.29&r2=1.30
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.es.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.26&r2=1.27
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.fr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.25&r2=1.26
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.hr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.5&r2=1.6
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.ja.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.6&r2=1.7
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.ko-diff.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.6&r2=1.7
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.ko.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.10&r2=1.11
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.pl.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.40&r2=1.41
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.pot?cvsroot=www&r1=1.27&r2=1.28
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.ro.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.13&r2=1.14
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/who-does-that-server-really-serve.ru.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.25&r2=1.26

Patches:
Index: free-sw.af.po
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.af.po,v
retrieving revision 1.36
retrieving revision 1.37
diff -u -b -r1.36 -r1.37
--- free-sw.af.po       27 May 2013 03:59:14 -0000      1.36
+++ free-sw.af.po       18 Jun 2013 05:29:55 -0000      1.37
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+"requirement is a real problem if the requirement is nontrivial; otherwise it "
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+
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+#.         Please send your comments and general suggestions in this regard
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+#~ "\">maniere om kontak te maak</a> met die FSF.<br /> Stuur gebroke skakels "
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Index: free-sw.ar.po
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.ar.po,v
retrieving revision 1.57
retrieving revision 1.58
diff -u -b -r1.57 -r1.58
--- free-sw.ar.po       27 May 2013 03:59:14 -0000      1.57
+++ free-sw.ar.po       18 Jun 2013 05:29:55 -0000      1.58
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
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Index: free-sw.ja.po
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Index: free-sw.nl.po
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retrieving revision 1.47
retrieving revision 1.48
diff -u -b -r1.47 -r1.48
--- free-sw.tr.po       27 May 2013 03:59:15 -0000      1.47
+++ free-sw.tr.po       18 Jun 2013 05:29:56 -0000      1.48
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Index: free-sw.zh-tw.po
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/po/free-sw.zh-tw.po,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -b -r1.16 -r1.17
--- free-sw.zh-tw.po    27 May 2013 03:59:15 -0000      1.16
+++ free-sw.zh-tw.po    18 Jun 2013 05:29:56 -0000      1.17
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Index: philosophy.bg.po
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+
+&lt;p&gt;&lt;!-- TRANSLATORS: Ignore the original text in this paragraph,
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+        We work hard and do our best to provide accurate, good quality
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+        to &lt;a href="mailto:address@hidden"&gt;
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-Copyright &copy; 2011 Free Software Foundation, Inc.&lt;/p&gt;
+Copyright</strong></del></span> <span 
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+&lt;!-- Regarding copyright, in general, standalone pages (as opposed to
+     files generated as part of manuals) on the GNU web server should
+     be under CC BY-ND 3.0 US.  Please do NOT change or remove this
+     without talking with the webmasters or licensing team first.
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+     year, i.e., a year in which the document was published (including
+     being publicly visible on the web or in a revision control system).
+     
+     There is more detail about copyright years in the GNU Maintainers
+     Information document, www.gnu.org/prep/maintain. --&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Copyright</em></ins></span> &copy; <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>2011</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>2013</em></ins></span> Free Software Foundation, 
Inc.&lt;/p&gt;
+
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-Commons Attribution-NoDerivs 3.0 United States License&lt;/a&gt;.
+Commons Attribution-NoDerivs 3.0 United States <span 
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+&lt;p&gt;
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+++ philosophy.ja.po    18 Jun 2013 05:29:57 -0000      1.18
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Index: philosophy.pl.po
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Index: philosophy.pot
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Index: philosophy.pt-br.po
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Index: philosophy.ro.po
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/po/philosophy.ro.po,v
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--- philosophy.ru.po    2 Oct 2012 08:29:27 -0000       1.15
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Index: philosophy.sq.po
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--- philosophy.sq.po    20 Feb 2013 13:46:50 -0000      1.17
+++ philosophy.sq.po    18 Jun 2013 05:29:58 -0000      1.18
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--- philosophy.sr.po    2 Oct 2012 00:29:38 -0000       1.62
+++ philosophy.sr.po    18 Jun 2013 05:29:58 -0000      1.63
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class="inserted"><ins><em>2013</em></ins></span> Free Software Foundation, 
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+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
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+#| "SaaS and proprietary software lead to similar harmful results, but the "
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+#| "These two issues are often confused, and not only by accident.  Web "
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+#| msgid ""
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+#| msgid ""
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+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
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@@ -272,15 +441,34 @@
 
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+
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+# | results back {+to her+} or acts {+directly+} on [-them directly.-] {+her
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+#| msgid ""
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+#| "invites users to do their computing on that server.  Users send their "
+#| "data to the server, which does their computing on the data thus provided, "
+#| "then sends the results back or acts on them directly."
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+"not so, it isn't SaaSS."
+msgstr ""
+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
+# | These servers wrest control from the users even more inexorably than
+# | proprietary software.  With proprietary software, users typically get an
+# | executable file but not the source code.  That makes it hard [-for
+# | programmers-] to study the code that is running, so it's hard to determine
+# | what the program really does, and hard to change it.
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "These servers wrest control from the users even more inexorably than "
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+# | where the users can't see or touch it.  Thus it is impossible for them to
+# | ascertain what it really does, and impossible to change it.
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "With SaaS, the users do not have even the executable file: it is on the "
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+"With SaaSS, the users do not have even the executable file that does their "
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+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
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+# | to the malicious features of certain proprietary software.-]For instance,
+# | some proprietary programs are &ldquo;spyware&rdquo;: the program sends out
+# | data about users' computing activities.  Microsoft Windows sends
+# | information about users' activities to Microsoft.  Windows Media Player
+# | [-and RealPlayer report-] {+reports+} what each user watches or listens
+# | to.  {+The Amazon Kindle reports which pages of which books the user looks
+# | at, and when.  Angry Birds reports the user's geolocation history.+}
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "Furthermore, SaaS automatically leads to harmful consequences equivalent "
+#| "to the malicious features of certain proprietary software.  For instance, "
+#| "some proprietary programs are &ldquo;spyware&rdquo;: the program sends "
+#| "out data about users' computing activities.  Microsoft Windows sends "
+#| "information about users' activities to Microsoft.  Windows Media Player "
+#| "and RealPlayer report what each user watches or listens to."
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+# | obtain the user's data.  Instead, users must send their data to the server
+# | in order to use it.  This has the same effect as spyware: the server
+# | operator gets the [-data.  He gets it with-] {+data&mdash;with+} no
+# | special effort, by the nature of SaaS{+S+}.
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "Unlike proprietary software, SaaS does not require covert code to obtain "
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+#| "of SaaS."
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+"applications also have universal back doors; for instance, the Steam client "
+"for GNU/Linux allows the developer to remotely install modified versions."
+msgstr ""
 
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+# | can't accept that.-] {+user, and that power is something we must resist.+}
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "Thus, SaaS is equivalent to total spyware and a gaping wide back door, "
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+#| "accept that."
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+
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+
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+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "Does avoiding SaaS mean you refuse to use any network servers run by "
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+#| "then sends the results back or acts on them directly."
+msgid ""
+"Service as a Software Substitute (SaaSS) means using a service as a "
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+"someone sets up a network server that does certain computing tasks&mdash;for "
+"instance, modifying a photo, translating text into another language, etc."
+"&mdash;then invites users to do computing via that server.  A user of the "
+"server would send her data to the server, which does <em>her own computing</"
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+"The computing is <em>her own</em> because, by assumption, she could, in "
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+"not that program is available to her at present).  When this assumption is "
+"not so, it isn't SaaSS."
+msgstr ""
+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
+# | These servers wrest control from the users even more inexorably than
+# | proprietary software.  With proprietary software, users typically get an
+# | executable file but not the source code.  That makes it hard [-for
+# | programmers-] to study the code that is running, so it's hard to determine
+# | what the program really does, and hard to change it.
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "These servers wrest control from the users even more inexorably than "
+#| "proprietary software.  With proprietary software, users typically get an "
+#| "executable file but not the source code.  That makes it hard for "
+#| "programmers to study the code that is running, so it's hard to determine "
+#| "what the program really does, and hard to change it."
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+# | With SaaS{+S+}, the users do not have even the executable [-file:-] {+file
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+# | where the users can't see or touch it.  Thus it is impossible for them to
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+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "With SaaS, the users do not have even the executable file: it is on the "
+#| "server, where the users can't see or touch it.  Thus it is impossible for "
+#| "them to ascertain what it really does, and impossible to change it."
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+"Furthermore, SaaSS automatically leads to consequences equivalent to the "
+"malicious features of certain proprietary software."
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+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
+# | [-Furthermore, SaaS automatically leads to harmful consequences equivalent
+# | to the malicious features of certain proprietary software.-]For instance,
+# | some proprietary programs are &ldquo;spyware&rdquo;: the program sends out
+# | data about users' computing activities.  Microsoft Windows sends
+# | information about users' activities to Microsoft.  Windows Media Player
+# | [-and RealPlayer report-] {+reports+} what each user watches or listens
+# | to.  {+The Amazon Kindle reports which pages of which books the user looks
+# | at, and when.  Angry Birds reports the user's geolocation history.+}
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "Furthermore, SaaS automatically leads to harmful consequences equivalent "
+#| "to the malicious features of certain proprietary software.  For instance, "
+#| "some proprietary programs are &ldquo;spyware&rdquo;: the program sends "
+#| "out data about users' computing activities.  Microsoft Windows sends "
+#| "information about users' activities to Microsoft.  Windows Media Player "
+#| "and RealPlayer report what each user watches or listens to."
+msgid ""
+"For instance, some proprietary programs are &ldquo;spyware&rdquo;: the "
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+"sends information about users' activities to Microsoft.  Windows Media "
+"Player reports what each user watches or listens to.  The Amazon Kindle "
+"reports which pages of which books the user looks at, and when.  Angry Birds "
+"reports the user's geolocation history."
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+# | Unlike proprietary software, SaaS{+S+} does not require covert code to
+# | obtain the user's data.  Instead, users must send their data to the server
+# | in order to use it.  This has the same effect as spyware: the server
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+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "Unlike proprietary software, SaaS does not require covert code to obtain "
+#| "the user's data.  Instead, users must send their data to the server in "
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+#| "operator gets the data.  He gets it with no special effort, by the nature "
+#| "of SaaS."
+msgid ""
+"Unlike proprietary software, SaaSS does not require covert code to obtain "
+"the user's data.  Instead, users must send their data to the server in order "
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+"universal back door with which Microsoft can forcibly change any software on "
+"the machine.  Nearly all portable phones have them, too.  Some proprietary "
+"applications also have universal back doors; for instance, the Steam client "
+"for GNU/Linux allows the developer to remotely install modified versions."
+msgstr ""
 
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+"result is the same as using a proprietary application program with a "
+"universal back door: someone has the power to silently impose changes in how "
+"the user's computing gets done."
+msgstr ""
 
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+# | {+door.  It+} gives the server operator unjust power over the [-user.  We
+# | can't accept that.-] {+user, and that power is something we must resist.+}
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "Thus, SaaS is equivalent to total spyware and a gaping wide back door, "
+#| "and gives the server operator unjust power over the user.  We can't "
+#| "accept that."
+msgid ""
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-msgstr "Razrješavanje SaaS problema iz problema vlasničkog softvera"
+msgid "SaaSS and SaaS"
+msgstr ""
 
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+"this problem occurs."
+msgstr ""
+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
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+"&ldquo; Service as a Software Substitute &rdquo;, which defines the bad "
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+
+#. type: Content of: <h3>
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+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid "Untangling the SaaS Issue from the Proprietary Software Issue"
+msgid "Untangling the SaaSS Issue from the Proprietary Software Issue"
+msgstr "Razrješavanje SaaS problema iz problema vlasničkog softvera"
+
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+#, fuzzy
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+#| "SaaS and proprietary software lead to similar harmful results, but the "
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+"SaaSS, the mechanism is that you don't have the copy that's doing your "
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da "
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+# | developers use the vague term &ldquo;web application&rdquo; to lump the
+# | server software together with programs run on your machine in your
+# | browser.  Some web pages install [-nontrivial or-] {+nontrivial,+} even
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+#| "These two issues are often confused, and not only by accident.  Web "
+#| "developers use the vague term &ldquo;web application&rdquo; to lump the "
+#| "server software together with programs run on your machine in your "
+#| "browser.  Some web pages install nontrivial or even large JavaScript "
+#| "programs temporarily into your browser without informing you.  <a href=\"/"
+#| "philosophy/javascript-trap.html\">When these JavaScript programs are "
+#| "nonfree</a>, they are as bad as any other nonfree software.  Here, "
+#| "however, we are concerned with the problem of the server software itself."
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+#| msgid ""
+#| "Many free software supporters assume that the problem of SaaS will be "
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+#| "server are free, that doesn't protect you <em>as the server's user</em> "
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+#| "you."
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"
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+# | you do on it, unless it's <em>your</em> server.  [-The rest would-]  {+It
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+#| msgid ""
+#| "Releasing the server software source code does benefit the community: "
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+#| "software.  But none of these servers would give you control over "
+#| "computing you do on it, unless it's <em>your</em> server.  The rest would "
+#| "all be SaaS.  SaaS always subjects you to the power of the server "
+#| "operator, and the only remedy is, <em>Don't use SaaS!</em> Don't use "
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+# | Distinguishing SaaS{+S+} from Other Network Services
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid "Distinguishing SaaS from Other Network Services"
+msgid "Distinguishing SaaSS from Other Network Services"
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+"substitutes for that program, so it is Service as a Software Substitute, or "
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+
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+
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+#| "Does avoiding SaaS mean you refuse to use any network servers run by "
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+#.         replace it with the translation of these two:
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-
-&lt;title&gt;Who Does That Server Really Serve? - GNU Project - Free Software 
Foundation (FSF)&lt;/title&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;!-- Parent-Version: 1.75 
--&gt;</em></ins></span>
+&lt;title&gt;Who Does That Server Really Serve?
+- GNU Project - Free Software <span class="removed"><del><strong>Foundation 
(FSF)&lt;/title&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Foundation&lt;/title&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
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@@ -21,13 +22,25 @@
 
 &lt;p&gt;by &lt;strong&gt;Richard Stallman&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;(First published
-by &lt;a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>href="http://bostonreview.net/BR35.2/stallman.php"&gt;</strong></del></span>
 <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>href="http://www.bostonreview.net/richard-stallman-free-software-DRM"&gt;</em></ins></span>
-Boston Review&lt;/a&gt;.)&lt;/p&gt;
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;p&gt;(First</strong></del></span>
+
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;blockquote&gt;&lt;p&gt;(The first version 
was</em></ins></span> published <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>by</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>in</em></ins></span> &lt;a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>href="http://bostonreview.net/BR35.2/stallman.php"&gt;</strong></del></span>
 <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>href="http://www.bostonreview.net/richard-stallman-free-software-DRM"&gt;</em></ins></span>
+Boston <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Review&lt;/a&gt;.)&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> 
<span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Review&lt;/a&gt;.)&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;On the Internet, proprietary software isn't the only 
way to
-lose your freedom.  Software as a Service is another way to let
-someone else have power over your computing.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
+lose your freedom.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Software</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Service</em></ins></span> as a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Service</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Software Substitute, or SaaSS,</em></ins></span> is
+another way to let someone else have power over your
+computing.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
+
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS means using a service implemented by 
someone else as a
+substitute for running your copy of a program.  The term is ours;
+articles and ads won't use it, and they won't tell you whether a
+service is SaaSS.  Instead they will probably use the vague and
+distracting term &ldquo;cloud&rdquo;, which lumps SaaSS together with
+various other practices, some abusive and some ok.  With the
+explanation and examples in this page, you can tell whether a service
+is SaaSS.</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;h3&gt;Background: How Proprietary Software Takes Away Your 
Freedom&lt;/h3&gt;
 
@@ -53,221 +66,366 @@
 &lt;p&gt;With free software, we, the users, take back control of our
 computing.  Proprietary software still exists, but we can exclude it
 from our lives and many of us have done so.  However, we now face a
-new threat to our control over our computing: Software as a Service.
-For our freedom's sake, we have to reject that too.&lt;/p&gt;
-
-&lt;h3&gt;How Software as a Service Takes Away Your Freedom&lt;/h3&gt;
-
-&lt;p&gt;Software as a Service (SaaS) means that someone sets up a network
-server that does certain computing tasks&mdash;running spreadsheets,
-word processing, translating text into another language,
-etc.&mdash;then invites users to do their computing on that server.
-Users send their data to the server, which does their computing on the
-data thus provided, then sends the results back or acts on them
-directly.&lt;/p&gt;
+new threat to our control over our computing: <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Software</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Service</em></ins></span> as a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Service.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Software
+Substitute (SaaSS).</em></ins></span>  For our freedom's sake, we have to 
reject that
+too.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;h3&gt;How <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Software</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Service</em></ins></span> as a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Service</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Software Substitute</em></ins></span> Takes Away Your 
Freedom&lt;/h3&gt;
+
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;p&gt;Software</strong></del></span>
+
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;p&gt;Service</em></ins></span> as a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Service (SaaS)</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Software Substitute (SaaSS) means using a service as a
+substitute for running your copy of a program.  Concretely, 
it</em></ins></span> means
+that someone sets up a network server that does certain computing <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>tasks&mdash;running spreadsheets,
+word processing,</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>tasks&mdash;for instance, modifying a 
photo,</em></ins></span> translating text into
+another language, etc.&mdash;then invites users to do <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>their</strong></del></span> computing <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>on</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>via</em></ins></span>
+that server.
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>Users</strong></del></span>  <span 
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<span class="removed"><del><strong>their</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>her</em></ins></span> data to the server,
+which does <span class="removed"><del><strong>their 
computing</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;em&gt;her 
own computing&lt;/em&gt;</em></ins></span> on the data thus provided, then
+sends the results back <span class="inserted"><ins><em>to 
her</em></ins></span> or acts <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>directly</em></ins></span> on <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>them
+directly.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>her 
behalf.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;The computing is &lt;em&gt;her own&lt;/em&gt; because, by assumption, 
she
+could, in principle, have done it by running a program on her own
+computer (whether or not that program is available to her at
+present).  When this assumption is not so, it isn't 
SaaSS.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;These servers wrest control from the users even more inexorably
 than proprietary software.  With proprietary software, users typically
 get an executable file but not the source code.  That makes it hard
-for programmers to study the code that is running, so it's hard to
-determine what the program really does, and hard to change it.&lt;/p&gt;
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-&lt;p&gt;With SaaS, the users do not have even the executable file: it is on
-the server, where the users can't see or touch it.  Thus it is
-impossible for them to ascertain what it really does, and impossible
-to change it.&lt;/p&gt;
-
-&lt;p&gt;Furthermore, SaaS automatically leads to harmful consequences
-equivalent to the malicious features of certain proprietary software.
-For instance, some proprietary programs are &ldquo;spyware&rdquo;: the
-program sends out data about users' computing activities.  Microsoft
-Windows sends information about users' activities to Microsoft.
-Windows Media Player and RealPlayer report what each user watches or
-listens to.&lt;/p&gt;
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>for programmers</strong></del></span> to
+study the code that is running, so it's hard to determine what the
+program really does, and hard to change it.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;With <span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS,</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS,</em></ins></span> the users do not have 
even the executable <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>file:</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>file that
+does their computing:</em></ins></span> it is on
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>the</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>someone else's</em></ins></span> server, where the 
users
+can't see or touch it.  Thus it is impossible for them to ascertain
+what it really does, and impossible to change it.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Furthermore, <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS</em></ins></span> automatically leads to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>harmful</strong></del></span> consequences 
equivalent
+to the malicious features of certain proprietary <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>software.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>software.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;</em></ins></span> For instance, some proprietary programs are 
&ldquo;spyware&rdquo;:
+the program sends out data about users' computing activities.
+Microsoft Windows sends information about users' activities to
+Microsoft.  Windows Media Player <span class="removed"><del><strong>and 
RealPlayer report</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>reports</em></ins></span> what each user watches or
+listens <span class="removed"><del><strong>to.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>to.  The Amazon Kindle reports which pages of 
which books the
+user looks at, and when.  Angry Birds reports the user's geolocation
+history.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
-&lt;p&gt;Unlike proprietary software, SaaS does not require covert code to
+&lt;p&gt;Unlike proprietary software, <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS</em></ins></span> does not require covert code 
to
 obtain the user's data.  Instead, users must send their data to the
 server in order to use it.  This has the same effect as spyware: the
-server operator gets the data.  He gets it with no special effort, by
-the nature of SaaS.&lt;/p&gt;
+server operator gets the <span class="removed"><del><strong>data.  He gets it 
with</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>data&mdash;with</em></ins></span> no special effort, 
by
+the nature of <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
-&lt;p&gt;Some proprietary programs can mistreat users under remote command.
-For instance, Windows has a back door with which Microsoft can
-forcibly change any software on the machine.  The Amazon Kindle e-book
+&lt;p&gt;Some proprietary <span class="removed"><del><strong>programs can 
mistreat users under remote command.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>operating systems have a universal back door,
+permitting someone to remotely install software changes.</em></ins></span>  For
+instance, Windows has a <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>universal</em></ins></span> back door with which 
Microsoft can
+forcibly change any software on the machine.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>The Amazon Kindle e-book
 reader (whose name suggests it's intended to burn people's books) has
-an Orwellian back door that Amazon used in 2009
+an Orwellian</strong></del></span>  <span class="inserted"><ins><em>Nearly all 
portable
+phones have them, too.  Some proprietary applications also have
+universal</em></ins></span> back <span class="removed"><del><strong>door that 
Amazon used in 2009
 to &lt;a 
href="http://www.nytimes.com/2009/07/18/technology/companies/18amazon.html";
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&lt;cite&gt;1984&lt;/cite&gt; and
-&lt;cite&gt;Animal Farm&lt;/cite&gt; which the users had purchased from 
Amazon.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;cite&gt;Animal Farm&lt;/cite&gt; which</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>doors; for instance,</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>users had purchased from Amazon.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;SaaS inherently gives the server operator the power to change the
-software in use, or the users' data being operated on.  Once again, no
-special code is needed to do this.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;SaaS inherently gives</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Steam client for GNU/Linux
+allows the developer to remotely install modified versions.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Thus, SaaS is equivalent to total spyware and a gaping wide back
-door, and gives the server operator unjust power over the user.  We
+&lt;p&gt;With SaaSS,</em></ins></span> the server operator <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>the power to</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>can</em></ins></span> change the software in <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>use, or</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>use on</em></ins></span>
+the <span class="removed"><del><strong>users' data being operated on.  Once 
again, no
+special code is needed</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>server.  He ought to be able</em></ins></span> to do 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>this.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Thus, SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>this, since it's his computer;
+but the result</em></ins></span> is <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>equivalent to total spyware 
and</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>the same as using a 
proprietary application program
+with</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>gaping 
wide</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>universal</em></ins></span> back
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>door, and</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>door: someone has the power to silently impose
+changes in how the user's computing gets done.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Thus, SaaSS is equivalent to running proprietary software with
+spyware and a universal back door.  It</em></ins></span> gives the server 
operator
+unjust power over the <span class="removed"><del><strong>user.  We
 can't accept that.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;h3&gt;Untangling the SaaS Issue from the Proprietary Software 
Issue&lt;/h3&gt;
+&lt;h3&gt;Untangling</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>user, and that power is something we must
+resist.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;h3&gt;SaaSS and SaaS&lt;/h3&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;SaaS and proprietary software lead to similar harmful results, but
-the causal mechanisms are different.  With proprietary software, the
-cause is that you have and use a copy which is difficult or illegal to
-change.  With SaaS, the cause is that you use a copy you don't
-have.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;Originally we referred to this problematical practice as &ldquo;
+SaaS &rdquo;, which stands for &ldquo; Software as a Service &rdquo;.
+It's a commonly used term for setting up software on a server rather
+than offering copies of it to users, and we thought it described
+precisely the cases where this problem occurs.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Subsequently we became aware that</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>term</em></ins></span> SaaS <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>is sometimes used
+for communication services&mdash;activities for which this issue is
+not applicable.  In addition, the term &ldquo; Software as a Service
+&rdquo; doesn't explain &lt;em&gt;why&lt;/em&gt; the practice is bad.  So we
+coined the term &ldquo; Service as a Software Substitute &rdquo;,
+which defines the bad practice more clearly and says what is bad
+about it.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;h3&gt;Untangling the SaaSS</em></ins></span> Issue from the Proprietary 
Software Issue&lt;/h3&gt;
+
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;p&gt;SaaS</strong></del></span>
+
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;p&gt;SaaSS</em></ins></span> and 
proprietary software lead to similar harmful results, but
+the <span class="removed"><del><strong>causal</strong></del></span> mechanisms 
are different.  With proprietary software, the
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>cause</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>mechanism</em></ins></span> is that you have 
and use a copy which is difficult <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>or</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>and/or</em></ins></span>
+illegal to change.  With <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS,</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>cause</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>mechanism</em></ins></span> is that you <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>use a copy you</strong></del></span> don't
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>have.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>have
+the copy that's doing your computing.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;These two issues are often confused, and not only by accident.  Web
 developers use the vague term &ldquo;web application&rdquo; to lump
 the server software together with programs run on your machine in your
-browser.  Some web pages install nontrivial or even large JavaScript
-programs temporarily into your browser without informing
+browser.  Some web pages install <span class="removed"><del><strong>nontrivial 
or</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>nontrivial,</em></ins></span> even large JavaScript
+programs <span class="removed"><del><strong>temporarily</strong></del></span> 
into your browser without informing
 you.  &lt;a href="/philosophy/javascript-trap.html"&gt;When these JavaScript
-programs are nonfree&lt;/a&gt;, they are as bad as any other nonfree
-software.  Here, however, we are concerned with the problem of the
-server software itself.&lt;/p&gt;
+programs are nonfree&lt;/a&gt;, they are <span class="removed"><del><strong>as 
bad</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>the same sort of 
problem</em></ins></span> as any
+other nonfree software.  Here, however, we are concerned with the
+problem of the server software itself.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Many free software supporters assume that the problem of SaaS will
+&lt;p&gt;Many free software supporters assume that the problem of <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS</em></ins></span> will
 be solved by developing free software for servers.  For the server
 operator's sake, the programs on the server had better be free; if
 they are proprietary, their owners have power over the server.  That's
-unfair to the operator, and doesn't help you at all.  But if the
-programs on the server are free, that doesn't protect you &lt;em&gt;as the
-server's user&lt;/em&gt; from the effects of SaaS.  They give freedom to the
-operator, but not to you.&lt;/p&gt;
+unfair to the operator, and doesn't help <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>you</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>the users</em></ins></span> at all.  But if the
+programs on the server are free, that doesn't protect <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>you &lt;em&gt;as the</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;em&gt;the</em></ins></span> server's <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>user&lt;/em&gt;</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>users&lt;/em&gt;</em></ins></span> from the 
effects of <span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.  They give freedom 
to</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.  These programs 
liberate</em></ins></span> the
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>server</em></ins></span> operator, but not 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>to you.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>the server's users.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;Releasing the server software source code does benefit the
-community: suitably skilled users can set up similar servers, perhaps
-changing the software.  But none of these servers would give you
-control over computing you do on it, unless it's &lt;em&gt;your&lt;/em&gt; 
server.
-The rest would all be SaaS.  SaaS always subjects you to the power of
-the server operator, and the only remedy is, &lt;em&gt;Don't use 
SaaS!&lt;/em&gt;
-Don't use someone else's server to do your own computing on data
-provided by you.&lt;/p&gt;
+community: <span class="inserted"><ins><em>it enables</em></ins></span> 
suitably skilled users <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>can</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>to</em></ins></span> set up similar
+servers, perhaps changing the
+software.  <span class="removed"><del><strong>But</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;a 
href="/licenses/license-recommendations.html"&gt; We
+recommend using the GNU Affero GPL&lt;/a&gt; as the license for programs
+often used on servers.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;But</em></ins></span> none of these servers would give you control 
over computing you
+do on it, unless it's &lt;em&gt;your&lt;/em&gt; server.
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>The rest would</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>It may be OK to trust
+your friend's server for some jobs, just as you might let your friend
+maintain the software on your own computer.  Outside of 
that,</em></ins></span> all
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>these servers would</em></ins></span> be <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.  SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS for you.  SaaSS</em></ins></span> always 
subjects you to
+the power of the server operator, and the only remedy is, &lt;em&gt;Don't
+use <span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS!&lt;/em&gt;</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS!&lt;/em&gt;</em></ins></span>  Don't use 
someone else's server to do your own
+computing on data provided by you.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;h3&gt;Distinguishing SaaS from Other Network Services&lt;/h3&gt;
+&lt;h3&gt;Distinguishing <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS</em></ins></span> from Other Network 
Services&lt;/h3&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Does avoiding SaaS mean you refuse to use any network servers run
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;p&gt;Does avoiding SaaS mean you refuse 
to use any network servers run
 by anyone other than you?  Not at all.  Most servers do not raise this
-issue, because the job you do with them isn't your own computing
-except in a trivial sense.&lt;/p&gt;
+issue, because the job</strong></del></span>
 
-&lt;p&gt;The original purpose of web servers wasn't to do computing for you,
-it was to publish information for you to access.  Even today this is
-what most web sites do, and it doesn't pose the SaaS problem, because
-accessing someone's published information isn't a matter of doing your
-own computing.  Neither is publishing your own materials via a blog
-site or a microblogging service such as Twitter or identi.ca.  The
-same goes for communication not meant to be private, such as chat
-groups.  Social networking can extend into SaaS; however, at root it
-is just a method of communication and publication, not SaaS.  If you
-use the service for minor editing of what you're going to communicate,
-that is not a significant issue.&lt;/p&gt;
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;p&gt;Which online services are SaaSS?  The 
clearest example is a
+translation service, which translates (say) English text into Spanish
+text.  Translating a text for</em></ins></span> you <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>do with them isn't your own</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>is</em></ins></span> computing
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>except in a trivial sense.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;The original purpose of web servers wasn't to</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>that is purely yours.
+You could</em></ins></span> do <span class="removed"><del><strong>computing 
for you,</strong></del></span> it <span class="removed"><del><strong>was to 
publish information</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>by 
running a program on your own computer, if only you
+had the right program.  (To be ethical, that program should be free.)
+The translation service substitutes for that program, so it is Service
+as a Software Substitute, or SaaSS.  Since it denies you control
+over your computing, it does you wrong.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Another clear example is using a service such as Flickr or
+Instagram to modify a photo.  Modifying photos is an activity that
+people have done in their own computers for decades; doing it in a
+server instead of your own computer is SaaSS.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Rejecting SaaSS does not mean refusing to use any network servers
+run by anyone other than you.  Most servers are not SaaSS because the
+jobs they do are not the user's own computing.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;The original idea of web servers wasn't to do computing for you, it
+was to publish information</em></ins></span> for you to access.  Even today 
this is what
+most web sites do, and it doesn't pose the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS</em></ins></span> problem, because
+accessing someone's published information isn't <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>a matter of</strong></del></span> doing your own
+computing.  Neither is publishing your own materials via a blog site
+or a microblogging service such as Twitter or <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>identi.ca.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>StatusNet.  (These
+services may have other problems, of course.)</em></ins></span>  The same goes 
for <span class="inserted"><ins><em>other</em></ins></span>
+communication not meant to be private, such as chat
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>groups.  Social</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>groups.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;In its essence, social</em></ins></span> networking <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>can extend into SaaS; however, at root 
it</strong></del></span> is <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>just</strong></del></span> a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>method</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>form</em></ins></span> of communication and
+publication, not <span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.  If you
+use the</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.  However, 
a service whose main facility is
+social networking can have features or extensions which are SaaSS.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;If a</em></ins></span> service <span class="removed"><del><strong>for 
minor editing of what you're going to communicate,
+that</strong></del></span> is not <span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS, that 
does not mean it is OK.  There are
+other ethical issues about services.  For instance, Facebook
+distributes video in Flash, which pressures users to run nonfree
+software; it requires running nonfree JavaScript code; and it gives
+users</em></ins></span> a <span class="removed"><del><strong>significant 
issue.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>misleading impression of privacy while luring them 
into baring
+their lives to Facebook.  Those are important issues, different from
+the SaaSS issue.
+&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;Services such as search engines collect data from around the web
 and let you examine it.  Looking through their collection of data
 isn't your own computing in the usual sense&mdash;you didn't provide
 that collection&mdash;so using such a service to search the web is not
-SaaS.  (However, using someone else's search engine to implement a
-search facility for your own site &lt;em&gt;is&lt;/em&gt; SaaS.)&lt;/p&gt;
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.  (However,</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.  However,</em></ins></span> using 
someone else's <span class="removed"><del><strong>search 
engine</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>server</em></ins></span> to implement a search
+facility for your own site &lt;em&gt;is&lt;/em&gt; <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.)&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;E-commerce is not SaaS, because the computing isn't solely yours;
-rather, it is done jointly for you and another party.  So there's no
-particular reason why you alone should expect to control that
-computing.  The real issue in e-commerce is whether you trust the
-other party with your money and personal information.&lt;/p&gt;
-
-&lt;p&gt;Using a joint project's servers isn't SaaS because the computing
-you do in this way isn't yours personally.  For instance, if you edit
-pages on Wikipedia, you are not doing your own computing; rather, you
-are collaborating in Wikipedia's computing.&lt;/p&gt;
+&lt;p&gt;E-commerce</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Wikipedia controls its own servers, but groups can face the problem
-of SaaS if they do their group activities on someone else's server.
+&lt;p&gt;Purchasing online</em></ins></span> is not <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS,</em></ins></span> because the computing
+isn't <span class="removed"><del><strong>solely yours;</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;em&gt;your 
own&lt;/em&gt;;</em></ins></span> rather, it is done jointly <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>by and</em></ins></span> for you and <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>another party.  So there's no
+particular reason why you alone should expect to control that
+computing.</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>the store.</em></ins></span>  The real issue 
in <span class="removed"><del><strong>e-commerce</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>online shopping</em></ins></span> is whether you 
trust the
+other party with your money and <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>other</em></ins></span> personal <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>information.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>information (starting
+with your name).&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Repository sites such as as Savannah and SourceForge are not
+inherently SaaSS, because a repository's job is publication of data
+supplied to it.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+
+&lt;p&gt;Using a joint project's servers isn't <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS</em></ins></span> because the computing
+you do in this way isn't <span class="removed"><del><strong>yours 
personally.</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>your 
own.</em></ins></span>  For instance, if you edit pages on
+Wikipedia, you are not doing your own computing; rather, you are
+collaborating in Wikipedia's <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>computing.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Wikipedia</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>computing.  Wikipedia</em></ins></span> controls its 
own
+servers, but <span class="removed"><del><strong>groups can 
face</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>organizations as 
well as individuals encounter</em></ins></span> the
+problem of <span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS</em></ins></span> if they do their <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>group activities on someone else's server.
 Fortunately, development hosting sites such as Savannah and
 SourceForge don't pose the SaaS problem, because what groups do there
 is mainly publication and public communication, rather than their own
 private computing.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Multiplayer games are a group activity carried out on someone
-else's server, which makes them SaaS.  But where the data involved is
+&lt;p&gt;Multiplayer games are a group activity carried out 
on</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>computing 
in</em></ins></span> someone else's <span class="removed"><del><strong>server, 
which makes them SaaS.  But where the data involved is
 just the state of play and the score, the worst wrong the operator
 might commit is favoritism.  You might well ignore that risk, since it
 seems unlikely and very little is at stake.  On the other hand, when
 the game becomes more than just a game, the issue changes.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;p&gt;&ldquo;Backend as a Service&rdquo;, 
or BaaS, is a kind of SaaS, because it
-involves running your own web service on top of software that you
-can't control.  If you set up a service using BaaS, the BaaS platform
-may well collect information about your users as well as 
you.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
-
 &lt;p&gt;Which online services are SaaS?  Google Docs is a clear example.
 Its basic activity is editing, and Google encourages people to use it
 for their own editing; this is SaaS.  It offers the added feature of
 collaborative editing, but adding participants doesn't alter the fact
 that editing on the server is SaaS.  (In addition, Google Docs is
-unacceptable because it installs a
-large <span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;a 
href="/philosophy/javascript-trap.html"&gt;</em></ins></span> nonfree 
JavaScript <span class="removed"><del><strong>program</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>program&lt;/a&gt;</em></ins></span>
-into the <span class="removed"><del><strong>users' 
browsers.)</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>user's 
browser.)</em></ins></span>  If using a service for communication or
+unacceptable because it installs a large nonfree JavaScript program
+into the users' browsers.)  If using a service for communication or
 collaboration requires doing substantial parts of your own computing
 with it too, that computing is SaaS even if the communication is
-not.&lt;/p&gt;
+not.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span>
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>server.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
-&lt;p&gt;Some sites offer multiple services, and if one is not SaaS, another
-may be SaaS.  For instance, the main service of Facebook is social
-networking, and that is not SaaS; however, it supports third-party
-applications, some of which may be SaaS.  Flickr's main service is
-distributing photos, which is not SaaS, but it also has features for
-editing photos, which is SaaS.&lt;/p&gt;
-
-&lt;p&gt;Some sites whose main service is publication and communication
-extend it with &ldquo;contact management&rdquo;: keeping track of
-people you have relationships with.  Sending mail to those people for
-you is not SaaS, but keeping track of your dealings with them, if
-substantial, is SaaS.&lt;/p&gt;
-
-&lt;p&gt;If a service is not SaaS, that does not mean it is OK.  There are
-other bad things a service can do.  For instance, Facebook distributes
-video in Flash, which pressures users to run nonfree software, and it
-gives users a misleading impression of privacy.  Those are important
-issues too, but this article's concern is the issue of SaaS.&lt;/p&gt;
-
-&lt;p&gt;The IT industry discourages users from considering these
-distinctions.  That's what the buzzword &ldquo;cloud computing&rdquo;
-is for.  This term is so nebulous that it could refer to almost any
-use of the Internet.  It includes SaaS and it includes nearly
-everything else.  The term only lends itself to uselessly broad
+&lt;p&gt;Some sites offer multiple services, and if one is not <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS,</em></ins></span>
+another may be <span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.</em></ins></span>  For instance, the 
main service of Facebook is
+social networking, and that is not <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS;</em></ins></span> however, it supports
+third-party applications, some of which <span class="removed"><del><strong>may 
be SaaS.</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>are 
SaaSS.</em></ins></span>  Flickr's main
+service is distributing photos, which is not <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS,</em></ins></span> but it also has
+features for editing photos, which is <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Some sites whose main service</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.  Likewise, using
+Instagram to post a photo</em></ins></span> is <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>publication and communication
+extend</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>not SaaSS, but 
using</em></ins></span> it <span class="removed"><del><strong>with 
&ldquo;contact management&rdquo;: keeping track</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>to transform the
+photo is SaaSS.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Google Docs shows how complex the evaluation</em></ins></span> of 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>a single service
+can become.  It invites</em></ins></span> people <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>you have relationships with.  Sending 
mail</strong></del></span> to <span class="removed"><del><strong>those 
people</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>edit a document by 
running a
+large &lt;a href="/philosophy/javascript-trap.html"&gt;nonfree JavaScript
+program&lt;/a&gt;, clearly wrong.  However, it offers an API</em></ins></span> 
for
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>you</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>uploading
+and downloading documents in standard formats.  A free software editor
+can do so through this API.  This usage scenario</em></ins></span> is not 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS, but keeping track 
of</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS, because
+it uses Google Docs as a mere repository.  Showing all</em></ins></span> your 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>dealings with them, if
+substantial,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>data to a
+company</em></ins></span> is <span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;If</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>bad, but 
that is a matter of privacy, not SaaSS; depending
+on</em></ins></span> a service <span class="inserted"><ins><em>for access to 
your data</em></ins></span> is <span class="removed"><del><strong>not 
SaaS,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>bad, 
but</em></ins></span> that <span class="removed"><del><strong>does not mean 
it</strong></del></span> is <span class="removed"><del><strong>OK.  There are
+other bad things</strong></del></span> a <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>matter of
+risk, not SaaSS.  On the other hand, using the</em></ins></span> service <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>can do.  For instance, Facebook distributes
+video</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>for converting
+document formats &lt;em&gt;is&lt;/em&gt; SaaSS, because it's something you 
could
+have done by running a suitable program (free, one hopes)</em></ins></span> in 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>Flash,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>your own
+computer.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Using Google Docs through a free editor is rare, of course.  Most
+often, people use it through the nonfree JavaScript program,</em></ins></span> 
which <span class="removed"><del><strong>pressures users to 
run</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>is
+bad like any</em></ins></span> nonfree <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>software,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>program.  This scenario might involve SaaSS, too;
+that depends on what part of the editing is done in the JavaScript
+program and what part in the server.  We don't know, but since 
SaaSS</em></ins></span>
+and <span class="inserted"><ins><em>proprietary software do similar wrong to 
the user,</em></ins></span> it
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>gives users a misleading impression of 
privacy.  Those are important
+issues too,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>is not
+crucial to know.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;Publishing via someone else's repository does not raise privacy
+issues,</em></ins></span> but <span class="removed"><del><strong>this 
article's concern</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>publishing through Google Docs has a special problem: 
it</em></ins></span>
+is <span class="inserted"><ins><em>impossible even to 
&lt;em&gt;view</em></ins></span> the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>issue</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>text&lt;/em&gt; of a Google Docs document
+in a browser without running the nonfree JavaScript code.  Thus, you
+should not use Google Docs to publish anything&mdash;but the reason
+is not a matter</em></ins></span> of <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
+
+&lt;p&gt;The IT industry discourages users from <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>considering</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>making</em></ins></span> these distinctions.
+That's what the buzzword &ldquo;cloud computing&rdquo; is for.  This
+term is so nebulous that it could refer to almost any use of the
+Internet.  It includes <span class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS and it includes 
nearly
+everything else.</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS 
as well as many other network usage
+practices.  In any given context, an author who writes
+&ldquo;cloud&rdquo; (if a technical person) probably has a specific
+meaning in mind, but usually does not explain that in other articles
+the term has other specific meanings.</em></ins></span>  The term <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>only lends itself</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>leads people to
+generalize about practices they ought</em></ins></span> to <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>uselessly broad
 statements.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;The real meaning of &ldquo;cloud computing&rdquo; is to suggest a
-devil-may-care approach towards your computing.  It says, &ldquo;Don't
-ask questions, just trust every business without hesitation.  Don't
+&lt;p&gt;The real meaning of</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>consider individually.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;If</em></ins></span> &ldquo;cloud computing&rdquo; <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>has a meaning, it</em></ins></span> is <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>to suggest</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>not a way of
+doing computing, but rather a way of thinking about 
computing:</em></ins></span> a
+devil-may-care approach <span class="removed"><del><strong>towards your 
computing.  It</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>which</em></ins></span> says, &ldquo;Don't ask <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>questions, just trust every business without 
hesitation.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>questions.</em></ins></span>  Don't
 worry about who controls your computing or who holds your data.  Don't
 check for a hook hidden inside our service before you swallow
-it.&rdquo; In other words, &ldquo;Think like a sucker.&rdquo; I prefer
-to avoid the term.&lt;/p&gt;
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>it.&rdquo;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>it.
+Trust companies without hesitation.&rdquo;</em></ins></span> In other words, 
<span class="removed"><del><strong>&ldquo;Think like</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&ldquo;Be</em></ins></span> a
+sucker.&rdquo; <span class="removed"><del><strong>I 
prefer</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>A cloud in the 
mind is an obstacle</em></ins></span> to <span class="inserted"><ins><em>clear 
thinking.
+For the sake of clear thinking about computing, let's</em></ins></span> avoid 
the <span class="removed"><del><strong>term.&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> 
<span class="inserted"><ins><em>term
+&ldquo;cloud.&rdquo;&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
-&lt;h3&gt;Dealing with the SaaS Problem&lt;/h3&gt;
+&lt;h3&gt;Dealing with the <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS</em></ins></span> Problem&lt;/h3&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Only a small fraction of all web sites do SaaS; most don't raise
+&lt;p&gt;Only a small fraction of all web sites do <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS;</em></ins></span> most don't raise
 the issue.  But what should we do about the ones that raise it?&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;For the simple case, where you are doing your own computing on data
-in your own hands, the solution is simple: use your own copy of a free software
-application.  Do your text editing with your copy of a free text
-editor such as GNU Emacs or a free word processor.  Do your photo
-editing with your copy of free software such as GIMP.&lt;/p&gt;
-
-&lt;p&gt;But what about collaborating with other individuals?  It may be
-hard to do this at present without using a server.  If you use one,
-don't trust a server run by a company.  A mere contract as a customer
-is no protection unless you could detect a breach and could really
-sue, and the company probably writes its contracts to permit a broad
-range of abuses.  Police can subpoena your data from the company with
-less basis than required to subpoena them from you, supposing the
-company doesn't volunteer them like the US phone companies that
-illegally wiretapped their customers for Bush.  If you must use a
-server, use a server whose operators give you a basis for trust beyond
-a mere commercial relationship.&lt;/p&gt;
+in your own hands, the solution is simple: use your own copy of a free
+software application.  Do your text editing with your copy of a free
+text editor such as GNU Emacs or a free word processor.  Do your photo
+editing with your copy of free software such as <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>GIMP.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;But what</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>GIMP.  
What if there
+is no free program available?  A proprietary program or SaaSS would
+take away your freedom, so you shouldn't use those.  You can contribute
+your time or your money to development of a free replacement.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;What</em></ins></span> about collaborating with other <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>individuals?</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>individuals as a group?</em></ins></span>  It may
+be hard to do this at present without using a <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>server, and your group
+may not know how to run its own</em></ins></span> server.  If you use <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>one,</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>someone else's
+server, at least</em></ins></span> don't trust a server run by a company.  A 
mere
+contract as a customer is no protection unless you could detect a
+breach and could really sue, and the company probably writes its
+contracts to permit a broad range of abuses.  <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Police</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>The state</em></ins></span> can subpoena
+your data from the company <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>along</em></ins></span> with
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>less basis than 
required</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>everyone else's, 
as Obama has
+done</em></ins></span> to <span class="removed"><del><strong>subpoena them 
from you,</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>phone 
companies,</em></ins></span> supposing the company doesn't volunteer them
+like the US phone companies that illegally wiretapped their customers
+for Bush.  If you must use a server, use a server whose operators give
+you a basis for trust beyond a mere commercial relationship.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;However, on a longer time scale, we can create alternatives to
 using servers.  For instance, we can create a peer-to-peer program
@@ -282,51 +440,88 @@
 free software projects to consider this issue in their design.&lt;/p&gt;
 
 &lt;p&gt;In the meantime, if a company invites you to use its server to do
-your own computing tasks, don't yield; don't use SaaS.  Don't buy or
+your own computing tasks, don't yield; don't use <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>SaaS.</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>SaaSS.</em></ins></span>  Don't buy or
 install &ldquo;thin clients&rdquo;, which are simply computers so weak
-they make you do the real work on a server, unless you're
-going to use them with &lt;em&gt;your&lt;/em&gt; server.  Use a real
-computer and keep your data there.  Do your work with your own copy of
-a free program, for your freedom's sake.&lt;/p&gt;
+they make you do the real work on a server, unless you're going to use
+them with &lt;em&gt;your&lt;/em&gt; server.  Use a real computer and keep your
+data there.  Do your <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>work</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>own computing</em></ins></span> with your own copy of 
a free
+program, for your freedom's sake.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;/div&gt;</strong></del></span>
 
 <span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;h3&gt;See also:&lt;/h3&gt;
 &lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="/philosophy/bug-nobody-allowed-to-understand.html"&gt;The
-Bug Nobody is Allowed to Understand&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;</em></ins></span>
-&lt;/div&gt;
+Bug Nobody is Allowed to Understand&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
 
+&lt;/div&gt;&lt;!-- for id="content", starts in the include above 
--&gt;</em></ins></span>
 &lt;!--#include virtual="/server/footer.html" --&gt;
-
 &lt;div id="footer"&gt;
-&lt;p&gt;
-Please send FSF &amp; GNU inquiries to
-&lt;a href="mailto:address@hidden"&gt;&lt;address@hidden&gt;&lt;/a&gt;.  There 
are
-also &lt;a href="/contact/"&gt;other ways to contact&lt;/a&gt; the FSF.
-&lt;br /&gt;
-Please send broken links and other corrections or suggestions to
-&lt;a href="mailto:address@hidden"&gt;&lt;address@hidden&gt;&lt;/a&gt;.
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;p&gt;
+Please</strong></del></span>
+
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;p&gt;Please</em></ins></span> send <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>general</em></ins></span> FSF &amp; GNU inquiries to
+&lt;a href="mailto:address@hidden"&gt;&lt;address@hidden&gt;&lt;/a&gt;.
+There are also &lt;a href="/contact/"&gt;other ways to contact&lt;/a&gt;
+the FSF.
+<span class="removed"><del><strong>&lt;br /&gt;
+Please send broken</strong></del></span>  <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>Broken</em></ins></span> links and other corrections 
or suggestions <span class="inserted"><ins><em>can be sent</em></ins></span>
+to &lt;a <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>href="mailto:address@hidden"&gt;&lt;address@hidden&gt;&lt;/a&gt;.
 &lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Please see
-the &lt;a href="/server/standards/README.translations.html"&gt;Translations
+&lt;p&gt;Please</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>href="mailto:address@hidden"&gt;&lt;address@hidden&gt;&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;&lt;!-- TRANSLATORS: Ignore the original text in this paragraph,
+        replace it with the translation of these two:
+
+        We work hard and do our best to provide accurate, good quality
+        translations.  However, we are not exempt from imperfection.
+        Please send your comments and general suggestions in this regard
+        to &lt;a href="mailto:address@hidden"&gt;
+        &lt;address@hidden&gt;&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
+
+        &lt;p&gt;For information on coordinating and submitting translations of
+        our web pages, see &lt;a
+        href="/server/standards/README.translations.html"&gt;Translations
+        README&lt;/a&gt;. --&gt;
+Please</em></ins></span> see the &lt;a
+href="/server/standards/README.translations.html"&gt;Translations
 README&lt;/a&gt; for information on coordinating and submitting translations
 of this article.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;Copyright &copy; 2010 Richard Stallman
+<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;!-- Regarding copyright, in general, 
standalone pages (as opposed to
+     files generated as part of manuals) on the GNU web server should
+     be under CC BY-ND 3.0 US.  Please do NOT change or remove this
+     without talking with the webmasters or licensing team first.
+     Please make sure the copyright date is consistent with the
+     document.  For web pages, it is ok to list just the latest year the
+     document was modified, or published.
+     
+     If you wish to list earlier years, that is ok too.
+     Either "2001, 2002, 2003" or "2001-2003" are ok for specifying
+     years, as long as each year in the range is in fact a copyrightable
+     year, i.e., a year in which the document was published (including
+     being publicly visible on the web or in a revision control system).
+     
+     There is more detail about copyright years in the GNU Maintainers
+     Information document, www.gnu.org/prep/maintain. --&gt;</em></ins></span>
+
+&lt;p&gt;Copyright &copy; <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>2010</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>2010, 2013</em></ins></span> Richard <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>Stallman
 &lt;br /&gt;
-This page is licensed under a &lt;a rel="license"
+This</strong></del></span> <span class="inserted"><ins><em>Stallman&lt;/p&gt;
+
+&lt;p&gt;This</em></ins></span> page is licensed under a &lt;a rel="license"
 href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nd/3.0/us/"&gt;Creative
-Commons Attribution-NoDerivs 3.0 United States License&lt;/a&gt;.
-&lt;/p&gt;
+Commons Attribution-NoDerivs 3.0 United States <span 
class="removed"><del><strong>License&lt;/a&gt;.
+&lt;/p&gt;</strong></del></span> <span 
class="inserted"><ins><em>License&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-<span class="inserted"><ins><em>&lt;!--#include 
virtual="/server/bottom-notes.html" --&gt;</em></ins></span>
+&lt;!--#include virtual="/server/bottom-notes.html" --&gt;</em></ins></span>
 
 &lt;p&gt;Updated:
 &lt;!-- timestamp start --&gt;
-$Date: 2013/06/06 17:00:37 $
+$Date: 2013/06/18 05:30:00 $
 &lt;!-- timestamp end --&gt;
 &lt;/p&gt;
 &lt;/div&gt;
-
 &lt;/div&gt;
 &lt;/body&gt;
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+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "<strong>On the Internet, proprietary software isn't the only way to lose "
+#| "your freedom.  Software as a Service is another way to let someone else "
+#| "have power over your computing.</strong>"
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+"SaaSS means using a service implemented by someone else as a substitute for "
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+"will probably use the vague and distracting term &ldquo;cloud&rdquo;, which "
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+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "With free software, we, the users, take back control of our computing.  "
+#| "Proprietary software still exists, but we can exclude it from our lives "
+#| "and many of us have done so.  However, we now face a new threat to our "
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+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
+#, fuzzy
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-"With SaaS, the users do not have even the executable file: it is on the "
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+#| msgid ""
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+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "Furthermore, SaaS automatically leads to harmful consequences equivalent "
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+
+#. type: Content of: <p>
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+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "These two issues are often confused, and not only by accident.  Web "
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+#| msgid ""
+#| "Many free software supporters assume that the problem of SaaS will be "
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контактами&rdquo;&nbsp;&mdash; они ведут "
+#~ "записи о людях, с которыми у вас есть 
связи. Отправление сообщений этим "
+#~ "людям&nbsp;&mdash; не программа-услуга, но 
отслеживание ваших переговоров "
+#~ "с ними&nbsp;&mdash; если это 
существенно&nbsp;&mdash; это программа-"
+#~ "услуга."



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