www/philosophy free-digital-society.html

[Pavel Kharitonov]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Pavel Kharitonov <ineiev>       12/09/14 15:58:37

Modified files:
        philosophy     : free-digital-society.html 

Log message:
        Fix typos.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/free-digital-society.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.14&r2=1.15

Patches:
Index: free-digital-society.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/free-digital-society.html,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -b -r1.14 -r1.15
--- free-digital-society.html   10 Jun 2012 08:06:12 -0000      1.14
+++ free-digital-society.html   14 Sep 2012 15:58:24 -0000      1.15
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@
 system, because there is a widespread practice which is not nice. People 
 call the system &ldquo;Linux.&rdquo; Many do, but some people don't, and 
 I hope you'll be one of them. Please, since we started this, since we 
-wrote the biggest piece of the code, please give us equal mention,please
+wrote the biggest piece of the code, please give us equal mention, please
 call the system &ldquo;GNU+Linux,&rdquo; or &ldquo;GNU/Linux.&rdquo;
 It's not much to ask.</p>
 
@@ -655,14 +655,14 @@
 and they will take advantage of it if that's their general desire.</p>
 
 <p>But the other issue with Internet services is that they can take
-control of your computing, and that's not so commonly known. But It's
+control of your computing, and that's not so commonly known. But it's
 becoming more common. There are services that offer to do computing for
 you on data supplied by you&mdash;things that you should do in your own
 computer but they invite you to let somebody else's computer do that
 computing work for you. And the result is you lose control over it. It's
 just as if you used a nonfree program.</p>
 
-<p>Two different scenarios but they lead to the same problem. If you
+<p>Two different scenarios, but they lead to the same problem. If you
 do your computing with a nonfree program&hellip; well, the users don't
 control the nonfree program, it controls the users, which would include
 you. So you've lost control of the computing that's being done. But
@@ -1077,7 +1077,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2012/06/10 08:06:12 $
+$Date: 2012/09/14 15:58:24 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>