www/philosophy words-to-avoid.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       12/04/19 19:52:48

Modified files:
        philosophy     : words-to-avoid.html 

Log message:
        Avoid calling GIMP an "alternative".

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.141&r2=1.142

Patches:
Index: words-to-avoid.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html,v
retrieving revision 1.141
retrieving revision 1.142
diff -u -b -r1.141 -r1.142
--- words-to-avoid.html 14 Mar 2012 01:59:38 -0000      1.141
+++ words-to-avoid.html 19 Apr 2012 19:52:02 -0000      1.142
@@ -578,9 +578,8 @@
 Please avoid using the term &ldquo;photoshop&rdquo; as a verb, meaning
 any kind of photo manipulation or image editing in general.  Photoshop
 is just the name of one particular image editing program, which should
-be avoided since it is proprietary.  There are plenty of free
-alternatives, such as <a href="/software/gimp">GIMP</a>.</p>
-
+be avoided since it is proprietary.  There are plenty of free programs
+for editing images, such as the <a href="/software/gimp">GIMP</a>.</p>
 
 <h4 id="Piracy">&ldquo;Piracy&rdquo;</h4>
 <p>
@@ -783,7 +782,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2012/03/14 01:59:38 $
+$Date: 2012/04/19 19:52:02 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>