www/distros common-distros.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       12/04/15 20:05:38

Modified files:
        distros        : common-distros.html 

Log message:
        More clarification of intro.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/distros/common-distros.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.47&r2=1.48

Patches:
Index: common-distros.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/distros/common-distros.html,v
retrieving revision 1.47
retrieving revision 1.48
diff -u -b -r1.47 -r1.48
--- common-distros.html 15 Apr 2012 18:13:08 -0000      1.47
+++ common-distros.html 15 Apr 2012 20:05:23 -0000      1.48
@@ -42,17 +42,17 @@
 usually firmware to run some device.</p></li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>Here are brief notes about the problems of some popular GNU/Linux
-distributions, listed in alphabetical order.  These notes do not aim
-for completeness; once we know some reasons we can't endorse a certain
-distro, we do not keep looking for all the reasons.
+<p>Here is a list of some popular nonfree GNU/Linux distributions in
+alphabetical order, with brief notes about how they fall short.  We do
+not aim for completeness; once we know some reasons we can't endorse a
+certain distro, we do not keep looking for all the reasons.
 </p>
 
-<p>On the flip side, circumstances might have changed since we last
-updated this page; if you think one of the issues here has been
-addressed, please <a href="mailto:address@hidden";>let us know</a>.
-However, we will study and endorse the distro only if the developers
-ask for our endorsement.</p>
+<p>A distro may have changed since we last updated information about
+it; if you think one of the problems mentioned here has been
+corrected, please <a href="mailto:address@hidden";>let us know</a>.
+However, we will study and endorse a distro only if its developers ask
+for our endorsement.</p>
 
 <!-- Please keep this list sorted, first with all the GNU systems 
      alphabetically, then all the non-GNU systems alphabetically. -->
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2012/04/15 18:13:08 $
+$Date: 2012/04/15 20:05:23 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>