www/philosophy microsoft-new-monopoly.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       10/06/24 16:45:58

Modified files:
        philosophy     : microsoft-new-monopoly.html 

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CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/microsoft-new-monopoly.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.20&r2=1.21

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--- microsoft-new-monopoly.html 24 Jun 2010 16:40:02 -0000      1.20
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@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@
 <p>by <a href="http://www.stallman.org/";><strong>Richard 
Stallman</strong></a></p>
 
 <i>This article was written in July 2005.  Microsoft adopted a
-different policy in 2006, so the specific policies and criticisms on
-this page are only of historical significance.  The overall problem
-remains:
+different policy in 2006, so the specific policies described below and
+the specific criticisms of them are only of historical significance.
+The overall problem remains, however:
 <a 
href="http://www.grokdoc.net/index.php/EOOXML_objections#Patent_rights_to_implement_the_Ecma_376_specification_have_not_been_granted";>
 Microsoft's cunningly worded new policy does not give anyone clear
 permission to implement OOXML.</a>
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
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-$Date: 2010/06/24 16:40:02 $
+$Date: 2010/06/24 16:45:55 $
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