www/philosophy who-does-that-server-really-serv...

[Karl Berry]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Karl Berry <karl>       10/04/02 21:57:22

Modified files:
        philosophy     : who-does-that-server-really-serve.html 

Log message:
        typos, #563002

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/who-does-that-server-really-serve.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.11&r2=1.12

Patches:
Index: who-does-that-server-really-serve.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/who-does-that-server-really-serve.html,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -b -r1.11 -r1.12
--- who-does-that-server-really-serve.html      25 Mar 2010 01:33:29 -0000      
1.11
+++ who-does-that-server-really-serve.html      2 Apr 2010 21:57:13 -0000       
1.12
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
 
 <h3>Distinguishing SaaS from Other Network Services</h3>
 
-<p>Does condemning SaaS mean rejecting all network server?  Not at
+<p>Does condemning SaaS mean rejecting all network servers?  Not at
 all.  Most servers do not raise this issue, because the job you do
 with them isn't your own computing except in a trivial sense.</p>
 
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@
 <p>Which online services are SaaS?  Google Docs is a clear example.
 Its basic activity is editing, and Google encourages people to use it
 for their own editing; this is SaaS.  It offers the added feature of
-collaborative editing. but adding participants doesn't alter the fact
+collaborative editing, but adding participants doesn't alter the fact
 that editing on the server is SaaS.  (In addition, Google Docs is
 unacceptable because it installs a large nonfree JavaScript program
 into the users' browsers.)  If using a service for communication or
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2010/03/25 01:33:29 $
+$Date: 2010/04/02 21:57:13 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>