www/philosophy who-does-that-server-really-serv...

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       10/03/25 01:33:31

Modified files:
        philosophy     : who-does-that-server-really-serve.html 

Log message:
        Minor fixes.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/who-does-that-server-really-serve.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.10&r2=1.11

Patches:
Index: who-does-that-server-really-serve.html
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RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/philosophy/who-does-that-server-really-serve.html,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -b -r1.10 -r1.11
--- who-does-that-server-really-serve.html      24 Mar 2010 17:30:49 -0000      
1.10
+++ who-does-that-server-really-serve.html      25 Mar 2010 01:33:29 -0000      
1.11
@@ -84,9 +84,8 @@
 reader (whose name suggests it's intended to burn people's books) has
 an Orwellian back door that Amazon used in 2009
 to <a 
href="http://www.nytimes.com/2009/07/18/technology/companies/18amazon.html";
->remotely delete</a> many Kindle copies of Orwell's
-books <cite>1984</cite> and <cite>Animal Farm</cite> which people had
-purchased from Amazon.</p>
+>remotely delete</a> Kindle copies of Orwell's books <cite>1984</cite> and
+<cite>Animal Farm</cite> which the users had purchased from Amazon.</p>
 
 <p>SaaS inherently gives the server operator the power to change the
 software in use, or the users' data being operated on.  Once again, no
@@ -128,7 +127,7 @@
 changing the software.  But none of these servers would give you
 control over computing you do on it, unless it's <em>your</em> server.
 The rest would all be SaaS.  SaaS always subjects you to the power of
-the server operator, and the only remedy is, <em>don't use SaaS</em>!
+the server operator, and the only remedy is, <em>don't use SaaS!</em>
 Don't use someone else's server to do your own computing on data
 provided by you.</p>
 
@@ -295,7 +294,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2010/03/24 17:30:49 $
+$Date: 2010/03/25 01:33:29 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>