www/gnu initial-announcement.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       09/12/14 15:55:00

Modified files:
        gnu            : initial-announcement.html 

Log message:
        Clarify introduction.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/gnu/initial-announcement.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.25&r2=1.26

Patches:
Index: initial-announcement.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/gnu/initial-announcement.html,v
retrieving revision 1.25
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -b -r1.25 -r1.26
--- initial-announcement.html   18 Oct 2009 03:12:38 -0000      1.25
+++ initial-announcement.html   14 Dec 2009 15:54:55 -0000      1.26
@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@
 
 <p> This is the original announcement of the GNU Project, posted by
 <a href="http://www.stallman.org/";>Richard Stallman</a> on September
-27th 1983.</p>
+27, 1983.</p>
 
-<p> The history of the GNU Project is in many ways different from this
-initial plan. For example, the beginning was delayed until January,
-1984 and several of the details about <a
-href="/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a> had not yet been
-clarified.</p>
+<p> The actual history of the GNU Project differs in many ways from
+this initial plan. For example, the beginning was delayed until
+January, 1984.  Several of the philosophical concepts
+of <a href="/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a> had not yet
+been clarified.</p>
 
 <h3>Free Unix!</h3>
 
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2009/10/18 03:12:38 $
+$Date: 2009/12/14 15:54:55 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>