[Savannah-cvs] administration/content gnu-content/homepage.txt...

[Sylvain Beucler]

CVSROOT:        /web/administration
Module name:    administration
Changes by:     Sylvain Beucler <Beuc>  08/06/14 22:34:50

Modified files:
        content/gnu-content: homepage.txt page_footer.txt 
        content/nongnu-content: homepage.txt 

Log message:
        First attempt to clarify and update the introduction text, as discussed 
on the list

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/gnu-content/homepage.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.35&r2=1.36
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/gnu-content/page_footer.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.17&r2=1.18
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/nongnu-content/homepage.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.24&r2=1.25

Patches:
Index: gnu-content/homepage.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/administration/administration/content/gnu-content/homepage.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.35
retrieving revision 1.36
diff -u -b -r1.35 -r1.36
--- gnu-content/homepage.txt    17 Nov 2007 16:30:46 -0000      1.35
+++ gnu-content/homepage.txt    14 Jun 2008 22:34:47 -0000      1.36
@@ -1,26 +1,22 @@
-<p>
-This web site (called Savannah) is a central point for development,
-distribution and maintenance of <a 
href="http://www.gnu.org/gnu/thegnuproject.html";>GNU Software</a>.
-</p>
+<p>Welcome to <strong>Savannah</strong>, the software forge for people
+committed to <a href="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html";>Free
+Software</a>:</p>
 
-<p>
-There is a companion site <a
-href="http://savannah.nongnu.org";>savannah.nongnu.org</a>
-where we also host <a
-href="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html";>Free Software</a> projects
-that are not part of the GNU Project, but run on free platforms.
-</p>
+<p><ul>
+<li>We host free project that run on free operating systems and without 
propriatery software</li>
+<li>Our service runs with 100% free software, including <a 
href="/projects/savane-cleanup">itself</a></li>
+<li><a 
href="http://savannah.gnu.org/maintenance/WhyChooseSavannah";>More...</a></li>
+</ul></p>
 
-<p>
-If you would like to use these facilities to host your
-project, then go to the <b>Register new project</b> menu entry that
-is displayed after login.
-</p>
+<p>Savannah aim to be a central point for development, maintenance and
+distribution of <a
+href="http://www.gnu.org/gnu/thegnuproject.html";>GNU Software</a>.
+Plus, for projects that are free but not part of the GNU project we
+provide <a href="http://savannah.nongnu.org/";>savannah.nongnu.org</a>.
 
 <p>
-While there are a few separate documents explaining the usage of
-the site, most of the documentation is included in the pages
-themselves (the place where you are most likely to need it).
+If you would like to use these facilities to host your
+project, then go to the <b>Register new project</b> menu entry.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -31,9 +27,3 @@
 <li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-users";>savannah-users</a>: 
discussion of savannah-announce and any user-oriented topic</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
-
-<p>The software used to run Savannah is being developed by the <a
-href="https://gna.org/projects/savane";>Savane</a> project. The <a
-href="http://www.gnu.org/graphics/meditate.html";>Levitating,
-Meditating, Flute-playing Gnu</a> logo is a GNU GPL'ed image provided
-by the Nevrax Design Team.</p>

Index: gnu-content/page_footer.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/web/administration/administration/content/gnu-content/page_footer.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.17
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -b -r1.17 -r1.18
--- gnu-content/page_footer.txt 17 Nov 2007 16:36:16 -0000      1.17
+++ gnu-content/page_footer.txt 14 Jun 2008 22:34:47 -0000      1.18
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 <span style="float:right">
 <a href="<?php
-echo 'http://git.sv.gnu.org/gitweb/?p=savane-cleanup.git;a=history;f='
+echo 'http://git.sv.gnu.org/gitweb/?p=savane-cleanup.git;a=blob;f='
   . preg_replace(':/usr/src/savane/:', '', 
realpath($_SERVER['SCRIPT_FILENAME']));
 ?>">Source<br />Code</a>
 </span>
 
-Copyright (C) 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007 &nbsp;Free 
Software
+Copyright (C) 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008 &nbsp;Free 
Software
 Foundation, Inc., 51 Franklin Street, Fifth Floor, Boston, MA
 02110-1301, USA
 
@@ -13,3 +13,9 @@
 
 Verbatim copying and distribution of this entire article is
 permitted in any medium, provided this notice is preserved.
+
+<br />
+
+The <a href="http://www.gnu.org/graphics/meditate.html";>Levitating,
+Meditating, Flute-playing Gnu</a> logo is a GNU GPL'ed image provided
+by the Nevrax Design Team.

Index: nongnu-content/homepage.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/web/administration/administration/content/nongnu-content/homepage.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.24
retrieving revision 1.25
diff -u -b -r1.24 -r1.25
--- nongnu-content/homepage.txt 17 Nov 2007 16:33:10 -0000      1.24
+++ nongnu-content/homepage.txt 14 Jun 2008 22:34:50 -0000      1.25
@@ -1,33 +1,21 @@
-<p>
-This web site (called Savannah) is a central point for development,
-distribution and maintenance of <a
-href="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html";>Free Software</a> that runs
-on free operating systems.
-</p>
+<p>Welcome to <strong>Savannah</strong>, the software forge for people
+committed to <a href="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html";>Free
+Software</a>:</p>
 
-<p>
-If you would like to use these facilities to host your
-project, then go to the <b>Register new project</b> menu entry that
-is displayed after login.
-</p>
+<p><ul>
+<li>We host free project that run on free operating systems and without 
propriatery software</li>
+<li>Our service runs with 100% free software, including <a 
href="/projects/savane-cleanup">itself</a></li>
+<li><a 
href="http://savannah.gnu.org/maintenance/WhyChooseSavannah";>More...</a></li>
+</ul></p>
 
-<p>
-If you would like to make your project part of the GNU project, then
-write to <a href="mailto:address@hidden";>address@hidden</a>. An attempt to
-register a project that is not part of the GNU project will also give
-you the opportunity to apply. Before doing this, you should read the
-<a href="http://www.gnu.org/prep/standards_toc.html";>GNU Code
-Standards</a> to find out if your software complies with them and talk
-to your fellow developers about it. The <a
-href="http://www.gnu.org/help/evaluation.html";>GNU Software
-Evaluation Team</a> page will also help you understand the
-philosophical and technical aspects of the GNU project.
-</p>
+<p><strong>Savannah.nongnu.org</strong> is a central point for
+development, maintenance and distribution of <a
+href="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html";>Free Software</a>
+that runs on free operating systems.</p>
 
 <p>
-While there are a few separate documents explaining the usage of
-the site, most of the documentation is included in the pages
-themselves (the place where you are most likely to need it).
+If you would like to use these facilities to host your
+project, then go to the <b>Register new project</b> menu entry.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -39,8 +27,10 @@
 </ul>
 </p>
 
-<p>The software used to run Savannah is being developed by the <a
-href="https://gna.org/projects/savane";>Savane</a> project. The <a
-href="http://www.gnu.org/graphics/meditate.html";>Levitating,
-Meditating, Flute-playing Gnu</a> logo is a GNU GPL'ed image provided
-by the Nevrax Design Team.</p>
+<p>If you would like to make your project part of the GNU project,
+please check the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/help/evaluation.html";>GNU
+Software Evaluation Team</a> to understand the philosophical and
+technical aspects of the GNU project. Before doing this, you should
+read the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/prep/standards_toc.html";>GNU Code
+Standards</a> to find out if your software complies with them and talk
+to your fellow developers about it.</p>