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From: | Zhang Chen |
Subject: | Re: [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Fix typos found by codespell |
Date: | Wed, 2 Nov 2016 09:32:02 +0800 |
User-agent: | Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:45.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/45.3.0 |
On 11/02/2016 01:52 AM, Eric Blake wrote:
On 11/01/2016 12:19 PM, Stefan Weil wrote:Fix also some indefinite articles. Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil <address@hidden> --- I still don't understand the comment in docs/colo-proxy.txt.Me neither.
Which part of the docs/colo-proxy.txt? Perhaps I can explain it more clearly and make the doc better.
+++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ secondary.== Usage == -Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly.+Here, we use demo ip and port describe more clearly. Primary(ip:3.3.3.3): -netdev tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66Maybe: Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more clearly describe the usage. The remaining hunks are clear improvements, so: Reviewed-by: Eric Blake <address@hidden>
It's easier to understand. Reviewed-by: Zhang Chen <address@hidden> -- Thanks zhangchen
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