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Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCHv4] Improve documentation for TLS


From: Eric Blake
Subject: Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCHv4] Improve documentation for TLS
Date: Thu, 7 Apr 2016 14:35:32 -0600
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On 04/07/2016 02:07 PM, Alex Bligh wrote:
> * Call out TLS into a separate section
> 
> * Add details of the TLS protocol itself
> 
> * Emphasise that actual TLS session initiation (i.e. the TLS handshake) can
>   be initiated from either side (as required by the TLS standard I believe
>   and as actually works in practice)
> 
> * Clarify what is a requirement on servers, and what is a requirement on
>   clients, separately, specifying their behaviour in a single place
>   in the document.
> 
> * Document the four possible modes of operation of a server.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Alex Bligh <address@hidden>

> @@ -391,7 +679,10 @@ of the newstyle negotiation.
>  - `NBD_OPT_LIST` (3)
>  
>      Return a number of `NBD_REP_SERVER` replies, one for each export,
> -    followed by `NBD_REP_ACK`.
> +    followed by `NBD_REP_ACK`. The server SHOULD omit entries from this
> +    list if TLS has not been negotiated and either the server is
> +    operating in SELECTIVETLS mode and the entry concerned is a TLS-only
> +    export.

grammar tweak:
s/ and either /, /


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Eric Blake   eblake redhat com    +1-919-301-3266
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org

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