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Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] libcacard: Spelling and grammar fixes in docume


From: Peter Maydell
Subject: Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] libcacard: Spelling and grammar fixes in documentation
Date: Sun, 26 Feb 2012 18:18:04 +0000

On 26 February 2012 13:30, Stefan Weil <address@hidden> wrote:
> @@ -217,10 +217,10 @@ the card using the following functions:
>          VCardStatus vcard_add_applet(VCard *card, VCardApplet *applet);
>
>   Add an applet onto the list of applets attached to the card. Once an applet
> -  has been added, it can be selected by it's aid, and then commands will be
> +  has been added, it can be selected by its aid, and then commands will be

While you're changing this line, it looks like 'aid' here should be 'AID'
(it is capitalised elsewhere in the doc except where referring to a function
parameter name).

>   routed to it VCardProcessAPDU function. This function adopts the applet the
>   passed int applet.

The sentence "This function..." clearly needs correcting as it doesn't
make much sense as it stands, but I'm not sure what it should be changed to.

> Note: 2 applets with the same AID should not be added to
> -  the same card. It's permissible to add more than one applet. Multiple 
> applets
> +  the same card. It is permissible to add more than one applet. Multiple 
> applets
>   may have the same VCardPRocessAPDU entry point.

-- PMM



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