[Gzz-commits] gzz/Documentation/Manuscripts/Paper paper.tex

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

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Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        02/12/01 05:52:52

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Index: gzz/Documentation/Manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex
diff -u gzz/Documentation/Manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.138 
gzz/Documentation/Manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.139
--- gzz/Documentation/Manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.138 Sun Dec  1 05:46:00 2002
+++ gzz/Documentation/Manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex       Sun Dec  1 05:52:51 2002
@@ -156,6 +156,7 @@
 % identity of the focused and connected documents and
 % a more prominent target for tracking movement between views.
 
+In the following sections, XXX Janne
 
 \section{Related work}
 
@@ -251,7 +252,7 @@
 most current computer systems have not been programmed to handle properly,
 and is usually not visualized at all: icons are used to represent different
 file {\em types}, instead of the identities of the actual files.
-Some systems (e.g. KDE) show previews of the files in the icons,
+Some systems (e.g., KDE) show previews of the files in the icons,
 which is useful but is not the same as showing the identity.
 
 % The concept of ``file'', which was developed early in the history
@@ -259,7 +260,7 @@
 
 For instance, consider a published scientific article
 available through several different URLs on the WWW,
-e.g.~both through CiteSeer\cite{XXX}, the ACM portal and
+e.g.,~through ResearchIndex\cite{XXX}, the ACM portal and
 the author's web site. 
 Now, when a user downloads and saves one copy, the relationship between
 the local copy and the original on the WWW is severed, so 
@@ -269,13 +270,13 @@
 When following another link to the same article at a different
 server, the computer has no idea that the article has already been downloaded
 (from another server) by the user, 
-and that the user has annotated\cite{XXX} that version
+and that the user has annotated that version
 of the article.
 The burden of matching the identities and locating the local version, if 
desired, is on the user.
 
 In a system based on identities, all references to the article would be made 
through
 the same identifier. The computer {\em would} know that this is a familiar 
article
-and would also be able to show the user's annotations even in the above case;
+and would also be able to show the user's annotations;
 it would even be possible to show anyone else's published annotations and links
 to the article.