bug#29943: [PATCH] doc: Describe Wayland status.

[Rutger Helling]

Thanks for the review! I updated the patch according to your feedback
and pushed it.

On Sat, 06 Jan 2018 15:16:46 +0100
address@hidden (Ludovic Courtès) wrote:

> Hello!
> 
> Rutger Helling <address@hidden> skribis:
> 
> > From a790d403524df182cdd8aa35931b989234d874cd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00
> > 2001 From: Rutger Helling <address@hidden>
> > Date: Tue, 2 Jan 2018 13:14:09 +0100
> > Subject: [PATCH] doc: Describe Wayland status.
> >
> > * doc/guix.texi (Desktop Services): Add a paragraph about the
> > current status of Wayland in Guix.  
> 
> Good idea!
> 
> > +++ b/doc/guix.texi
> > @@ -45,6 +45,7 @@ Copyright @copyright{} 2017 George address@hidden
> >  Copyright @copyright{} 2017 Andy address@hidden
> >  Copyright @copyright{} 2017 Arun address@hidden
> >  Copyright @copyright{} 2017 nee
> > +Copyright @copyright{} 2018 Rutger address@hidden  
> 
> You need @* on the line before yours, but not on yours (it introduces
> a linebreak).
> 
> > +The desktop environments in Guix use X11 by default. If you'd like
> > to  
> 
> s/X11/the Xorg display server/ (in an attempt not to assume a too
> technical audience.)
> 
> Also, please always put two spaces after an end-of-sentence period, to
> ensure proper rendering.
> 
> > +use the more modern display server protocol called Wayland, you
> > need  
> 
> s/more modern/newer/  :-)
> 
> > +to use the @code{sddm-service} instead of the @code{slim-service}
> > for +the graphical login manager. You should then select the ``GNOME
> > +(Wayland)'' session in SDDM. Currently only GNOME has support for
> > +Wayland.  
> 
> Otherwise LGTM, thanks!
> 
> Ludo’.

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