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01/01: website: Add minor changes to the 1.0.1 post.

From: Ricardo Wurmus
Subject: 01/01: website: Add minor changes to the 1.0.1 post.
Date: Fri, 17 May 2019 09:34:52 -0400 (EDT)

rekado pushed a commit to branch master
in repository guix-artwork.

commit c1f902898cb595b065c871770c25edb4c3113219
Author: Ricardo Wurmus <address@hidden>
Date:   Fri May 17 15:33:32 2019 +0200

    website: Add minor changes to the 1.0.1 post.
    * website/posts/ Change minor issues with
    the wording.
 website/posts/ | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/posts/ 
index 26651fb..1914756 100644
--- a/website/posts/
+++ b/website/posts/
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ the graphical installer for the standalone system:
     start]( in the installation
     image, thereby breaking network access; this is now fixed.
   - The installer [now]( allows
-    you to toggle password and passphrase visibility, and it [no
+    you to toggle the visibility of passwords and passphrases, and it [no
     longer]( restricts their
   - The installer [can now
@@ -83,9 +83,9 @@ all the usual GNU/Linux commands—`ls`, `grep`, `ps`, 
etc.—were _not_ in
 `$PATH`.  That in turn would also prevent Xfce from starting, if you
 chose that desktop environment for your system.
-We quickly published in the [system installation
+We quickly published a note in the [system installation
-a note explaining how to work around the issue:
+explaining how to work around the issue:
   - First, install packages that provide those commands, along with the
     text editor of your choice (for example, `emacs` or `vim`):
@@ -151,13 +151,13 @@ work as expected, but some of them [specifically test 
 installing to a RAID or encrypted device, with a separate `/home`, using
 Btrfs, etc.  These tests even run on our [continuous integration
-service]( (search for the
+service]( (search for the
 “tests.*” jobs there).
 Unfortunately, those installation tests target the so-called [“manual”
-which is scriptable.  They do _not_ test installer’s graphical user
+which is scriptable.  They do _not_ test the installer’s graphical user
 interface.  Consequently, testing the user interface (UI) itself was a
 manual process.  Our attention was, presumably, focusing more on UI
 aspects since—so we thought—the actual installation tests were already

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