[lsd0004] branch master updated: improve English

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     new 2a76b57  improve English
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commit 2a76b576c567f1b6cdf83feea154132142772e9e
Author: Christian Grothoff <grothoff@gnunet.org>
AuthorDate: Sun Aug 20 17:47:25 2023 +0200

    improve English
---
 draft-schanzen-r5n.xml | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
index 4487a9a..441d700 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
@@ -990,8 +990,8 @@ BEGIN
            This bit indicates that each peer along the way should process the 
request.
             If the bit is not set, intermediate peers only route the message 
and only
             peers which consider themselves closest to the key look for answers
-            in their local storage for <tt>GetMessage</tt>s and cache the
-                 block in their local storage for <tt>PutMessage</tt>s and 
<tt>ResultMessage</tt>s.
+            in their local storage for <tt>GetMessage</tt>s, or respectively 
cache the
+           block in their local storage for <tt>PutMessage</tt>s and 
<tt>ResultMessage</tt>s.
           </dd>
           <dt>1: RecordRoute</dt>
           <dd>
@@ -1000,13 +1000,14 @@ BEGIN
           </dd>
           <dt>2: FindApproximate</dt>
           <dd>
-            This bit allows results where the key does not match exactly.
+            This bit asks peers to return results even if the <em>key</em>
+           does not exactly match the query hash.
           </dd>
           <dt>3: Truncated</dt>
           <dd>
             This is a special flag which is set if a peer truncated the path
             and thus the first hop on the path is given without a signature
-            to enable checking of the next signature. MUST never be set in
+            to enable checking of the next signature. This flag MUST never be 
set in
             a query.
           </dd>
           <dt>4-15: Reserved</dt>
@@ -1033,7 +1034,7 @@ BEGIN
 0     8     16    24    32    40    48    56
 +-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+
 |                  SIGNATURE                    |
-|                  (64 byte)                    |
+|                  (64 bytes)                   |
 |                                               |
 |                                               |
 |                                               |
@@ -1042,7 +1043,7 @@ BEGIN
 |                                               |
 +-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+
 |                  PEER ID                      |
-|                  (32 byte)                    |
+|                  (32 bytes)                   |
 |                                               |
 |                                               |
 +-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+

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