[lsd0001] branch master updated: fix English

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     new 6516229  fix English
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commit 6516229db4b593de20eb0558e93a22fd8b0f504f
Author: Christian Grothoff <christian@grothoff.org>
AuthorDate: Sat Jul 1 00:33:39 2023 +0200

    fix English
---
 draft-schanzen-gns.xml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index 25a9e00..06e70be 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -2547,7 +2547,7 @@ NICK: john (supplemental)
          <t>
            In terms of crypto-agility, whenever the need for an updated 
cryptographic
            scheme arises to, for example, replace ECDSA over Ed25519 for
-           PKEY records it can simply be introduced
+           PKEY records, it can simply be introduced
            through a new record type.
            Zone administrators can then replace
            the delegation record type for future records.
@@ -2603,7 +2603,7 @@ NICK: john (supplemental)
            of the last published resource block.  Implementations 
<bcp14>MAY</bcp14> define
            and use a special record type as a tombstone that preserves the last
            absolute expiration time, but then <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> take care to 
not publish a
-           block with this record.
+           block with such a tombstone record.
            When new records are added under this label later, the 
implementation
            <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> ensure that the expiration times are after the 
last published
            block.
@@ -2625,7 +2625,7 @@ NICK: john (supplemental)
            incorporate rules in order to mitigate it.
          </t>
          <t>
-           Further, DNS can be used to combat illegal content on the internet
+           Further, DNS can be used to combat illegal content on the Internet
            by having the respective domains seized by authorities.
            However, the same mechanisms can also be abused in order to impose
            state censorship.

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