[taler-marketing] branch master updated: -address FIXMEs, typo

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commit 81d5aef14ecd68096ebab19fc9649885686fdb23
Author: Christian Grothoff <christian@grothoff.org>
AuthorDate: Fri Jan 28 17:24:51 2022 +0100

    -address FIXMEs, typo
---
 2022-privacy/privacy.tex | 8 ++------
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2022-privacy/privacy.tex b/2022-privacy/privacy.tex
index f7c03cc..1c78d4e 100644
--- a/2022-privacy/privacy.tex
+++ b/2022-privacy/privacy.tex
@@ -116,10 +116,6 @@ crypto-currencies include the various proprietary 
crypto-trading platforms as
 well as distributed layer-2 solutions like the Lightning
 network~\cite{lightening}.
 
-%There are two sentences starting with "the rest of this paper" in this 
paragraph
-%Both are wrong. But this is the wronger one
-%In the rest of this paper we will focus on the design principles for a Central
-%Bank Digital Currency (CBDC).
 There are two types of CBDCs, retail CBDCs and
 wholesale CBDCs. Wholesale CBDC is expected to be primarily used to trade
 between banks and between the central bank and banks. An example of wholesale
@@ -130,7 +126,7 @@ National Bank~\cite{BISHelvetia2020}.\footnote{We note that 
the French report
 contrast, a retail CBDC is intended to be used by citizens and businesses in
 their daily lives for their ordinary expenses, basically providing a form of
 digital cash that is, like physical cash, a liability of the central bank.
-The rest of this paper will concentrate on retail CBDCs.  Our discussion will
+This paper is about retail CBDCs.  Our discussion will
 assume that the currency for the CBDC already exists, and thus focus on the
 requirements for the payment system that facilitates ordinary people to make
 digital transactions with such a currency.
@@ -520,7 +516,7 @@ inspired by~\cite{dold2019}, given in order of priority:
     it is conceivable that specific rules and regulations may be modified to
     accomodate a CBDC, it is inconceivable that states would relax the rules
     to the point where businesses receiving income are not held accountable
-    for their actions, especially as there seems to be a broad consensuse that
+    for their actions, especially as there seems to be a broad consensus that
     levying of taxes based on economic activity is beneficial to society.
 
   \item \textbf{A CBDC must prevent payment fraud.}

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